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Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:16 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:17 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:17 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:18 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:19 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:19 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:22 pm
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| Oni_Soul Wrote: |
Down on One Knee
I hold your hand as we walk through the park.
It was so dark, as we neared the lake,
My hands grew cold and my knees start to shake.
So I got down on one knee
And said "Baby please,
Will you marry me?"
As the tears filled your eyes,
I held you so tight, and whispered...
"To the Four Corners,
And to the end of this world.
Through Heaven and Hell I will find you.
So I can feel your sweet touch,
Becasue i love you that much."
The tears streamed from your eyes,
My heart begains to fly,
Amoung the Angels and Kings,
And other beautiful things.
When you said "yes",
I jumped up and held you, so tight.
That was our longest night...
We had the time of our life,
As i held you till Twilight.
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and that my friends is the unfinished version of the song i made. I do hold in my posestion the complete song, but thats for her ears and eyes only. and dont think of stealing the lyrics either. so what do you think of it? |
its not finished in this part, that why i wrote a disclaimer!!!! WOOT FOR DISCLAIMERS. but yes, this is for the women that im purposing to.
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Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:23 pm
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| Oni_Soul Wrote: |
Down on One Knee
I hold your hand as we walk through the park.
It was so dark, as we neared the lake,
My hands grew cold and my knees start to shake.
So I got down on one knee
And said "Baby please,
Will you marry me?"
As the tears filled your eyes,
I held you so tight, and whispered...
"To the Four Corners,
And to the end of this world.
Through Heaven and Hell I will find you.
So I can feel your sweet touch,
Becasue i love you that much."
The tears streamed from your eyes,
My heart begains to fly,
Amoung the Angels and Kings,
And other beautiful things.
When you said "yes",
I jumped up and held you, so tight.
That was our longest night...
We had the time of our life,
As i held you till Twilight.
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Above is like the coolest song ever. And it proves men are caring..Well some of us..And im not very good..but i can write a poem about anything. Because i commit to anything i do!
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Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:24 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:26 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:28 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:29 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:29 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:30 pm
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