I was thinking about writing a story and wanted a second opinion. This will be the beginning. "It's Monday again. As I'm leaning up against the wall across from all the lockers in the hallway of school, I see little crowds of people walking past me all in blurs. Today feels like it's dragging on and will never end, but is happening so fast it'll be gone in the blink of an eye. I don't really feel like I'm living, just going through the motions of life if I'm being honest with myself. Maybe it's the change in weather that has me all groggy. Constant overcast and rain. I never did like the cold and wet." What do you think? Please comment. Thank you for the feed back!