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Black, like FMAs. Ill write crap in it.
Person# info
Well, if anybody cares enough to read these, I've already explained that the idea for the latest installment for the Perosn# story is from a conversation in a fanfic called' Blind Killer'.

Heres some more info on the story,

Category: Fullmetal Alchemist
Title: Blind Killer
Chapters so far: 9
Summary: While investigating a murder case Edward discovers the beautiful and intriguing Winry Rockbell. After a disaterous mission leaves Edward without limbs, Winry rescues him, and maybe herself. NOSPOILERS on FULLMETAL PLOT! AU wahmbulance.gif **
(** AU means 'Alternate Universe' which means the story doesnt apply to the original plot)
Rating: T( for MENTIONS icon_stare.gif of Rape, Murder and Language*mostly Edward and his potty mouth, as always*)
Author: The Intelligent Alchemist
Genre: Mystery/Romance
Pairings: EdxWin( icon_heart.gif wewt! icon_heart.gif ) RoyxRiza
The Plot- Set in New York City(told you it was AU), Edward Elric and Roy Mustang are detectives for the Brooklynn(sp?) police force. When Edward recieves a call from Mustang at 2 in the morning informing that they have a situation described as "Some chick is lying dead on a car", he imediately heads for the crime scene; where he meets the the beautiful Winry Rockbell, and is faced with solving the mystery of her dead roomate and why shes now being targeted by the mob.

icon_eek.gif Yeah, I bet your all going," What the hell? Kalez reads this type of s**t?!"

Yeah well, wahmbulance.gif NEWSFLASH wahmbulance.gif I do. Mystery/romance is the icon_heart.gif best icon_heart.gif !!!

icon_exclaim.gif There are some moments where you'll probably go"What the hell is this? A chick-flick!?!" But its not. icon_scream.gif Deel with it! icon_scream.gif


Well this is the original conversation that inspired the latest installment of "Person# stories"
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Edward was eating with Roy, Riza, and Winry. Riza and Winry had made spaghetti and meatballs, and Edward had already eaten half his plate when he heard Alphonse’s car pull in. He looked at Roy, who looked at Riza. Riza stood up to let Alphonse in.

A few seconds later, Alphonse came tearing into the living room. “WHAT DID YOU DO TO YOUR CAR!?” Alphonse yelled. Winry was surprised, usually Edward was the one yelling and screaming all the time, not Alphonse. “DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH THAT IS GOING TO COST US EDWARD!?” Edward stood up.

“Look, I’M SORRY, BUT ITS NOT LIKE I ASKED TO GET HIT!!” Alphonse still looked angry. The only way Winry could think of how to describe how he look was like a cat preparing to fight with a dog. Its tail up in the air, and every hair on end. Winry wondered if the brothers fought like this often. Probably not.

“Did you get the guys insurance?” Alphonse asked. Winry was startled. Obviously, Alphonse didn’t know anything. She giddily thought how stupid Edward and she would have looked if they went up to the guy(Kalez: Who had just tryed to kill them) and asked for his insurance.

Edward shot a look of pure hate at Mustang. He had said he would tell Alphonse everything. Edward hated telling Alphonse about when he got hurt, because he always received a lecture about his dangerous work.

It was going to be a long night.
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I think im just gonna add a little funny part that was in the chapter after this between Ed and Al relating to this momment.
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Edward sneezed. Since Alphonse was now looking for any reason to snap at Edward, he quickly retorted, “What? Do you now have a cold that you want me to pay for?” Alphonse turned away from the dishes in the sink that he was washing.

Edward rubbed his nose. “No Alphonse, but thanks.” Edward nearly missed the first dishrag that Alphonse aimed for him. When Edward smirked at Alphonse’s first failed attempt, he was not prepared for the second dishrag that hit him square in the face. He scowled at Alphonse’s triumphant expression.

“You shouldn’t pick on crippled people you know.” Edward pointed out.

“And you shouldn’t put yourself in danger by crashing your car and making me pays for it.” Alphonse quickly retorted. Edward gave it up. He was fighting a losing battle, and he just decided to go to bed.
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lol!

I think I also should explain the previous entry as well because that came from an authors note in another story.

Remember?
2: 3!! Tell her!!

3: ...I'm Switzerland...I'm neutral...

2: What??

1:See? Even 3 thinks so.

2: 3!!

3l: I plead the fifth.

2: Rawrg!!
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Yeah, thats not mine either. the original is this=
Ed: Al!! Tell her!!

Al: ...I'm Switzerland...I'm neutral...

Ed: What??

See? Even Al thinks so.

Ed: Al!!

Al: I plead the fifth.

Ed: Rawrg!!
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Info=
Category: Fullmetal Alchemist
Title: Indiana Elric?(yeah, IDK why its called that..........)
Chapters so far: 18
Summary: When Edward is captured by the Nazis, it's up to his brother Alphonse to rescue him. A semi rewrite of the movie Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade using the Fullmetal Alchemist characters. Post movie. May contain spoilers.( icon_eek.gif OHHH! So THATS WHY its called "Indiana Elric?". I find it quite strange that I JUST figured this out... burning_eyes.gif )
Rating: T (language)
Author:Shadow Mage Evelyn
Genre: Adventure/Humor(x2 This story is pretty funny.. "DRUGZ!!!" icon_rofl.gif )
No pairings(I think...)
wahmbulance.gif Warnings wahmbulance.gif - You should at LEAST know the main idea of the Fullmetal Alchemist Movie: Conquere of Shamballa or you'll be completely lost. And once you do know about the movie, throw out the fact that their father died! icon_whee.gif icon_4laugh.gif icon_sweatdrop.gif


icon_stare.gif My personal opinion so far icon_stare.gif - I truly do love this story. Nice long chapters, good grammer and spelling, good charicterization. However, even though they are the alternates of these people, the author makes Riza Hawkeye a total icon_scream.gif b***h icon_scream.gif (Im a Riza fan. deel with it.) and they tone down the icon_heart.gif 'b*****d~ness' icon_heart.gif of Mustang. I mean, two good supporting characters, and you icon_crying.gif icon_scream.gif TOTALLY DESTROY icon_scream.gif icon_crying.gif their personality!
But other than that its a great story!

GO READ THEM. icon_blaugh.gif icon_scream.gif NOW! icon_scream.gif icon_blaugh.gif





 
 

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