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writing question 3 Writing Arena Discussion 8/20/14 9:42pm
Shaky jakeward
Life (and relationships) is full of ups and downs. End the story on an up. That's really all you need to do. If having all the issues solved by the end of the book and the characters being happy as they can be isn't 'realistic' enough for you, try writing an ending that implies there are still more problems to come but the couple have gotten over the biggest issues and are at a happy place for ...
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8/20/14 9:42pm
Kairi Nightingale
Mystery Story? 3 Writers 8/20/14 10:35pm
iHikairi
Sorry, I'm a bit lost. :sweat: Are you looking for someone to write a story for you, write one with you, or just to help brainstorm on ideas?
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8/20/14 7:43pm
Kairi Nightingale
Writing an Intellectually Gifted Character in First Person 40 Writers 8/20/14 8:54pm
SparklyEevee
It isn't about reader ability. It never is except when we're talking about especially stupid readers. (That's why I added that bit in my post - not because I thought that's what you were talking about.) I honestly don't know how to make this any clearer than Thunder Tyrant already made it. I'm studying to be an ESE teacher which includes learning strategies on teaching especially gifted studen ...
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8/20/14 7:19pm
Kairi Nightingale
Someone please edit&give critic on first draft 3 Collaborative works 8/19/14 5:32pm
ha4za1001
What's the genre?
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8/19/14 5:32pm
Kairi Nightingale
Writing an Intellectually Gifted Character in First Person 40 Writers 8/20/14 8:54pm
SparklyEevee
Yeah, this is more along the lines of what I meant. It's not enough just for the information to be important; You have to make the readers care to remember it. Even smart readers won't bother remembering everything if it's boring or comes off as unnecessary. Giving it out in smaller doses and introducing it in more interesting ways are some examples on how to make the reader more inclined to r ...
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8/19/14 6:39am
Kairi Nightingale
fantasy story feedback please 4 Original Stories/Prose 8/17/14 5:42am
dolcebacio
You have a recurring issue with misusing commas and dashes, so try looking up some grammar tips that focus on those during your next edit. This is a great grammar site, if you don't know of it already. Not really my kind of story but I must say that it's excellent for an early draft. Keep it up. :)
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8/17/14 5:42am
Kairi Nightingale
Intelligent people are the saddest. 3 Original Stories/Prose 8/17/14 5:33am
Panda Gyno
I don't particularly like how the narrator groups all intelligent people together. It's not very... well, intelligent so much as narrow minded to stereotype both people who are smart and people who aren't. I might have been more sympathetic if actual examples of these claims were shown from the protagonist's experiences instead of a bunch of 'telling' but as it stands now I don't feel that the pro ...
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8/17/14 5:33am
Kairi Nightingale
Blocks and Walls and Carrying on 8 Writers 8/19/14 5:31am
Czarina Regina
Figure out what that wall is. What's wrong with what you have? What's bugging you so much that you can't move on? Then fix it. Sometimes it's something minor. If it's something tricky but won't affect anything else in the story too much - like the flow of a section or an awkward sentence that you can't get rid of but don't know how to change - leave a note for later and carry on. Sometimes ...
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8/16/14 5:31pm
Kairi Nightingale
I Need Help 8 Writers 8/16/14 5:34pm
X_malic_X
25 Ways to Plot, Plan, and Prep Your Novel There a lot more ways than just these to help get you started and whether something works or not really depends on the individual and sometimes even what story they're writing. Try several things out and see what works or what doesn't. I also recommend looking up some of your favorite authors to see if they have blogs. Many have sections for new wr ...
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8/16/14 5:14pm
Kairi Nightingale
Writing an Intellectually Gifted Character in First Person 40 Writers 8/20/14 8:54pm
SparklyEevee
Readers aren't going to remember every detail of a page-long rant about something when it doesn't come up again for another 100 pages. But they will remember the character mentioning something about an study or experiment that you can expand on when the information becomes important. Pick out the details that you can expand on later when it becomes more important and cut them from the earlier ment ...
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8/16/14 5:09pm
Kairi Nightingale
thinking of writing a book....XD 3 Writers 8/6/14 7:03pm
sHuT uP sTuPiD cOoKiE -_-
Writing is a hard business. Very few writers make enough money consistently to be able to write full-time. Most writers have a day job in something else. My advice: pursue a career in something else and keep writing as a side thing. If you become great enough to quit your other job, then good for you! If not, at least you will still have your other job to bring home the bacon with. Another thi ...
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8/6/14 5:25pm
Kairi Nightingale
Kairi's test thread. Do not enter. 19 Test Forum 7/23/14 6:08am
Kairi Nightingale
Forgotten Academy RP Info: Teachers: lilyxblossom - Sinister Nameless - Demon - Headmaster/Special Ability Training lilyxblossom - Dante Bliss - Necromancer - Weaponry lilyxblossom - Crius Akasune - Puppet Master - Martial Arts/Medical Assistant lilyxblossom - Lilith Hope - Shapeshifter - Art FallenxSong - Koii Kaito - Neko - Choir/Band Kairi Nightingale - Wendy Shore - Angel - Doctor/B ...
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7/23/14 6:08am
Kairi Nightingale
Kairi's test thread. Do not enter. 19 Test Forum 7/23/14 6:08am
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http://i1176.photobucket.com/albums/x323/Kairi_Nightingale/Anime Pics for RPs/Icemageboyampstaff_zps19fde30b.jpg Name: Adair Laurence (Labhras) Age: 36 Gender: Male Sexuality: Date of Birth: June 9th Country of Origin: Riverndale Race: Fae (Not an elf!) Personality: Very flirty, he prefers girls but occasionally flirts with guys, especially when it's to annoy or make them fee ...
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7/23/14 5:46am
Kairi Nightingale
advise for a beginner 16 Writers 7/31/14 4:16am
Tea is love
Reading a lot of books will help you pick up a few things about good and bad writing as well as introduce you to different genres and styles. Try out a wide variety of authors and types of works to figure out what you like, what you don't like, what works, and what doesn't. Then try to use that in your writing. You can also see if your favorite authors have a writing blog where they share their wr ...
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7/19/14 7:06pm
Kairi Nightingale
Kairi's test thread. Do not enter. 19 Test Forum 7/23/14 6:08am
Kairi Nightingale
http://i1176.photobucket.com/albums/x323/Kairi_Nightingale/images_zps5317ad67.jpg Name: Laura Morana Age: Looks 17 Gender: Female Sexuality: Heterosexual Date of Birth: January 13 Country of Origin: Born on an island in the northern lands. Race: Reaper Personality: Laura is a nice girl and tries to be friendly, but is more than a little shy at times. Despite this, she is far fr ...
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