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Porphyrous
Detached. A part of nothing, its own everything. This place... quiet, untouched. Far, far beneath the grass, and trees... further beneath the sky, which didn't exist in this place, overcast by rock.
The droplets or water echoed a thousand times, through the tunnels and caves. They fell from the ceiling, like it was raining. So many droplets formed on the underground systems ceiling, each falling to the stone, or the pools below, creating millions of echoing splashes, enough to flush the mind with the purest of sounds. The prettiest, calming sounds.
The pools glistened dimly. Purple water... purple droplets, creating rings of water that joined with thousands of other rings of water. The quiet, but countless echoes... these caves were connected with streams and rivers of clear, purple water, like flowing amethysts.
The amethyst rivers flowing slowly, the entire underground system alive with the echoing sound of the reunion of the liquid that had made its way to the cave ceiling. The purple paradox of innumerable echoing sounds blending together to create the most tranquil silence... silent flows of purple coursing into a vast underground lake, closed in by walls of rock, and covered by a ceiling of the same. The lake, more purple than the eyes of a puppet... surrounding a small island of rock, which was surrounded by a wall of stalagmites. Standing in the middle of the rock island, the expanse of the purple underground lake could be seen... but there are no eyes to see it.






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Jellyfish Alien
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commentCommented on: Wed Feb 05, 2014 @ 04:09pm
Any of you can PM me at any time, or even just leave a comment here, if you want to add me on Facebook C:
I created an account for my writing, but I have a picture of me up, and I just play around on there sometimes, so you can find me there. I also have a page that can be "liked", and I really, really wish you guys would hit that like button, if we end up adding eachother on Facebook. I'm also piecing together my own website, where these stories can be found. I'll be posting "Porphyrous" on that site, soon. Just PM me to ask for my Facebook account if you want, or just say hi, whatever you want ^^
The thing is, I'm just bored of having an empty inbox when I sign into Gaia Cx


commentCommented on: Wed Feb 05, 2014 @ 04:19pm
its good smilies/icon_smile.gif
but its a little hard for me to understand ( <--- is very bad at english)



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commentCommented on: Thu Feb 06, 2014 @ 02:52pm
Ooohh, this was a really cool short story! :O You write very good imagery that's very detailed, very vivid, and very rich! I could very clearly see within my mind the underground tunnels and caves flowing with a system of amethyst rivers that all flow into an amethyst lake while I was reading this and even hear pretty clearly in my mind the sounds of the water droplets splashing and echoing through the caverns. >u<

I also like how you describe it all so clearly and then end it by saying that it could be seen, but of course there are no eyes to see it. It makes the whole story seem very mysterious. c:

Haha, although at first, I misread that part and when you said "standing in the middle of the rock island, the expanse of the purple underground lake could be seen...", I didn't realize you were saying that the expanse of the purple underground lake could be seen and thought you were leading off into saying something else that could be seen. As in, there was something or someone standing in the middle of the rock island. And when you trailed off, I thought you were purposely being mysterious and I was all "Wait...no, tell us! >A> What was standing there??", haha. XD


commentCommented on: Sun Feb 09, 2014 @ 06:41pm
Very pretty, the descriptions you provided made me feel like I was there, seeing it with my own eyes. Excellent writing.



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commentCommented on: Sun Feb 09, 2014 @ 10:32pm
I liked it smilies/icon_smile.gif I didn't know tsukune was your friend! He's my friend on Gaia too


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