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Sunflower Seeds
Poems and Lists
Poetry
insperid by shannele and a a milenie i shall now write poetry in me journle!

DandyLion:

Dandy
Dandy
Dandy
.........Lion
A beautiful weed

Bright as sun
Poofy world Imagine
A Lawn of poof
DANDY LION!
shout it to the wind!
Each syalable flys away like the seeds and grows more, begging to be wished upon so fly!! DANDY LION DANDY LION DANDY!!!






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ILOVEYEWPOOHBEAR
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commentCommented on: Wed May 11, 2011 @ 02:26am
its good Nosey.Ur pretty good. try 2 b less Literal though tht makes it the best poem ever but urs is getting there its great!
keep writing u'll b famous at it in no time! smile


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