"I CAN'T LEAVE YET"
He screams slaming his fists on the hard door. The door smashed shut as he cried and lowered to the ground. His long red coat touching the ground as the blood from his wounds splatered on the cold floor. "I won't leave you, I can't leave you I love you." At that moment something appeared a bright light and suddenly it was he nothing else but her and again he found the courage and the strength to move on. He got to his feet, his cold steel sword, Ifirit, in his had as he jammed it inbetween the door jam and pryed it open. "I won't leave you, you give me hope and the will to live I will die for your safty"
This is a story idea I have this is just a part of it but what do you guys think?
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I wanted you to know that I love the way you laugh I wanna hold you high and steal your pain...I keep your photograph and I know it serves me well I wanna hold your high and steal you pain!
There must be an angel with a smile on her face, when she thought up that I should be with you. But its time to face the truth, I will never be with you
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There must be an angel with a smile on her face, when she thought up that I should be with you. But its time to face the truth, I will never be with you
the bouncing souls rock!!!!
Frank Castle is The Punisher
Christian Bale is the greatest batman ever!
Please look at my journal and tell me what you think of my story idea?
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