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Heh, getting interesting. ^^ Sorry i haven't commented until now. I've read through your posts since my last comment and you're doing very well. With your roleplay post a few entries back, I'm not usually one for Yaoi/MxM stories but I couldn't stop reading that until the end. You have some good writing skills. ^^ I'll be looking out for your next entry.

Wow- thanks! It's not all me of course- Trowa Winner is playing Sirius... but I was sorta too lazy to sepearate all the posts.

Ah, I see. Still it's an awesome piece of writing. I'm no expert with it myself of course, considering I'm probably only high Semi-lit to low lit. I'm sure someone else would be able to help you better with critique but personally I can't see anything wrong with it.