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The mind of a writer
yea I will post my stories and my poems in here if you don't like them that's fine whatever.
The Screaming Momentum
"I CAN'T LEAVE YET"

He screams slaming his fists on the hard door. The door smashed shut as he cried and lowered to the ground. His long red coat touching the ground as the blood from his wounds splatered on the cold floor. "I won't leave you, I can't leave you I love you." At that moment something appeared a bright light and suddenly it was he nothing else but her and again he found the courage and the strength to move on. He got to his feet, his cold steel sword, Ifirit, in his had as he jammed it inbetween the door jam and pryed it open. "I won't leave you, you give me hope and the will to live I will die for your safty"

This is a story idea I have this is just a part of it but what do you guys think?






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SmalLiberty
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commentCommented on: Wed Nov 29, 2006 @ 05:01am
I like it, I think it's good, and I want to read the rest biggrin


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