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Spoggle moss
this is here because i can
New poem
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I seek you my pit of despair
My hurtful hole in the ground
The place I may feel my pain
And be punished for what I have done

Oh cold hands of hate
Reach round my neck
Make me struggle for breath
Destroy me for my hope is dead

Hot hands of Satan
Torch me, burn me, push me down
Cover my face in blood
Turn my life to ashes

Blind me so I can no longer see
The beauty I've destroyed
Cut off my tongue so I can no longer give
Anymore words of disconcertment

Take away my limbs
So I can not hold her back
Take away my heart
So I cant take hers

But leave me my ears
So I all can hear is the weeping sack of sorrows
I would say take my life
But death is just a reward
I want to feel my pain

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    I can surely relate.

    comment Parts_of_Tears · Community Member · Fri Dec 23, 2005 @ 05:02am
    Pretty good

    comment FleetingThought · Community Member · Mon Feb 13, 2006 @ 06:20am
    I love it. heart The passion I feel reading this is great and deep inside. I remember my own emotions heightened, and it reminds me as an artist we some how relish the pain. Good for you for putting it out there.

    comment LayD · Community Member · Mon Jun 12, 2006 @ 08:31am
    Look at that eek Im so inspired I finally started my own Journal. Thanks!

    comment LayD · Community Member · Mon Jun 12, 2006 @ 08:47am
    dued werd u get those words from..the rhyming is so powerful..
    in other words...it rocks!! oh and im nobody

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    comment -OnlyQueenBee- · Community Member · Mon Nov 12, 2007 @ 03:47am
    exqusitly done, a poem is a song that wich holds its own rythm and requires no instrament but the finely tuned voice of the creator, and even though anyone can recite a poem, No one can recite it and make it valid but the creator. it was done well good job.

    comment Chaotic Celtic · Community Member · Sat Feb 16, 2008 @ 10:17pm
    I can surely relate to tht...here is something I must say

    Pain...without love
    Pain...cnt get enough
    Pain...i like it rough
    Cuz' 'd rather feel pain then nothing at all

    Pain...so much hurt
    Pain...happyness will not work
    Pain...Draws my blood
    I am sinkin between all the mudd

    comment Gavin_The_Rocker · Community Member · Sat Jul 04, 2009 @ 07:56am
    Deep.. very deep.
    I like it a lot, as soon as I started reading the first line, it pulled me right in to read the next and the next. It's structured well and gives an interesting message.

    comment Ayrory · Community Member · Mon Jan 25, 2010 @ 06:14am
    That's a raw, heart-felt poem you have there. That post-modernist self-loathing that fuels a depression with which you battle, fueled in turn by feeling that you've acquired too much negative karma to be redeemed, it cuts deep.

    comment Ihes egia · Community Member · Tue Feb 05, 2013 @ 10:06am
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