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Shattered and Forgotten 6 Original Poetry/Lyrics 6/26/14 9:19pm
Insanity45
Is this a poem?
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6/25/14 3:16am
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Pretend something inspirational was said. [dcb's collective] 276 Original Poetry/Lyrics 7/8/14 7:37pm
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Swamp Unity between earth and water -- all crude imperfections and wondrous marvels mixing together... Majestic birds seem to invite our world into their world as they stretch out their wings like a warm embrace. With them we are free to soar into the sunlit branches of the cypress or dive deeper into Spanish moss, perfectly encapsulating all the ripples of air. As softly as an afternoon rain, ...
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6/24/14 9:53pm
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Leak 3 Original Poetry/Lyrics 6/24/14 5:48pm
XObsidianRoseX
To be perfectly honest, I know what you were going for. And, yes, there is an overall focus on water. As I stated before, the poem does have good images and even taps into the reader's other senses {smell, touch, etc.}. However, it tells and doesn't show. "You are sad." Prove it. {Note: I'm not saying that's an actual line from your poem.} A line like that does absolutely nothing for a poem b ...
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6/24/14 5:48pm
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AT FRIENDSHIP FUNSIES [An Avatar Talk Hangout Thread] 9,176 Friends Chat 7/13/14 3:37am
Aqua Fortise
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6/24/14 5:22pm
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. 3 Original Poetry/Lyrics 6/26/14 12:13pm
temporaryusern...
What happened to the poem that was posted earlier? It wasn't bad at all. Personally, I thought it had made use of clever diction.
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6/24/14 2:09pm
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what makes good poetry? [discussion filled with lurve] 161 Original Poetry/Lyrics 7/7/14 4:47pm
passy indoors
I never took a poetry course in college. There were other courses I wanted to take more. Honestly, I don't know if I would've liked it that much. I most likely would have been lazy and turned in poems I've already written. :P
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6/24/14 12:52am
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Healthy Landscapes (A Poetry Prompt) 12 Original Poetry/Lyrics 7/4/14 8:31am
Power Armor Felix
Ideas: -Tundra of Warm, Friendly, Fuzzy Velociraptors- -The Grand, Magically Delicious Canyon- -Swamp- Unity between earth and water -- all crude imperfections and wondrous marvels mixing together... Majestic birds seem to invite our world into their world as they stretch out their wings like a warm embrace. With them we are free to soar into the sunlit branches of the cypr ...
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6/23/14 6:54pm
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Leak 3 Original Poetry/Lyrics 6/24/14 5:48pm
XObsidianRoseX
The subtitle is unneeded. It's a rhetorical question that serves no purpose. The poem itself should be able to convey the main message to the reader. Imagine yourself alone on a beach. You sit with your head resting on your knees And your arms wrapped around your legs. In front of you is the ocean. And the vibrant colors of the evening sky. So far this is reading more like a meditatio ...
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6/21/14 4:31pm
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. 1 Original Poetry/Lyrics 6/21/14 4:03pm
Swrd
If you want us to read your poem, please, post it in this thread. This forum is meant for that. It is not meant to to redirect us to another site or another section of this site.
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6/21/14 4:03pm
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what makes good poetry? [discussion filled with lurve] 161 Original Poetry/Lyrics 7/7/14 4:47pm
passy indoors
So, I have a question for y'all. What specifically distinguishes poetry from prose in your opinion?
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6/16/14 9:15pm
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Villain Of The Year 1 Original Poetry/Lyrics 6/16/14 9:08pm
ofcourseyourea...
This is really the only concrete image in this poem. What this poem falls into is the common fault of telling and not showing. "It felt bad." OK? Prove it by showing what "bad" feels like. Did it feel painful like a punch in the gut, or was it simply uncomfortable like a p***k to the finger? Furthermore, what exactly is "it"? If "it" is supposed to be connected to the "Loss for words," the ...
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6/16/14 9:08pm
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Pretend something inspirational was said. [dcb's collective] 276 Original Poetry/Lyrics 7/8/14 7:37pm
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Perfection If I could no longer pen down words befitting of your beauty, my nights would be filled with peaceful silence. You've heard every silly utterance of mine: bitter phrases painted with childish skill you so kindly accepted with teeth so perfect, I could swear they were the gates of Heaven. Your smile, as I've mentioned a thousand times before, is the only sunlight I need. It reaches int ...
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6/16/14 5:37pm
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AT FRIENDSHIP FUNSIES [An Avatar Talk Hangout Thread] 9,176 Friends Chat 7/13/14 3:37am
Aqua Fortise
Thanks, guys! <5
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6/15/14 6:49pm
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AT FRIENDSHIP FUNSIES [An Avatar Talk Hangout Thread] 9,176 Friends Chat 7/13/14 3:37am
Aqua Fortise
Also, it's my birthday today! :awesome: {22}
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6/15/14 6:37am
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AT FRIENDSHIP FUNSIES [An Avatar Talk Hangout Thread] 9,176 Friends Chat 7/13/14 3:37am
Aqua Fortise
I vaguely remember each day in kindergarten {maybe pre-k} we would focus on different things. For 26 days, we focused on the alphabet and learning what each character was. We had worksheets where we learned how to write each character. It was fun...I assume.
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6/14/14 6:15am
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