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******** 3 Original Poetry/Lyrics 7/26/14 3:17am
MaddHadter
NOT ENOUGH CAPS LOCK
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6/27/14 3:40am
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Shattered and Forgotten 6 Original Poetry/Lyrics 6/26/14 9:19pm
Insanity45
Yes, you're getting the idea. Check out the A Guide to the Art of Poetry sticky by Have Your Pi or the Guide to Poetry and Critique sticky by Poetess Laureate. They'll help you even further. Great job!
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6/26/14 9:19pm
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fragments 2 Original Poetry/Lyrics 6/27/14 5:41pm
0-DCB
I tried to write a poem, but this is as far as I got. I might try to expand it further, but who knows if that'll actually happen. x} Title We hiked for years yesterday, yearning to clench the sky in our hands and pretend we held a fistful of sapphires.
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6/26/14 5:51pm
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Finished my 42nd Patient poem! 8 Original Poetry/Lyrics 6/26/14 3:01pm
DreamfulNightm...
Ah! I see -- no problem!
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6/26/14 2:58pm
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Finished my 42nd Patient poem! 8 Original Poetry/Lyrics 6/26/14 3:01pm
DreamfulNightm...
Real quick: Remarks like the one in bold are why I assume you had such a hostile attitude. I tell you that you did a good job, yet your response is borderline passive aggressive -- even rude. The eye roll especially makes it come off that way. I'm not saying you are doing this purposefully, though. :} Now, if I end up not liking any of your poems, then who cares? Keep writing. I'm just one ...
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6/26/14 1:44pm
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Finished my 42nd Patient poem! 8 Original Poetry/Lyrics 6/26/14 3:01pm
DreamfulNightm...
That's great! I'll do my best to read through the poems by next week or so. A collective is useful to have if only for the reason that all your poems will be in one place. This way you won't have to go searching for them in the future if you want to read any. ;)
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6/26/14 12:38pm
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Finished my 42nd Patient poem! 8 Original Poetry/Lyrics 6/26/14 3:01pm
DreamfulNightm...
Before I get to the poem, I have to ask: Why are you being so aggressive towards me and Restraining Order Blues? I went back and read her comments, and they didn't consist of anything remotely similar to "I've gotta be freaking patient to read your crappy poem..." The words "crappy poem" were never uttered. Please, stop twisting our words. Frankly, I'm hesitant to even comment {much less gi ...
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6/26/14 4:48am
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Just finished my 41st Patient Poem!!! 11 Original Poetry/Lyrics 6/26/14 4:30am
DreamfulNightm...
I'm confused. Did you even want people who weren't familiar with this series to read it? With regards to the television comparison, I said those things because you first made the comparison. Honestly, I don't see why you seem so resentful to improve. You should understand that we aren't attacking you. We aren't attacking at all. As I've said before, we're only trying to help you grow as a write ...
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6/26/14 4:30am
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Shattered and Forgotten 6 Original Poetry/Lyrics 6/26/14 9:19pm
Insanity45
Hmm... I'm not sure about "one-line poetry." If it exists at all, it would be extremely difficult to write. The reason is because not only every single word would have to have a purpose...every single syllable and sound would also have to have a purpose. There would literally be no room for mistakes. But I'm just rambling now. Sorry. :xp: Anyway, your poem unfortunately does not maintai ...
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6/26/14 2:43am
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Just finished my 41st Patient Poem!!! 11 Original Poetry/Lyrics 6/26/14 4:30am
DreamfulNightm...
There's really no need for such a hostile response. You have provided no means of reading your other forty previous poems in the series. Instead, you post one, and us new readers are expected to automatically know that it's made up pieces from other poems. The reason we "didn't catch on" is because you provided no evidence that we should "catch on" to anything. Furthermore, poetry is not te ...
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6/26/14 2:14am
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AT FRIENDSHIP FUNSIES [An Avatar Talk Hangout Thread] 10,275 Friends Chat 10/2/14 6:17am
Aqua Fortise
Whoops! I accidentally subscribed to Amazon Prime. Luckily, I used none of the benefits, so I got a full refund. :lol: In other news, I'm getting nearly 500 sheets of origami paper soon. :awesome:
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6/26/14 1:01am
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Just finished my 41st Patient Poem!!! 11 Original Poetry/Lyrics 6/26/14 4:30am
DreamfulNightm...
Here is a place where you can read a large selection of poems. What I would suggest is seeing if you can find a more narrative type of poem -- similar to yours here -- and seeing how the author conveys the narrative through poetry. One poem that comes to mind is "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock" by T.S. Eliot. {This is just general advice, by the way.} EDIT; Regardless of whether or no ...
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6/26/14 12:43am
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what makes good poetry? [discussion filled with lurve] 170 Original Poetry/Lyrics 9/3/14 5:49am
passy indoors
Some of the misconceptions mirror those listed in Have Your Pi's "Guide to the Art of Poetry" sticky. :3nod: {A lot of this is more just a general opinion on critiques.} I agree that age should rarely be taken as a factor. I was 13 years old when I first joined Gaia, and my poetry was critiqued the same way as everyone else's poetry. What I think should be considered, which you seem to do, i ...
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6/25/14 11:02pm
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what makes good poetry? [discussion filled with lurve] 170 Original Poetry/Lyrics 9/3/14 5:49am
passy indoors
I was literally going to say the same thing. :lol:
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6/25/14 9:19pm
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AT FRIENDSHIP FUNSIES [An Avatar Talk Hangout Thread] 10,275 Friends Chat 10/2/14 6:17am
Aqua Fortise
YES
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6/25/14 4:13pm
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