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Beloved Lunatic

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My name is: ------Lauren
But call me: ------Hatter

Hey, I've been meaning to open up one of these shops for a while. I've been writing poetry and lyrics for two years. I do take requests, as long as I know exactly what it's about. So I may ask questions if you request a certain topic or person. I am more than capable of writing long, short, or just decent sized poems. Songs tend to be long but if you have any problems I am happy to edit and change anything.

I can write to any kind of emotion, Happy, Sad, Depressed, Excited, Love and Poems can be Acrostic, Simile, Normal, etc...

Prices of Poems:
Adverage around 10k+ but it also depends on length.

Lengths For Poems:
Short (6 lines) 5k
Medium (12 lines) 10k
Long (20 lines) 15k
Any Longer... 20k +

Prices of Lyrics
Adverage around 30k+

HOWEVER I am more than happy to negociate with prices

------❤ Examples below ❤

Beloved Lunatic

Poetry Examples



Wish You Could See

I try and pretend it doesn't hurt to see you,
I hide the incoming tears and pretend to smile too.
I wish that you knew the pain that you cause me,
I wish you weren't so blind, that you could see.
I DO see the pain, that I cause you,
I'm afraid there is nothing that I can do.
I don't mean to do it, you know that that's true,
But I still can't find the right things to say to you.
I wish you understood how much you scared me,
Wish you understood, what you cannot see.
Then there's the other, who can see it all,
How close the first can push me to make me fall.
He can help me through it, he helps me deal,
This is because he knows how I feel.



The Hatter and The Barber (Comparing Poem)

The Hatter and the Barber, well, they’re both mad.
One in the crazy way, the other, the bad.
One likes teapots and drinking his tea.
The other likes razors unfortunately.
One lives in a world of wonder, the other a world of hate.
The Hatter has many friends, for the Barber it’s too late.
One lives a happy life, the other a miserable one.
The Hatter wouldn’t hurt a soul, but for the Barber, that’s all his done.
Both of their hairdos are really bizarre.
One has orange hair that stretches near and far.
But the Barber’s hair is black and white.
Seeing his face is quite a sight.
The Hatter is a bundle of fun; he’s always having a ball.
The Barber’s always sulking and he wants to kill us all.
One has the job of making hats, they’re splendid you will see.
The other kills his customers; please don’t let him kill me.

((Mad Hatter, Sweeney Todd))



Teardrop Stains

When I see you smile, it lights up my world,
And all I want, is to be your girl.
When you walk by and say hello,
You make my legs turn into jello.
But you can be so mean and a jerk, that’s right,
But you are the only thing I think of at night.
I’ve written songs about you; it’s sad but true,
Teardrop stains on my guitar; I don’t know what to do.
As I watch you walk away, I shed a few tears,
Because I want you to help me through my fears.
Every day when I see you, I fill up with joy,
And I honestly think you should be my boy.
Teardrop stains on my pillow case, every night where I lay,
Because I hate when you turn away, I want you to stay.
I know it’s no use crying, there’s more fish in the sea,
But I know, you’re the only fish for me.
I make myself look pretty, to see if you notice,
Make-up, flash hair-styles, I hope that you know this.
It’s all done for you, yes, sad but it’s true.
Teardrop stains on everything for you.


The Dragon

He roars like a bear,
His eyes are like crystal balls, they just stare.
His teeth are sharp like knives,
His ears are like microphones, he’ll hear your cries.
He smiles like a demon; it is quite scary to see,
When he opens up his mouth he will probably eat thee.
His breath of flames is like a sauna,
It’ll burn you to a crisp, you’re a goner.
His long scaling body is like a snake,
His tail whips to such great lengths.


The Rain

The raindrops slide down my window.
And I can’t help but smile.
Because even in the bad weather.
You make it all worthwhile.
As the rain continues to fall.
I start to sing and dance.
Because nothing can bring me down.
Nothing stands a chance.
Sometimes that rain resembles tears.
It’s not like that today.
I sit and stare outside.
You make it all okay.
The rain can’t bring me down.
It doesn’t stand a chance.
It may continue to fall.
But I continue to dance.

Beloved Lunatic

Lyric Examples



Did You Reach Your Goal

I want to tell you something, I hope you’ll understand.
After all that you’ve done, I want to hold your hand.
‘Cause my shadow followed when you walked away.
I just wanna say, I don’t feel bad for letting you go.
And now I have to let you know.
That after five text messages and four missed calls.
I don’t feel bad, not even at all.

You could have been my white knight.
And I would have been your princess.
But, oh baby, I want to knock you senseless.
The way you played the game showed me your soul.
May I ask you, dear, did you reach you goal?

So sick to my stomach when I watch you walk by.
Constantly wondering if you even dared to try.
Hope you love what you’ve got before you give it away.
Because I’m okay, I don’t feel bad for letting you go.
And now I have to let you know.
That after five text messages and four missed calls.
I don’t feel bad, not even at all.

You could have been my white knight.
And I would have been your princess.
But, oh baby, I want to knock you senseless.
The way you played the game showed me your soul.
May I ask you, dear, did you reach you goal?

I’ve nearly lost my head, I’m about to lose my mind.
I wanna ask you this question that’s trapped inside.
After replacing my heart with a great big hole.
May I ask you dear, did you reach your goal?

You could have been my white knight.
And I would have been your princess.
But, oh baby, I want to knock you senseless.
The way you played the game showed me your soul.
May I ask you, dear, did you reach you goal?


Here I Stand

You’ve been the best thing to happen to me, and yet I push you away.
Even after what I’ve done, I wish you could stay.
I thought I was protecting you, from getting yourself hurt.
And in all of my attempts, I only ended up treating you like dirt.
But whenever I start to think of you.
I remember how you pushed me through.
And helped me be me....

Here I stand, with my head hung low.
Wondering why I let you go.
If you come back and hold my hand.
I won’t ever make the same mistake again.
But I can’t blame you if you say no.
It was my fault for letting you go.
I know we’ve lost our way, and may never get it back.
But I want you to be there during this heart attack.
You always bought at the best in me.
So why did it take so long for me to see.
But whenever I start to think of you.
I remember how you pushed me through.
And helped me be me....

Here I stand, with my head hung low.
Wondering why I let you go.
If you come back and hold my hand.
I won’t ever make the same mistake again.
But I can’t blame you if you say no.
It was my fault for letting you go.
I don’t have to pretend around you.
Because you don’t care what I do.
You know what to say to get to me.
You know what I need.
So tell me why I let you go....
Here I stand, with my head hung low.
Wondering why I let you go.
If you come back and hold my hand.
I won’t ever make the same mistake again.
But I can’t blame you if you say no.
It was my fault for letting you go.


I Want To Run

I want to run, I want to hide.
Find an abandoned old home and run inside.
I want to scream, I want to shout.
Just want to close the door and block it all out.
I want to fall, I want to cry.
Just take in a deep breath and let out that sigh.
I want to walk, I want to run.
Need to get away from what I have done.

My tears don’t fall, they can’t find their way.
Locked away inside me, there they will stay.
Even if I try, they won’t come through.
So I’ll sit here and hate, not much else to do.
Thank god for the nights, where I lay wide awake.
I sit and think, was this all a mistake?
Thank god for the days, where I stare at the walls.
They’re there to catch me, whenever I fall.

I want to run, I want to hide.
Find an abandoned old home and run inside.
I want to scream, I want to shout.
Just want to close the door and block it all out.
I want to fall, I want to cry.
Just take in a deep breath and let out that sigh.
I want to walk, I want to run.
Need to get away from what I have done.

My smile is fake, but it needs to be there.
Or else I’d sit, and tear out my hair.
I can try and make my smile real.
But it’ll never be like the pain I feel.
Thank god for the rain, I can hide in it now.
For no one will follow, and I won’t allow.
Thank god for my voice, to let out the rage.
Otherwise I’d be forever, locked in a cage.

I want to run, I want to hide.
Find an abandoned old home and run inside.
I want to scream, I want to shout.
Just want to close the door and block it all out.
I want to fall, I want to cry.
Just take in a deep breath and let out that sigh.
I want to walk, I want to run.
Need to get away from what I have done.

I want to run, I want to hide.
Find an abandoned old home and run inside.
I want to scream, I want to shout.
Just want to close the door and block it all out.
I want to fall, I want to cry.
Just take in a deep breath and let out that sigh.
I want to walk, I want to run.
Need to get away from what I have done.
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I would like to order 2 poems..
One is kind of about love...well lost love I guess you'd say. About a pair that still love each other but the guy is in a relationship and she can't bare to show that she loves him because it upsets her? o.o I can't explain. That can be 12 lines.?
One Could you write me a small six lined poem that possibly defines your thoughts on my avi?

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littlelessbroken

I can do that for you. It'll take a week since I'm on holiday with the family and do not have access to a computer (I'm on my phone now) but I'll definitely be working on them smile
Hatter09
littlelessbroken

I can do that for you. It'll take a week since I'm on holiday with the family and do not have access to a computer (I'm on my phone now) but I'll definitely be working on them smile
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Okie. Just quote or PM me when you're finished and I'll send a trade....

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littlelessbroken

I've finished your short poem, I've been away so I haven't been able to work on them since we've been at amusement parks. Still working in your love one.
Hatter09
littlelessbroken

Ive finished your short poem, Ive been away so I havent been able to work on them since weve been at amusement parks. Still working in your love one.
Take your time. :3

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Any other takers?

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Greedy Millionaire

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I'll take 2 poems, as well!
My OC (her name is Micah, if you want to add it) really likes this boy (Richard), whom is actually her enemy at the time. She's a follower/murderer, if you will, whom was listening to orders from a guy she thought she liked. anyways; she got captured and is held in a jail cell for interrogation. Over the time, the boy comes to visit her a lot (brings her food, keeps are company, etc) and they fall for each other.
I'd like two poems, 12 lines or so; one in his P.O.V then another in hers, about their feelings and how they know it's wrong to have said feelings. If that's okay? Or just one from her P.O.V
I'll pay 25-30k? c:

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Little Blu Scout
I'll take 2 poems, as well!
My OC (her name is Micah, if you want to add it) really likes this boy (Richard), whom is actually her enemy at the time. She's a follower/murderer, if you will, whom was listening to orders from a guy she thought she liked. anyways; she got captured and is held in a jail cell for interrogation. Over the time, the boy comes to visit her a lot (brings her food, keeps are company, etc) and they fall for each other.
I'd like two poems, 12 lines or so; one in his P.O.V then another in hers, about their feelings and how they know it's wrong to have said feelings. If that's okay? Or just one from her P.O.V
I'll pay 25-30k? c:


Alright biggrin
I'll see what I can do biggrin

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Hatter09


Wonderful, thank you!

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