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My Mind
im gonna give you my opinion on life and its many hardships ALSO I WRITE ALL MY OWN POETRY PEOPLE !!!
My Hero and Angel


The heart of stone softned to the core
cause im able to tell you things i couldnt before

you said you knew me but not like this
the demons i hide my heart my abyss

and all the pain you suffered through
just to move to someone new

to change my mind and be back with you
because now i believe my feelings are true

and yet you take me sins and all
you take me though calamity might befall

is it real love or a game we play
just wishing it wont just go away

cause i dont want you to slip through me once again
cause im done playin coy baby no more pretend






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crystalclear2468
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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 18, 2007 @ 01:01am
thats so thoughtful and meaningful...


commentCommented on: Wed Apr 18, 2007 @ 01:12am
wow awsome poem so good!
your a really talented writer this is wicked good!! 3nodding



swimmer64
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The Totally Unloved One!
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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 18, 2007 @ 01:41am
it made me think of something i haven't thought about in years, and i'm glad i did.
i can fix me life now.......well a small section. sweatdrop
it's really good. i love it. heart


commentCommented on: Sun Apr 29, 2007 @ 01:25am
although sad its true. right now i was thinkin that but in but not in a poem. ALthough harsh an mean; true, right and beautifully said in this poem.



Isiux
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