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Never mock a persons art or writting unless u also wish to mock the writter and artist themselves
My Rock
As I sat down in the room
I watched my rock lying there looking weak.
That?s when I realized the no one is invincible.
After just sitting there staring at her I felt a cold
Tears drop on my cheeks.
The tear soon dried as time flew by.
And in all that time my mind drifted to thoughts
of my solid rock cracking and breaking slowly.
The spirit I admired just growing dimmer.
The strength I leaned on for stability just draining away.
The realization of life and seeing how truly fragile it is.

The sight of her was like a slap to my face smashing me with an open hand
forcing me to see time to be so valuable.
We never know if we will have a tomorrow.
Life can just bruise easily, can even past ever so quickly.
Life and its plains, valleys, hills, just embrace them and hold on
To them for they value more then u can think.

Just all this cleared to me as I watch my solid rock lying there almost motionless.
The side f her I?ve never seen.


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  • User Comments: [4]
    lerow
    Community Member





    Sat Dec 17, 2005 @ 05:38pm


    It's a good poem but it's a sad one.


    AngelicMysticVision
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    Wed Jan 18, 2006 @ 11:51pm


    Ouch this poem made me wanna cry.


    DarkSilverShadow
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    Thu Jan 19, 2006 @ 04:54am


    WOW incredibly sad but so powerful.


    Chemical Reaction
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    Sun Feb 26, 2006 @ 12:35am


    A speck on the meaningless earth
    a Monument for the locals
    watch what doesnt move?
    please, before my anger overwelms me
    for something with more meaning then just the king's throne.
    Stand up and learn or have it beat into it, you, her
    Forgive, but i am not the most at rest at this moment
    but
    only if the carpenter carve this stone into something,
    more then just a lump
    molded simply by earth
    once crafted hands?
    my are too coarse...too sad myself
    so simply i will leave the chizzle at your feet
    until you become a sword in which i can stab myself
    for today i am not at peace


    User Comments: [4]
     
     
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