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An ugly doubled faced thing spewing forth sweeten lies
The mere instigator that instill and stirs up more strife
Paved this road rotten with all of these putrid flies
Were merely distraction for a back stabbing with a poisoned knife

Broken the chain of commandments of trust
There it stood wings flapping and gazing upon its prey
Scratching itself and brooding with its own lust
Conspiring secretly to lead the couple astray

Melodic tempering hammered into each of their heads
It grins and whispers into one ear asking for the heart
Wanting to pull and weave one away with the lies it leads
While proposing to the other a deal with traitorous deceit of a new start

Once was thought as a good friend and a very close kin
Now only despised and viewed as a double faced thing in human's skin






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commentCommented on: Fri Dec 04, 2009 @ 06:18am
Very Nice. Vocabulary Was Well Put, But More Detail and Description in The Beast Is Needed, lol jk.
Well Done.


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