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He saw a figure step out of the shower and move through the dense steam in the room. "I know you are there." he smiled, but didn't say anything. "If you are going to be such a stalker, you could at least help me air out this room, I can't see a thing." "Very well then." He turned around to turn on the switch for the fan. The steam started to vanish out of the room. He turned around and his heart skipped a beat. The sight of her was stunning. Her hair falling gracefully down flowing over her shoulders. That one strand of hair that refused to be tamed, laying against her forehead. "You see something you like?" She asked, teasingly letting the towel drop down a couple of inches. He raised an eyebrow, but other than that, his expression didn't change. "What do you think? I think you know my answer."
She tried to raise her eyebrow like him, but couldn't seem to do so, so just gave up and sighed instead. "you have to tell me anyway." letting the towel drop all the way to the tile floor. She started running her hands up and down her body. She looked at him, looked down, and said, "Well one part of you doesn't need to say anything at all."
He raised an eyebrow. "Well do I have to say anything? Couldn't I just show you?"

"I bet you could. But I just took a shower and I'm all clean now. You'll have to show me another time." she said teasingly, knowing that it probably couldn't wait for another time.
"Oh no you don't, not this again, you have your fun and leave me here open mouthed, you started this and now I'm finishing it."
She put on a scared puppy dog face, "What are you going to do?"
He took a step toward her, the beginnings of a smile appearing on his face.
"You'll see." He said it an such a seductive tone, that she felt her heart speed up. The familiar sensation of weakness came over her again. She reached up and made to put her hand up against the shower wall. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. And jolted in surprise when she felt his strong arms wrap around her and pull her close to his body. She could feel his heart beating against his chest. See the goosebumps on both of their arms. And she both heard and felt the deep chuckle of his laughter. She looked up at him, deep into his eyes, and did a small double take, at the look of pure lust in his eyes. He had never looked at her like that since the first time they were together. She blushed and broke eye contact, a small shy smile on her lips.
"You know how much I love you, I shouldn't have to say anything, just look into my eyes again and you'll know that what I say is true."