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Poems
im a writer so i luv writing poems and short stories...usually about love...so plz tell me wat u think about the poems
how can i?
i didnt know it was possible to feel like this
so sure yet so lost
so happy yet so sad
love shouldnt be this hard
things are never simple, this is true
but y should i feel this much pain?
is one moment with you too much to ask for?
is happiness really a countless number of miles away?
how can i reach u?
when i dont have the words to say how i feel
how can i show u how i feel?
when there is so much distance between us
how can i make u happy?
i cant even make myself happy
i cant be with u
all i can do is say those three words
three words that are supposed to show u how i feel
do they cover it tho?
can they explain how much i miss u when we cant talk?
can they explain how much it hurts knowing that i cant see u
all i can do is say those three words, not
i <3 u, and not
i luv u, not even
i love uuuuuuuuuuuu, simply
i love you





Ciel Rouge4
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    Dead Nia
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    commentCommented on: Tue Jan 30, 2007 @ 06:39pm
    dats nice, oh by da way im Eva's best friend. smilies/icon_4laugh.gif she told me about u, n she liks u but im not suppose 2 tell u smilies/icon_xp.gif oops my big mouth


    commentCommented on: Tue Jan 30, 2007 @ 06:49pm
    dat was so sweet, i love ur poem. i like readin poems. so.... would u write another one. plzzzzzzz, i wanna read another. smilies/icon_4laugh.gif

    ps. Niala, u better b dead or else, ill kill u 4 tellin him.



    Ms_ Evalicious
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    ~Dreams of Eternity~
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    commentCommented on: Mon Feb 19, 2007 @ 03:54am
    Simply beautiful.

    ~Dreams of Eternity~


    commentCommented on: Wed Mar 07, 2007 @ 02:21pm
    wow it was ok but im no artist



    MexicanGurl101
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    aloha52
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    commentCommented on: Sat Mar 10, 2007 @ 08:12pm
    i also said i like writing poems so ya. so once i had a bf. so i made a poem for him and right after that he broke up with me but it went like this.

    roses are red
    violets are blue
    i love you so much
    i want to be with you
    forever for life, forever for death
    forever day, forever night
    you are the light that brings me to life.

    it is pritty short but ya.

    but it doesn't mean anythign anymore.


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