My First Impression is all summed up in a poem I wrote: Feel free to copy.
TWILIGHT HELL
By UC Poika
What kind of wild eyed tale is this?
Since when do damsels and vampires kiss?
Why not have Hitler beloved against my advice!
Would you have him do his evil but do it nice?
Or, to take another tack, bring Jesus back,
Only have Him bite the dust in Satan's track?
Calling good things t ...
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| first impressions of twilight | 234 | Twilight Saga |
11/7/11 10:03am Edgar Lovecraft |
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11/7/11 10:03am UC Poika |
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| The Bible | 48 | General Discussion |
10/30/11 3:52pm jc_beatrice |
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Says who?
I have read it several times. Think on it. But it is my experience to believe it can and should be believed as the word of God.
But consider the following poem. It is at the heart perhaps of the supernatural though it addresses only Twilight.
TWILIGHT HELL
By UC Poika
What kind of wild eyed tale is this?
Since when do damsels and vampires kiss?
Why not have Hitler bel ...
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10/30/11 3:52pm UC Poika |
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| What Were The Last Words of the AAY | 17 | Word Games and others |
2/7/10 8:57pm Skadi Sundermount |
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He said, " ."
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2/7/10 8:57pm UC Poika |
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| MY SONNETS | 8 | Writing Arena Discussion |
12/7/09 3:50pm UC Poika |
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NOT TO BE QUITE LIKE YOU
By UC Poika
For me to be quite like you, my father and my dad,
Would be the poorest of all that could be possible
Like lousy poetry can all but drive one mad
The thought of being like you isn’t even plausible
But it isn’t like I hate you, Dad, for I forgave you
As I added up my life and found the sum
To be somewhat close to what you figured it too
A chip ...
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12/7/09 3:50pm UC Poika |
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| MY SONNETS | 8 | Writing Arena Discussion |
12/7/09 3:50pm UC Poika |
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ON BIRDS AND LOVERS
UC Poika
A songbird sings, unseen, not distracted by the things
That lovers know there beneath the boughs below
As they look into eyes that see into their own hearts
And hold each others’ hands, touching only what is real
Oblivious to the songs the songbird sings
To his mate, a bird lover covered by leaves that grow
To know just how and why the loving part star ...
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12/7/09 3:50pm UC Poika |
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| MY SONNETS | 8 | Writing Arena Discussion |
12/7/09 3:50pm UC Poika |
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What do you think?
Also see the arena for more sonnets by UC.
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12/7/09 3:50pm UC Poika |
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| MY SONNETS | 8 | Writing Arena Discussion |
12/7/09 3:50pm UC Poika |
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SPARK OF LOVE
UC Poika
What a fire a single spark can set
Miles of charred timber smoldering yet
Breezes that gust to dangerously high rates
Gossip driven by the likes of insane debates
Devils laughing because they drink his brew
Lunacy turns first against one kind then two
Then gripping a burnt bunny he sobs alone
Realizing exactly what he has done
Rope tied about his neck he ha ...
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12/7/09 3:50pm UC Poika |
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| Read my Story plz ^.^ | 17 | Writing Arena Discussion |
12/23/09 2:48am Moxcella |
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It's not bad for a beginner especially. Read some of my earlier one's like this one on page 9 of my stuff on the arena then.
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12/23/09 2:48am UC Poika |
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| What's this poem missing? | 3 | Writing Arena Discussion |
12/6/09 7:50pm Unspoken Word |
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Maybe something a little more conventional would be better than this... what? It's a journal entry I think. But probably not a poem.
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12/6/09 7:50pm UC Poika |
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| different types of poetry | 2 | Chatterbox |
11/17/09 11:28am the real gifted brother |
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Where are they?
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11/17/09 11:28am UC Poika |
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| MY SONNETS | 8 | Writing Arena Discussion |
12/7/09 3:50pm UC Poika |
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IT IS ALL TRUE
by UC Poika
The sink is full of dirty dishes now,
The counter tops are cluttered, that’s for sure,
The frying pan has found a home there on the range,
And there’s papers on the microwave I know,
And coffee cups, a bowl and saucer sit somehow
Atop the table I must also concur
As a jar of peanut butter, some change,
A roll of toilet paper tissues--white like a sno ...
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12/7/09 3:50pm UC Poika |
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| Read, Rate, and Comment at least One Entry of the AAY | 215 | Writing Arena Discussion |
2/9/10 4:35am Skadi Sundermount |
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I read and rated yours the other day, Furiaz. Thought I'd give someone else a chance. But I've added a new one. Check it out here.
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2/9/10 4:35am UC Poika |
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| Read, Rate, and Comment at least One Entry of the AAY | 215 | Writing Arena Discussion |
2/9/10 4:35am Skadi Sundermount |
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No luck with Ashley either. I guess I'm still it guys.
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2/9/10 4:35am UC Poika |
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| Read, Rate, and Comment at least One Entry of the AAY | 215 | Writing Arena Discussion |
2/9/10 4:35am Skadi Sundermount |
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Where is everybody?
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2/9/10 4:35am UC Poika |
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