Kytonna
I don't normally work with this color combination, but I wanted to challenge myself. I'll take a pokeball and a luxury ball.
In case I change it:
Very awesome color combo!
Pokeball: Pretty good spread of red and blues; there's a nice amount of movement in the avi and the pose is quite nice considering you didn't use any body mods. My nitpick is that the texture of the reds don't match up; you have solid reds mixed with wispy transparent reds, making the look a bit inconsistent. Consider sticking to one "type" of red so that everything comes together.
The face itself could use more red; Kanoko's Nightmares has a really pretty pair, but if that's too pricey, Oisin's Blessing would work also.
For the gloves, instead of using the Pink Babydoll ones, perhaps Friday XV instead?
Number: 6.5//10
Luxury Ball:
Fiery red hair swirls about, her blood red lips form a full pout
As the blue skinned mistress dame dances like a flame
Her red heels click upon the ground, filling the air with rhythmic sound
As she glances at you coyly with eyes like the sea
For she is an oxymoron, a person of opposites
Her body the ocean, her dance a flame blitz
As she dances and twirls to the sound of her own heartbeat
A fox trot between the flame and the raindrop
And if you are patient and wait for her dance to end
You may find yourself a brand new friend
One that defies all logic and pattern
A child of both water and fire