Glad I could help! :]
Read Reply
Results for Reaping+Voice's Post History
| Reply Results (500) | Replies | Forum | Topic Created | Reply Date | ||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Sketch of my Avi in Progress-- help? | 10 | Works in Progress |
5/27/10 1:44am iMooJuice |
|||
|
5/27/10 1:44am Reaping Voice |
||||||
| Sketch of my Avi in Progress-- help? | 10 | Works in Progress |
5/27/10 1:44am iMooJuice |
|||
|
I hope you don't mind that I did a red-line of your drawing. I found that the location of her right shoulder in contrast to her neck and her left shoulder is very confusing and asymmetrical. It almost appears that her collarbone is broken.
Speaking of her collarbone, it is much too low for her. I think referencing an actual bikini model would help this aspect.
I echo others when I notice th ...
Read Reply |
5/27/10 1:44am Reaping Voice |
|||||
| How can I make this paragraph flow smoother? | 5 | Original Stories/Prose |
4/18/10 1:24pm Reaping Voice |
|||
|
Yeah, I figured it was going to be about that... I must of clicked the wrong forum, sorry. Although your attitude about it was less than charming to say the least.
Read Reply |
4/18/10 1:24pm Reaping Voice |
|||||
| How can I make this paragraph flow smoother? | 5 | Original Stories/Prose |
4/18/10 1:24pm Reaping Voice |
|||
|
:sweat: Can you expand on that?
Read Reply |
4/18/10 1:24pm Reaping Voice |
|||||
| How can I make this paragraph flow smoother? | 5 | Original Stories/Prose |
4/18/10 1:24pm Reaping Voice |
|||
|
One of my many faults as a writer is my inability to get down all of my ideas on paper in the right order or format. My sentences are always too wordy, (as has been expressed by my professors) and I can never seem to say what I meant to say.
Please don't tell me to give up on writing. That's just something I cannot do. However, practice makes perfect, but only if directed in the right directio ...
Read Reply |
4/18/10 1:24pm Reaping Voice |
|||||
| ██ █ ♔▐ Dιαмσиd Rєqυιєм↪ANMT PG37 | 597 | Barton OOC |
6/3/10 12:52am M u d k i p s z |
|||
|
Just popping in to say hi and that I haven't gotten to my profile yet due to school... @_@ I'll be a senior next year so I have a lot to do, haha.
Read Reply |
6/3/10 12:52am Reaping Voice |
|||||
| The Item Challenge [Tektek Game] | 1,792 | Word Games and others |
6/2/12 2:12am Serith Moren |
|||
|
Strawberry Sundae Sweets (Bunny Suit)
Read Reply |
6/2/12 2:12am Reaping Voice |
|||||
| Slap yer keyboard. D:< | 1,405 | Word Games and others |
5/13/12 6:35pm -slaps face- |
|||
|
rftft Rejoicing for the first time.
Read Reply |
5/13/12 6:35pm Reaping Voice |
|||||
| The Item Challenge [Tektek Game] | 1,792 | Word Games and others |
6/2/12 2:12am Serith Moren |
|||
|
--
The Viceroy.
Read Reply |
6/2/12 2:12am Reaping Voice |
|||||
| What does the AAY's avi tell you bout themselves? | 3,157 | Word Games and others |
4/27/12 10:19pm senic_orinite |
|||
|
That she likes black and is more or less hardcore and adventurous.
Read Reply |
4/27/12 10:19pm Reaping Voice |
|||||
| Would you want the AAY as a Doll, action figure, or plushie? | 13,193 | Word Games and others |
6/1/12 5:00pm Vanilla Flavored Toaster |
|||
|
Action Figure. :3
Read Reply |
6/1/12 5:00pm Reaping Voice |
|||||
| Guys vs girls game | 432,988 | Word Games and others |
6/2/12 3:30pm Rusu |
|||
|
Twenty-two.
Read Reply |
6/2/12 3:30pm Reaping Voice |
|||||
| Harry Potter, LOTR, Twilight, or Pirates of Caribbean? AAY | 606 | Word Games and others |
4/21/12 12:29am Keito-hime |
|||
|
LOTR.
Swoop-beans.
Uhmmm, I want to say Pirates of the Caribbean for you. :]
Read Reply |
4/21/12 12:29am Reaping Voice |
|||||
| Enough: A Story About a Waitress Who's Had Enough | 3 | Original Stories/Prose |
4/7/10 2:03am AkaLilly |
|||
|
Good for her! I really liked the short story although I felt it was kind of ranting on, but hey, we all need an outlet most of the time. This would be a good outline to build a story from, like organizing characters, theme, setting, and details. Good job so far.
Read Reply |
4/7/10 2:03am Reaping Voice |
|||||
| Letter to Anaís. School Assignment. | 5 | Original Stories/Prose |
4/7/10 2:12am Reaping Voice |
|||
|
Ah, okay, thanks for letting it go.
(And thanks for actually writing something instead of just coming in to announce that it wasn't safe to bumb yet, lol)
Well, thanks for your critique, but it kind of was supposed to sound "whaa, I'm Jewish" :/ Also, the author of the letter is supposed to be a Jewish girl writing to her best friend . She is also pretending to be French. So... it wasn't s ...
Read Reply |
4/7/10 2:12am Reaping Voice |
|||||
|
|
||||||
Created by
iMooJuice
Created by
Reaping Voice
Created by
M u d k i p s z
Created by
Serith Moren
Created by
-slaps face-
Created by
senic_orinite
Created by
Vanilla Flavored Toaster
Created by
Rusu
Created by
Keito-hime
Created by
AkaLilly