I apologize for the iffy quality, since it's a WIP I didn't scan or touch it up, and I used my phone to take a picture. I've been working on this since yesterday and I know there are things that don't look right but since I've been looking at it for so long I can't figure it out on my own.
Critiques are greatly appreciated,
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| Girl with Dragon, help please! Critiques needed. | 5 | Works in Progress |
4/18/12 5:00am Teizar |
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4/14/12 2:14am Teizar |
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| Check this out nd tell me wat ya think plz... ^_^ | 21 | Art: Comment & Critique |
4/10/12 4:42am Karin201010 |
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Lining things on the computer is tough when you first start out, especially if you don't have Sai. I highly recommend working on paper and scanning your line art in to color it.
You'd probably have more proportionate and cleaner results.
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4/9/12 6:48am Teizar |
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| What Do You Think On My Art ? FeedBack? | 19 | Art: Comment & Critique |
4/9/12 9:48pm Persephone N Hades |
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I think it's hard to put a price on something so stylized. I would probably pay less than Luna suggested because I'm not a fan of this style, but if some people are willing to throw 100k at one of your pieces then I think you're doing just fine with the way they're priced now.
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4/9/12 6:41am Teizar |
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| Birthday Present: Please let me know what you think | 19 | Art: Comment & Critique |
4/9/12 1:49am Teizar |
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Haha thank you. I fixed it up a bit and gave it to my friend, they were pretty happy :)
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4/8/12 9:53pm Teizar |
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| Birthday Present: Please let me know what you think | 19 | Art: Comment & Critique |
4/9/12 1:49am Teizar |
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Thank you very much :)
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4/6/12 5:09pm Teizar |
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| Birthday Present: Please let me know what you think | 19 | Art: Comment & Critique |
4/9/12 1:49am Teizar |
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That works perfectly since I just got a couple thicker Sakura pens, I'll try that :)
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4/6/12 7:59am Teizar |
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| Birthday Present: Please let me know what you think | 19 | Art: Comment & Critique |
4/9/12 1:49am Teizar |
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Good point, I was worried that it looked too plain, but I'll leave it so that the main characters don't get overshadowed.
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4/6/12 7:53am Teizar |
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| Birthday Present: Please let me know what you think | 19 | Art: Comment & Critique |
4/9/12 1:49am Teizar |
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:mrgreen:
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4/6/12 7:41am Teizar |
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| you probably know why I'm here | 3 | Art: Comment & Critique |
4/6/12 10:44am Official Nutcracker |
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Really neat idea, the colors are really flat though
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4/6/12 7:40am Teizar |
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| Critique my art.. :3 | 8 | Art: Comment & Critique |
4/6/12 7:39am Y U S R l |
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I think you have a decent grasp on what you are doing, the line art for the most part is pretty clean (line art is always one of the first things I personally look at). As everyone else has said a study on anatomy would be a good idea, but keep practicing!!
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4/6/12 7:39am Teizar |
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| Birthday Present: Please let me know what you think | 19 | Art: Comment & Critique |
4/9/12 1:49am Teizar |
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I never noticed the monkey being a focal point before!! I'm going to try to lighten him up a bit so he isn't the first thing you see, thank you!
I do want to add some detail to the hair, I tried to do it in a one piece sort of style, do you think more detail in the hair would stray from that? I think I will shade the characters a but more to add more detail, what else do you think I could ...
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4/6/12 7:32am Teizar |
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| Birthday Present: Please let me know what you think | 19 | Art: Comment & Critique |
4/9/12 1:49am Teizar |
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Thank you guys :heart:
Do you think the sail looks too plain though in comparison to the background?
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4/6/12 7:09am Teizar |
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| Birthday Present: Please let me know what you think | 19 | Art: Comment & Critique |
4/9/12 1:49am Teizar |
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Puh-reezu
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4/6/12 6:21am Teizar |
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| Birthday Present: Please let me know what you think | 19 | Art: Comment & Critique |
4/9/12 1:49am Teizar |
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4/6/12 6:00am Teizar |
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| JEGUS I NEED ART. (Mainly for a new Fantroll ;D) | 93 | Art Freebies |
4/13/12 7:10pm Saitemi |
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I'll try it, I'll send you a rough sketch when I finish
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4/6/12 5:36am Teizar |
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