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Help
Ok, well I posted this a long time ago but the link somehow broke so I'm posting it again.

Ok, this is my first attempt at a rhyming peom... well here goes...

Somebody help me,
Somebody please!
Some body save me,
I'm in desperate need!

The pain I feel is excruciating,
It'll swallow me whole,
The pain I feel is stabbing me,
It'll consume me once in for all!

Curoding away,
From the inside out,
No! I don't want to die this way!
Isn't there anyone about?

Eaten alive,
I'm being consumed,
Sombody help me,
I'll be dead soon...

Blinded by the pain I feel,
I run wildly about,
Stamped by the conspicious seal,
Of time running out.

I look for an open door,
A window, An escape,
I look around, but nothing now,
There's nothing left to fake.

The walls are closing in on me,
There's a tightness in my chest,
For the first time, I notice now,
My shortness of breath.

With each breath the pain creshendoes,
Growing to new highths,
With each breath the pain increases,
Here it is now, the ending of my life.

I break the skin of my tender, slender wrist,
It stings at first, but then there's nothing,
Why must life be so crule?
Why is death so enticing?

Dizzy now, from loss of blood,
I gaze down at the floor,
I'm standing in a pool of blood,
What next? Is there more?

I blink slowly and hit the floor,
Exhaling my last breath,
My eyes close gently, yes they do,
And never open more.

My life is gone,
I live no more,
The pain is gone,
I feel no more.

Why had my life to end like this?
Oh why, Oh why, Oh why?
No one should meet an end like this,
No one should have to die.

I needed help from somebody,
I cried and cried and cried,
I needed help from somebody,
But no one came, so I died.


Evil Black Swan
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  • User Comments: [1]
    WAT. WAT. THIS DOES NOT RHYME. FAIL.

    comment Trolololololololololol · Community Member · Fri Dec 24, 2010 @ 08:30am
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