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DeemLoveAngel's Journal:The legend of the demon V.S Angels palace war
i am Deem and i will give you details on well my real life (rarely) and my gaia life (OFTon)and i will give you history about Deem and how i thought of this character and his history
Kochira wa Amerika no hon (lol)
"Sumimasen, Sel-kun?", Deem asked
"Hai?", Sel replied.
"Ohayo gozaimasu!!! O-genki desu ka?"
Sel yawned for a moment. "Genki desu,ka?...Wait why the ******** are we speaking Japanese? We're not even Nippon-jin or Nihon-jin!"
"Correction Sel I'm not Nippon-jin, I'm Amerika-jin and you're half Nippon-jin"
"A so desu ka?"
"That's right"
There was a moment of awkward silence between the two.
"Lets just go" They both said in unison.

Deem and Sel walked out of the Japanese hotel and were on their way to get something to eat. Deem's stomach was aching, "Man I'm hungry arn't you sel?" Selscol shook his head no, "Unlike some of us I ate at the hoteru." Deem scratched his head with confusion, "The what?" Selscol just shook his head again and put his fingers infront of his face. "The hotel genius."
"Oh that hotel,they had food there !?" Sel stared at Deem for a second and finally said... "Ha!,you obviously can't read Japanese can you?" Deem shrugged as if he wasn't trying to deny it, "What gives you that conclusion?" Deem said low as if he didn't want anyone around to hear the conversation. Selscol rolled his eyes.
"I dunno the fact there were about twelve, sushi, eel, sashimi, and tenpura signs in the hotel!", Selscol said sarcastically so he could notify Deem that he couldn't read and he knew it. Deem rubbed the back of his head, "Hey maybe I don't like thoes types of foods."
"Just admit it you're one of the many among the Japanese illiterate." Selscol chucked out insultingly. Deem rolled his eyes, "What are you talking about I can read Japanese in Roman letters." selscol looked down and nodded "Well sorry to tell you Deem... but it's not the same as Kanji." Deem's mouth dropped, "What? are you serious, how am I supposed to survive if I can't read" Just as Deem said that, a girl with blackish bluish hair bumped into Sel "uh." The school girl dropped her books "...Shitsurei shimasu." Deem offered his hand to help the girl up, "No excuse me and you'd have to excuse my freind over there, he's rude and unattractive plus to top it all off he snores." Deem whispered so Sel wouldn't here. Selscol gave Deem a cold look as if he knew exactly what Deem was saying. Sel tapped Deem on the shoulder "I don't think she speaks english" he said quietly to Deem so the girl couldn't hear, then the girl gave Deem and Sel a queer look "Ya know I do speak English, but that's not exactly the reason I'm staring at you so weird. The reason is that..." She pointed to what was hooked on Deem's rear pants and what was on sel's back "well the reason is, Sel you have a chain sword and a defender blade and you Deem-san have two automatic katanas that flip open and shoot."

"How the heck did she know that!?", said Deem and Sel in Unison.

The girl took out Deem's katana and waved it out in public to show that they might as well walk around town doing that. "Do you not see how obvious it is that you guys have weapons. You're not even trying to conceal them." She stated. Deem was just standing there quiet watching her talk and wave around his katana then Deem finally realized that what she was doing might have been illegal so he snatched away the katana from her. "Are you crazy!? Your silly antics can get me in trouble." Sel interrupted, "Us in trouble" ,The girl gave Deem back his arsenal "Very well than, Sayonara.""Was that weird or what sel?", Deem said to Sel with conviction but sel just shrigged "Heh. It's japan"
Deem and Sel were walking threw Oosaka "..So sel since I can only read Roman letters what do you suggest I do?" Sel reeled off the list of options that Deem could possibly use. "You could ,one, learn how to read japanese. Two get someone to read it for you and not me. Or you could move to a big city in Japan where they probably might use that style of writing, some where like the capital of Japan, some where like-"
"TOKYO!!!" The twelve year old girl that they met before popped up behind Deem and inturrupted Sel.

"Oh not her again..." Sel and Deem said
Crecdit
Writer biggrin eemloveAngel
Editor and co writer: Selscol
Artist (the actual manga will be comming soon and I'll post it in my journal): ~[Art]~






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DeemLoveAngel
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 14, 2006 @ 04:35am
if there are any questions you have art just ask me about like the expressions that the characters have and some scenes and stuff k?


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 14, 2006 @ 04:36am
Good Job on your Japanesse Deem-san.
You need to work on your spelling though.
^_^
There is a big diffrents in
Ojisan and Ojiisan
Ojisan=Uncle
Ojiisan=Old man or Grandfather
the more Vowels that are in it the diffent ir sounds.
Ohayoo gozaimasu sounds diffrent then
Ohayo gozaimasu.
But other then that I am impressed.
^_^
You have learned much sence the last time we talked about Japanesse language.
^_^
Keep up and you will be speaking it as if you knew it your whole life.
~Chi



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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 14, 2006 @ 04:39am
Yeah nice story.


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 14, 2006 @ 04:54am
*starts to cry*thank-you cry I'm so proud my japanese is improving scream yeah scream yeah



DeemLoveAngel
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 14, 2006 @ 05:30am
awsome!!!!! more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 14, 2006 @ 10:22pm
AWW BUT I LIKED THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~pouts~



Mitsukai Hakume
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 14, 2006 @ 10:26pm
tis okay. it's not over yet...they're's more to come next week on




Demon's GRave


Bwhaahahaa


commentCommented on: Tue Aug 15, 2006 @ 03:16am
nice story keep it up ^^



yuna_summouner
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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 15, 2006 @ 11:43pm
Damn you and your wirting skills!! crying
That really good. I will need for you guys to pick an out fit though, its hard to do character outlines with you both changeing every few days.
I did try some Bleach style art and I'll send it to you in the next few days if I get around to it.
And if you want to indicate that some one is useing japanesse and you don't know how to say it you could use "< .... >" as brakets. I really don't thing the normal, america, manga reader will know that much Japanesse. ((.... @.@; ))


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 16, 2006 @ 02:56am
Yeah, seriously... But how can you pick out an outfit? Are you just going to draw something that suits us and see if we like it?



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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 16, 2006 @ 03:32am
aww they can use context clues and for Deem his close would be

1.snow boarding Gloves (obviously)

2. A short sleave button shirt (but make it unbuttoned) and undernethe it have a white T-shirt

3.shorts that are lightly shaded with gray pencil( rolleyes I know it says that Deem has pants in the story but I didn't feel like putting pants on him. and remember never color manga evil )

4. and no shoes or socks and try not to make Deem's hair so stiff try to make the top of it a little rounder than it is on gaia.

5. remember to make they're heads a little rounder when they are kids

if you think it's good now then you should wait til later because that was when I was listening to my Fma CD. and I have to thank sel for the editing.


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 16, 2006 @ 04:06am
1.Make his hair go down, none of that Sora (from KH) and Cloud (from FF) stuff.
2.His hair should just be black.
3.He should just wear a normal black shirt that goes down to his wrist.
4.As for his pants they should be the ones my avi has.
5.Just give him normal sneakers but make'em black XP. Sorry I like black.
6.Oh yeah, he has a ring on his left middle finger. It's nothing speacial, just a normal round ring with nothing on it.
7.Don't make his hair too long. Make sure it goes a through his eyes though.

This ok?



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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 16, 2006 @ 04:09am
oh and don't forget the Goggles. they have to be on his head but when he's fighting make sure they're around his neck and remember he barely wears them. but when he does make sure it's when he's really made and going to kick some a**. k. thx


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 16, 2006 @ 04:13am
oh yeah and make sure when Deem's hair goes over his eyes or eyebrows or anything else. make it real-a-listic. see what I'm trying to say is when Deem's hair goes over his Ear (example) make sure it blocks some of his ear off don't make his eyebrows or ears go threw his hair. that's fake. Cheasy. and annoying to me -_-' thank you



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commentCommented on: Thu Aug 17, 2006 @ 11:10pm
oh and no Cat ears


commentCommented on: Thu Aug 17, 2006 @ 11:26pm
Mmmk, I wont have time to do it tomarow but I may get a chance to do the first outlines on sunday and Send then to you. What do you want the girl to look like? Like the chick from Bleach, I'm guessing?



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commentCommented on: Thu Aug 17, 2006 @ 11:39pm
hell ya. that b***h is hot, but make her have like a pony tail.


commentCommented on: Thu Aug 17, 2006 @ 11:58pm
She's not that hot. -_-;



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DeemLoveAngel
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 18, 2006 @ 12:02am
Beats you and you're legs by a mile heart blaugh 3nodding


commentCommented on: Fri Aug 18, 2006 @ 12:13am
your such a b*****d-o crying crying



~[ART]~
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 18, 2006 @ 12:23am
*hugs you* aww I love. I'm sorry heart


commentCommented on: Fri Aug 18, 2006 @ 12:27am
*snif snif* *cough* b*****d-o*cough*



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DeemLoveAngel
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 18, 2006 @ 12:54am
hey don't call me that crying


commentCommented on: Fri Aug 18, 2006 @ 01:02am
I do what I want. ninja :XP: *hugs*



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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 18, 2006 @ 01:24am
*squeases you wile you're hugging me* no you don't evil


commentCommented on: Fri Aug 18, 2006 @ 01:31am
*puts dagger to just infront of your face.* Yes I do, hun.



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DeemLoveAngel
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 18, 2006 @ 01:43am
okay so maybe you do. but do you mind if me and hakume make out in the story?


commentCommented on: Tue Aug 22, 2006 @ 12:50am
I don't care. Any waye, sense my mouse problem has come out to be a bastered. I'll ask my friend when I see her on wends to scann the first sceches and I'll try and send them to you.



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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 22, 2006 @ 01:56am
thanks and oh you're in the story. blaugh psss.... ninja is it okay if you beat Me up? or like you and Hakume get in a fight?


commentCommented on: Tue Aug 22, 2006 @ 09:12pm
What ever you want, its your story. ^^



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DeemLoveAngel
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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 22, 2006 @ 09:24pm
that's what sel says crying


commentCommented on: Tue Aug 22, 2006 @ 09:32pm
Well its true. ^^



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commentCommented on: Thu Aug 31, 2006 @ 04:19am
your mother is true to me...in bed wink


commentCommented on: Sat Sep 02, 2006 @ 10:15pm
mrgreen And I hope you both get aids. mrgreen



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commentCommented on: Tue Sep 05, 2006 @ 05:20am
no I mean she likes to tell me the truth in bed. you sicko


commentCommented on: Fri Sep 08, 2006 @ 12:58am
I still hope you both get aids.



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commentCommented on: Mon Nov 20, 2006 @ 07:30pm
hey kingsle ninja nice journal


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