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Wyren_Nitemare
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[x].Dancing.[x]

Live with me, watch the moon as it drifts through the black abyss of a starless night.
Run with me, through the fields of grey, the only thought filling your head is the love you feel for me, let it wash over you, and let it warm you on this cold night.
When all hope fails, I'm here, wait for me to save you from the darkness.
Let your heart fill with joy and sorrow, for human emotions only last a lifetime.
Black roses are rare, but they don't grow far from each other.
Love is the step each of us take, to bring joy or ruin to our lives.
Let us dance down the middle of the street, let me see the starlight in your eyes,
let me know that happiness resides deep inside the depths of your soul.
These streets are clear for us, it seems that the world has stopped, for you and I.
As we dance the wind whispers the delights of the evening, it sings a hollow melody,
which the ghosts depart and sing alond as they are whisked away.
Let me breathe you in, my only source of oxygen,
let me know you like I've known you one hundred years,
Let me finally know love.






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e m u
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comment Commented on: Tue May 02, 2006 @ 08:05am
oh darling.
It's beautiful.
heart


comment Commented on: Tue May 02, 2006 @ 02:49pm
Oh my .. that's lovely.
I like how you talk more about your lover's emotions for you, rather than your emotions. Though you do have some of your feelings in there, and it's very nice to read as a whole.

You sound hopeful.
Or in love, possibly.
But I'm leaning more towards a feeling you have yet to achieve.


I love writing poetry. Though I'm afraid to put mine online. ._.'

Anyway, I love it.
I'll have to speak with you through comments a few more times, then I might end up PMing you. It's a slow process but that's how I am. x3 I hate messengers.

.. er, heh. Sorry for the long message.



Black Sharpie
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Puddles Of Porridge
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comment Commented on: Wed May 03, 2006 @ 01:27am
~Sniff~
Thats---
Thats----
~Blows nose on your shirt.~
;_;
~Nooby comes out to express emotions~
OMGG!~~~!@!~~~~`~```1`1111 i luv u s00o0o muc`~!!1!!
u r so00o0000 cut~`!!11
lol i luv u~~!!!!1

No really. That was good.. :'3

...

Really.


comment Commented on: Sun May 07, 2006 @ 03:47am



S K A N K !
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Panic!_at_the_Tragedy
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comment Commented on: Fri May 19, 2006 @ 04:37pm
That was breathe taking. <3


comment Commented on: Sat May 20, 2006 @ 09:30pm
;_; your really good
Definitally better than me...



Megumi_is_me
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Chocolate Bubblegum
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comment Commented on: Tue May 23, 2006 @ 06:18am

I've always loved this one..
I'm glad you finally posted it.


comment Commented on: Wed Jun 07, 2006 @ 04:10am
that was the best poem i ever read.....its beautiful.



nicole_isahottie13
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