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so a person made this poem and i just wonder how much this is worth, this person is a starter to this whole writing thing in gaia, and this certainly is not my field for i am an artist and not writer. i just wanted to know what might be the possible price for this poem.

the piece:
you're the flower i see in plains,
you're the blood that runs through my veins,
you're the medicine to remove the pains,
you're the best thing that i could gain.

you're the light i see in cave,
you're the love in my heart that i should save,
you're my heart that i can't live without,
you're the only thing in the world that counts.

you're the person i value the most,
you're the person i should have at any cost,
you're my everything, my world, and my life,
i think i should ask you, will you be my wife?


ok, i know the poem is kinda like a proposal sweatdrop
but please price it? 3nodding

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It's kindve repetitive and doesnt rhyme all the way down.

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hiromi_C


Eh, 1k at most in my opinion; it seems rather dull and needlessly repetitive, with few extravagant words and irregular rhythms and rhymes (the latter being as another has said).

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so a person made this poem and i just wonder how much this is worth, this person is a starter to this whole writing thing in gaia, and this certainly is not my field for i am an artist and not writer. i just wanted to know what might be the possible price for this poem.

the piece:
you're the flower i see in plains,
you're the blood that runs through my veins,
you're the medicine to remove the pains,
you're the best thing that i could gain.

you're the light i see in cave,
you're the love in my heart that i should save,
you're my heart that i can't live without,
you're the only thing in the world that counts.

you're the person i value the most,
you're the person i should have at any cost,
you're my everything, my world, and my life,
i think i should ask you, will you be my wife?


ok, i know the poem is kinda like a proposal sweatdrop
but please price it? 3nodding


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