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A sonnet i made....let me know if you like it :)
If love be blood, then i shall bleed till death
If love be blood, then im the vampire seeking new blood
If love be power and greed, what awaits is death
If love be water, then im the rising flood
If loves through sight, then it may not be found
If love be fire, then i shall burn for eternity
If loves through sight, your feelings end in the ground
Finding love is hard and also a rarity
Loves not a game nor gift but part of life
To understand this you must have seen through my eyes
That everyone is looking for that husband or right wife
They mite not be around yet you can still visualize
Once you find that right one it'll be the best
You'll end up happy from this day till your rest!





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    sgt.Frosty
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    commentCommented on: Sat Jun 17, 2006 @ 09:57pm
    well,i'm no poet myself but this was really good. smilies/icon_3nodding.gif


    commentCommented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 03:30am
    smilies/icon_3nodding.gif Tis spiffy. Did you have to write it for something?



    serenemercury
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    Chaparritaflaquita21
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    commentCommented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 05:37am
    That was a really great post. I understand your feelings on this subject. It's not easy finding the right one in life with everyone playing mind games but in the end the right person comes around to sweep you off your feet for all eternity. smilies/icon_heart.gif


    commentCommented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 07:07am
    Whoa... that's good.
    Better than all the crap I write in my spare time.
    Faaaar better smilies/icon_3nodding.gif



    a Knight of Bale
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    Zane of the darkness
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    commentCommented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 07:16am
    We have the same thought although I'm not a poet,I can't make a word beatiful yet attractive,this is great,It might be something weird(no offense) but I can still get what you were saying smilies/icon_stare.gif


    commentCommented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 07:48am
    It's good man....im no grammer natzi because i misspell stuff all the time but "mite is spelt might" lol



    Raze Hell
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    commentCommented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 10:09am
    thats true its really is


    commentCommented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 11:43am
    That's A nice one^^



    CutieCharmy
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    commentCommented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 03:31pm
    I didnt know you were kind of a poet... I must say it's really cool indeed.


    commentCommented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 05:27pm
    Beautiful... ((sniffle, sniffle)) Simply beautiful smilies/icon_crying.gif smilies/icon_4laugh.gif You should make more poems smilies/icon_3nodding.gif



    TonytheBloodPhoenix
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    DreamOfAll
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    commentCommented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 06:08pm
    smilies/icon_blaugh.gif Me Like It. smilies/icon_4laugh.gif Nice.. <3.


    commentCommented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 07:29pm
    Simply remarkable!!! You've achieved what I have strived for all my life from the day I relized, heck I can make a poem! Your Sonnet has the right effect on people. Your talented! Make more!!!



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    commentCommented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 07:41pm
    It's pretty sweet dude!


    commentCommented on: Wed Jul 12, 2006 @ 08:02pm
    wow is all that i can say



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