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A Song Sweetly

The eyes from the soul a song do compose,
and freely from emotion doth it flow.
Pure melody it should be i suppose,
but dreamers' beat could be a bleating crow.
To aspire to be all that one can be,
a siren's call to transcend destiny.
A lullaby to put to rest one's fate,
a sad sonnet to ward against world's hate.
A solemn hymn to ward against dark strife.
Steady rhythm expresses sadly love,
maybe ballads to tell of lonely life.
A faster beat to rise the fallen dove.
Peace, eternally, a sweet song doth sing,
and forever love from our hearts doth ring.





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    Dima Kitsunetazukshi
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    commentCommented on: Wed Mar 13, 2013 @ 04:27pm
    This was absolutely beautiful. I don't know if it was supposed to, but I sensed an underline here, one of sorrow intertwined with a deeper emotion. As though you want to be loved, but love is a facade. Either way, it's wonderful. Good job little brother ^_^


    commentCommented on: Sat Mar 16, 2013 @ 10:18pm
    Yes that was pretty much what I was going for I want love but don't believe I can get it



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