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First Comic Attempt [Would Like Feedback] 71 Comic Creators 6/3/10 6:49am
Erozar
Redo it. English reads left to right. Panels should flow the same way. Even that aside, the art is incomprehensible. I have no idea what's supposed to be going on in any of those panels. And that's bad. A good comic should have the action -- and thus the basic story -- be comprehensible even if you're not reading the words.
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5/3/10 11:24pm
Zee Coldwater
Narcoleptic Insomnia - My Webcomic Idea (NOT a Manga) 20 Comic Creators 4/23/10 12:57am
Outrun The Halfling
There is no nice way to put this. You're so clearly imitating HiNaBN that it's painful. And you're not even doing a good job of it. I suggest you step back and re-evaluate your style choices. Like it or not, if your work looks too much like someone else's, it is a problem.
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4/19/10 12:18pm
Zee Coldwater
What kind of story does my character seem to fit in? 12 Comic Creators 4/17/10 3:36am
pixelpoe
Yaoi shota? Are you serious or do you just not "get" what shota is?
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4/9/10 11:13pm
Zee Coldwater
GL comic ideas! NEED PLAYWRITER AND ARTISTS! 43 Comic Creators 4/21/10 6:03pm
lron Maven
Put on your big-boy pants and get the ******** over it, then.
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3/26/10 5:51pm
Zee Coldwater
Comic Creators Free Talk 16,736 Comic Creators 6/13/14 6:53am
morbid shark
Haha, I had never even seen a horse up close. Nobody in my grandma's village owned one. Saw lots of cows and goats, though. Ireland sounds cool. So does Germany. How is it there? Ireland is damp and way, way too religious for comfort, for me. But it can be nice. Germany is great, albeit the weather has been going crazy the last month or so. REGARDING CAKE: cakes are eaten with a spoon ...
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3/22/10 1:19pm
Zee Coldwater
Comic Creators Free Talk 16,736 Comic Creators 6/13/14 6:53am
morbid shark
Roughly how old are you? Sorry if that's too personal a question, but I'm wondering if you left in the 1990s or so. We moved from Russia to Ireland in 2001 and now I'm (temporarily but hopefully permanently soon) in Germany. I am finding culture shock easier to cope with the second time around. ._. Neo-Nazis kind of terrify me, but I think it's hilarious that Russia of all places has the ...
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3/22/10 2:50am
Zee Coldwater
Comic Creators Free Talk 16,736 Comic Creators 6/13/14 6:53am
morbid shark
Haha, so you're a Russophone too? I actually am Russian, from Chelyabinsk (if you know where that is), though I've been living in Western Europe for the last nine years. Where in the former USSR are you from? I didn't have very good experiences back home. Also the news on gay pride parades being broken up by skinheads and the general rise of neo-Nazis and so on kind of unnerves me. Not t ...
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3/22/10 12:49am
Zee Coldwater
Comic Creators Free Talk 16,736 Comic Creators 6/13/14 6:53am
morbid shark
You don't wanna live in Russia. Trust me. Especially if you're queer, obviously foreign or look like an easy mark.
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3/21/10 10:48pm
Zee Coldwater
In Need of Advice: Can a Webcomic do some Good? 6 Comic Creators 3/18/10 4:08pm
Kira Dwenna
If you're honest in your work and the story is well-told, it'll reach out to people. Maybe not to everyone, but to some. And on another note, you need to stop using lined paper, draw backgrounds and use a ruler for the borders. Wanting to reach out to people through art is noble and I commend it, but you need to work on the craft, too.
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3/17/10 11:11pm
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... 50 Comic Creators 3/17/10 1:13pm
Mobster Lobster
Oh, neat, this thread isn't dead after all. I forgot to mention this last time, but I really do love your character designs. They're so bizarre and stylish. You should really put these on a site, like WCN or CGen.
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3/15/10 9:04pm
Zee Coldwater
Plaything of the Gods (What do you think of this script?) 7 Comic Creators 4/1/10 2:53am
Tenko72
Congrats, you gave your main character a female last name. Romanov/a, a Russian surname, follows the conventions of the rest of the language and is, in fact, gendered. -a is a feminine ending. If anything, it should be Romanov. Also, is "Tei" a Japanese name or made-up or something? Because mixing languages willy-nilly for something that "sounds cool" is bad form.
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3/15/10 1:28am
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DEAD 8 Comic Creators 3/15/10 5:20am
sudohbucks
Telling hopeless people they're hopeless and how to stop being so is what makes hopeless people not-hopeless. Hope this helped.
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3/13/10 1:19am
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... 50 Comic Creators 3/17/10 1:13pm
Mobster Lobster
As a brief aside, you really shouldn't be using words like "trap", as here. :/ It's offensive and somewhat on the crass side.
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3/11/10 6:14pm
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... 50 Comic Creators 3/17/10 1:13pm
Mobster Lobster
It might help to read the dialogue aloud and note where the natural breaks in your speech are and use those to determine how balloons should be split it. Other than that, getting someone else to look at it is usually very helpful.
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3/3/10 8:57pm
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... 50 Comic Creators 3/17/10 1:13pm
Mobster Lobster
I meant more the pacing of dialogue -- you seem to be disregarding natural pauses in speech on that page. For example, the first speech bubble would read more naturally if broken up into two: "Hello, Master Wilfred?" "I have completed the the delivery to Mr. Scissors." Otherwise it reads like he's saying it all in one breath, which looks weird. Ditto for the last panel.
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3/3/10 8:47pm
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