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These are just random crappy things that i have written or drawn. Thank you so much if you take the time to look at this!
dramallama hrrmm...sp i know i added and entry today, but i have a feeling there is going to be multipule ones, becuase i keep coming up with more. i must be in a writing mood. cheese_whine

"cristofer!!!" he yells as he shakes the body that is crumpled on the floor. "cristofer wake up!" he kneels on the floor next to him, shaking him again more roughly as he moves the blanket aside. "cristofer wake up! "" his green eyes become teary as he continues to plead into the silent room. he wasnt expecting this. he wasnt expecting to come home to the love of his life fainted on the floor.

yeah...it isnt very long...and yeah, i know thats not how a lot of people spell cristofer, but i like it better this way becuase its not as commen. x3 burning_eyes






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Winry_Rockbell799
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commentCommented on: Sun Dec 12, 2010 @ 08:10pm
Now this is interesting, too, to see the sudden change of perspective. I can tell he really cares about Cristofer, even though, Cristofer may never have really expected this reaction from him, or maybe he did. wink I love the "as he continues to plead into the silent room" part. Not only can I SEE that, but I can HEAR it and FEEL it, too!!!! (sorry I did the caps lock there, but I got kinda excited. I love sentences like that! <3 )


commentCommented on: Tue Jun 11, 2013 @ 12:10am
heart This is very interesting!! I hope I can read more of it! 3nodding



Soul_of_a_Nobody
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