Hello, my name is Aaron, and I'm a writing enthusiast. I would just like to say, that I've read over both of your works, and I would love to assist you in critique.
As professionalism goes, true writers learn best from one another. Please let me know if I can, your work is not faulty, but I can make it all the more powerful. I can pull out the potential, where it's sitting on the edge of true greatness.
Neither charge, nor credit needed. Just extending a friendly hand. Willing to provide editations, without hurting the heart of the work. Remove silly tendencies like cliches or improper comma splicing. These are things that are habitual in writing, that take away from the honorifics of English, I'm talking British English, not this 21st century butchery called American English.
I've been writing for six years now. Starting at the age of ten, I've been writing short stories, poetry, research papers, analytical essays, I roleplay advanced literate in guilds and private RPs, and I've written a dissertation for a professor.
From one philomathean to another, I am trying to make a difference in the world. My current aspiration is to become a History teacher specializing in World History, for general secondary education (9th-12th grade). I've been going to an Early College highschool, and I'll graduate with an Associate's Degree, or rather near to one, maybe two - three credits off.
I am an eleventh grader, with a dream to bring a fleeting beauty to this dull and empty world.
Let me know what you think.
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