Uber-bani-gurl^^
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ok lets start:

In the shadows a young man lurked,waiting for his chance to enter the lords home.His opportunity came and he shot through the door like a red blur.He reappeared near the lords room.He slid the door open slightly and listened.The lord and his daugter where in the room,fighting.
"Father!Please stop!"she screamed backing into a corner.
"I knew I should have left you when your mother died you damn wench!"he brought his hand up to strike her but the boy rushed in and grabbed the lord daughter.He lept out the window and out of sight.
~cliff hanger now cause i gotta go~