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hilo-lilo
Teehee you have nice sample. Can you do me a poetry?


Sure, what about? ^.^
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Smart idea from a money making point of view. Impressive.

But if your writing is good enough to win enough contests for you to make a profit off 1/3 of the prize money, why don't you just haunt the writer's contest forum, enter a butt load of contests, and keep the entire prize for yourself? That's totally what I would do.


Well I'm not that interested in money, and I wanted to create a black market on gaia lol

But yeah, my friend did that and only got round to entering half of them. Haunting the writing contest forum doesn't sound like such a good idea.
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That's so different, huh, ou o sorta' nice, in ways.
Okay well, like I asked above,
maybe a short story or poem reflecting on how she wants to uh, hurt the girlfriend the boy she's obsessed in kawaii desu love with.
>: yay yandere's.
she is the girl on the bottom. (there's only two characters there, d/w.) c:
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hilo-lilo
Teehee you have nice sample. Can you do me a poetry?


Sure, what about? ^.^

Hem, can you make something about 'carousel'? I want something pretty peaceful and childish emotion_bigheart
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That's so different, huh, ou o sorta' nice, in ways.
Okay well, like I asked above,
maybe a short story or poem reflecting on how she wants to uh, hurt the girlfriend the boy she's obsessed in kawaii desu love with.
>: yay yandere's.
she is the girl on the bottom. (there's only two characters there, d/w.) c:


Sorry about late reply but yeah, I can work on something like that. Sounds sorta creepy... a poem would be good .. that says rip and tear in the intervals. pirate
But yeah, its a good idea. I like it. smile
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hilo-lilo
Teehee you have nice sample. Can you do me a poetry?


Sure, what about? ^.^

Hem, can you make something about 'carousel'? I want something pretty peaceful and childish emotion_bigheart


Yep, okay. So I have one order for a horrorish love, and one for a peaceful, mild poem. lol.
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Cool! ;u ; yeah it's supposed to be, lmoa.
ou o that would be amazing!
Cool, thanks.~
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You're amazing!! Wish I could write like that? Could you teach me a few things?
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Apologies for it being so late, I completely forgot! Knock 20g off the price for the delay!

Rip, tear.

Give me your blood,
Give me your soul,
Give me your heart,
Give me what you stole.

Rip-tear-bite-repair

Give me your eyes, so large and afraid.
Give me your skin, don’t let it decay.
Give me the knife, let me stab.
Give me your hands, let me grab.

Rip-tear-bite-repair

Give me your lips, allow me to bite.
Give me your fists, so that I may fight.
Give me your hope, leaving you with none.
Give me your smile, so that I may have fun.

Rip-tear-bite-repair

Give me the needle, allow me to thread.
Let me repair, if you don’t want to be dead.
Show me your wounds, I must fix them up.
And when you go home, prepare for the breakup.

Rip-tear-bite-repair
Rip-tear-bite-repair
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hilo-lilo


Erm, here it is. I kind of imagined it being sung in a girly, childish voice. And the rythm is like a carousel horse when it goes up and down while spinning, hope it shows then when you read it! heart

Fluffy and Light

So fluffy and light,
I refuse to fight,
You can’t take me away,
On such a warm day.

Tick tock goes the clock,
Before I go away,
But on this summer’s day,
I bid you good day.

I’m smiling, so happy,
On the lovely warm day,
With the carousel spinning,
Everything is okay.

So fluffy and light,
I feel in love at first sight,
Now you join me today,
On this lovely, warm day.
Regine Masilang
You're amazing!! Wish I could write like that? Could you teach me a few things?


Erm.. sure? Well what would you like to learn first? I'm just a sort of self-writer. I kinda taught myself if you know what I mean. I'll try some tips though!
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hilo-lilo


Erm, here it is. I kind of imagined it being sung in a girly, childish voice. And the rythm is like a carousel horse when it goes up and down while spinning, hope it shows then when you read it! heart

Fluffy and Light

So fluffy and light,
I refuse to fight,
You can’t take me away,
On such a warm day.

Tick tock goes the clock,
Before I go away,
But on this summer’s day,
I bid you good day.

I’m smiling, so happy,
On the lovely warm day,
With the carousel spinning,
Everything is okay.

So fluffy and light,
I feel in love at first sight,
Now you join me today,
On this lovely, warm day.
nawrr thank youu >///< will send you trade OuO
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Oh no. It's all fine.
And that was just
dgjfd
amazing ;u ; screams.
How much? I'm not good at pricing such things. emotion_facepalm
xEyeAnonymous
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Oh no. It's all fine.
And that was just
dgjfd
amazing ;u ; screams.
How much? I'm not good at pricing such things. emotion_facepalm


Thanks redface
And its 100g, after the delay knockoff and the roundment. ^.^

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