Kobrokai
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roses...new part!
ok, i wrote more...dont know why im posting it. lol. Thank you swatt, for so blatanly saying it sucks. I know your opinion on my writing, thankyouverymuch.

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Something...something stood black against the whiteness in the distance. It stood tall, casting a mighty shadow towards her. Immediately drawn in, she slowly moved one foot in front of the other, sweeping past the white roses. The roses...withered as she walked past them, folding over and falling, leaving a white trail behind her.

As the object came into focus, she noticed that it was marble white, like everything else in the room. The object...was a fountain with a round pool. Water sprouted from the center of the pool, sparkling at it drizzled down back into the pool. It was like a soft rain, ironically sad and beautiful at the same time. Her pace quickened.

The roses started turning to a crimson red. As the transformation took place, she felt her heart skip a beat as the fountain drew closer. Upon inspection, the white marble glittered with red specks. She gasped as she noticed that someone was laid across the front of the fountain. She ran to the person and sat next to them. Taking in a deep breath, she turned over the body...

A high pitched scream burst from her throat. It was his face...his handsome face. A few started to flow from her eyes as she clutched him tighter to her chest. No, not him...anyone but him. Her one true love was gone, deceased. Her shoulders heaved as she looked up and started to scream. Her tears fell like a soft rain, gracing his face with moisture.

As she screamed, the white walls started to fall. Behind the large chunks, black walls appeared. It was so dark and foreboding that no one would ever enter its darkness. It was like a dark night without any light. It was the darkest, strongest black you could ever imagine. And as the walls fell, rose petals flew wildly through the air, turning from a romantic red to a charcoal black. What once seemed like a paradise, is now gone...