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Fondest Moments
.....A good friend knows all your best stories..... .....A best friend has lived them with you..... See the difference?
Outside I see a couple. They hold hands and lean against each other smiling. In front of them is a little girl twirling and laughing. Envy courses through me as I watch the couple kiss, unaware of anything but themselves. They don't notice their little girl is twirling off the sidewalk. I know I should try to warn them but there is nothing I would be able to do. Instead I stare helpless as a car races around the corner colliding with her. I try not to look at the body on the ground, but the screams are almost worse. The screams of the parents who couldn't save her make me cringe and I curl up trying to rid them from my mind. But it doesn't help. I was that little girl......and nothing will ever allow me to forget those screams.

Here is part one. I would like feedback please. Oh and any suggestions for what I should add to part two which will be a lot longer, don't worry.

shadowkissedroseva
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