Bump!
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Btw, I forgot to mention in the PM something. Because I didn't realize it until now.
But my characters are close to each other. However, the way I did everything made it seem like they aren't close. Since she came off as too pissed >__< If you can lower the level of pissed-ness yet keep as much action in there, then that would be great
3nodding (Feel free to change a lot of it, because it will be needed >o< )