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I need some feedback please 47 Original Poetry/Lyrics 9/2/15 2:47am
puppylove713
To be totally truthful, that was the first piece of poetry I had ever written aside from some hideous haiku when I was still in high school... So I had no idea what kind of wording should have been used or anything really... It was a shot in the dark. Anyway, what I got from this post is that how I use my words is everything, well almost everything.
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9/2/15 2:47am
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I need some feedback please 47 Original Poetry/Lyrics 9/2/15 2:47am
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I caught the whole Haiku thing. I had the syllable numbers mixed up. I just wasn't sure what the rest of the post was talking about. I didn't even know it was a quote...
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9/2/15 2:25am
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I need some feedback please 47 Original Poetry/Lyrics 9/2/15 2:47am
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This is a much better way of explaining seeing as I'm a visual person. I can actually see where the errors are. So the dash is basically meant to separate ideas that don't have to do with one another?
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9/2/15 2:24am
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I need some feedback please 47 Original Poetry/Lyrics 9/2/15 2:47am
puppylove713
You just totally lost me, but I have no idea if it is because I'm half asleep or if I really didn't get what you were saying. Either way, it didn't make much sense in my mind...
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9/1/15 6:34am
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Luminous Kitsune Drop from Errie Lantern? 66 Spirit of the Smackdown 9/1/15 6:54pm
puppylove713
I have no idea who you are talking about...
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9/1/15 4:23am
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I need some feedback please 47 Original Poetry/Lyrics 9/2/15 2:47am
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That is certainly true. I suppose I will have to ask. But in all actuality, the assignment calls for three, but she suggest five to give you a chance of a better score in case one of the poetry pieces don't turn out as well. So if I can mange at least three strong pieces I should be fine. I am so liking the creative fiction part more. I'm a strong story writer, not poetry writer...
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9/1/15 4:20am
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I need some feedback please 47 Original Poetry/Lyrics 9/2/15 2:47am
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That should be quite easy and it is poetry so I don't see why she would refuse it. I mean poetry is poetry, right?
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9/1/15 3:45am
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Luminous Kitsune Drop from Errie Lantern? 66 Spirit of the Smackdown 9/1/15 6:54pm
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Lol, how did that happen? I took Intro to Psychology and got a B. I could have gotten an A, but I slacked off when it came to the final. I knew I would pass the class regardless of how I did on it so I didn't care...
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9/1/15 3:44am
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I need some feedback please 47 Original Poetry/Lyrics 9/2/15 2:47am
puppylove713
Oh wow, that is just awesome. I can see my original poem in there, but you added more to it and change some things to it to make it flow better. I now know what you were saying about punctuation too. Now that I have a better understanding and have something I can come back and look at as a reference I may be able to fix up my two and finish off the other three. I wonder if the instructor would let ...
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8/30/15 7:08pm
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Luminous Kitsune Drop from Errie Lantern? 66 Spirit of the Smackdown 9/1/15 6:54pm
puppylove713
Yeah, I know this. I have taken Psychology so I learned about these kinds of things. The funny thing is I just took the class because I thought it would be fun.
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8/30/15 7:01pm
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Luminous Kitsune Drop from Errie Lantern? 66 Spirit of the Smackdown 9/1/15 6:54pm
puppylove713
I have ADD so I can tell you this, that is my issue with distracting loud noises. Actually basically anything can distract me... So yeah.
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8/30/15 5:24pm
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I need some feedback please 47 Original Poetry/Lyrics 9/2/15 2:47am
puppylove713
Sure, I don't mind. I actually learn better with visual things anyway. So just telling me probably won't work as well...
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8/30/15 5:21pm
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Luminous Kitsune Drop from Errie Lantern? 66 Spirit of the Smackdown 9/1/15 6:54pm
puppylove713
I don't like noise either. It doesn't really have that kind of effect on me, but I find it hard to cope when too many people are talking at once. Loud noises are the worst for me. I guess in a sense I have some of the traits of a misanthrope, but not all of them. I am just not good with socializing with people and I feel really claustrophobic when I'm around too many. My dislike for people has not ...
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8/30/15 6:20am
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I need some feedback please 47 Original Poetry/Lyrics 9/2/15 2:47am
puppylove713
So, what you are saying is that some of those commas could be replaced with that to make it work a bit better? I had no idea.
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8/30/15 6:15am
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Luminous Kitsune Drop from Errie Lantern? 66 Spirit of the Smackdown 9/1/15 6:54pm
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I"m an introvert as well. I have problems with social cues as well. I have no idea what a misanthrope is, so I can't say if I am one... I really don't do so well with people in general. I don't particularly like people so I avoid crowds. I can handle small groups well enough, but large amounts of people are a no go with me.
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8/30/15 6:00am
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