Writing Contest ( Closed )

[AngelHanten1]

user name angelhanten1
poem type love
poem title without our love

done.. is all it would be if it weren't just you and me. done.. it would be if you wish to ever leave.
love is what the two of us must have.. for without it we would be dead. two sorrows two broken hearts and two dead bodies is what we'll become.. i need you by me holding me kissing me laughing at my dumb jokes that i tell. without you there would be no hope no dreams and no heavens to go to.. so please don't leave me behind for i need you more then this whole world combined..

[Lilly blaze-Hime]

Nu Sanniang

User Name: Nu Sanniang
Story Name: Forever
Type of Story: romance, tragedy
Story:

Aeon walks in the food court with her friends. They dedicated this day as "girls day" in hopes of getting her mind off Jason, her now ex-boyfriend. The now ex couple, had been together since the beginning of Middle school and now in their last year of high school it seems so delusive.

She was there through out his depression. The days he felt alone and empty. The days, where the world was Jason’s enemy and he was the victim. She was there through it all. He would call her late at night simply just to tell her he missed her. He would always hold her hand when together and he made sure when he was around no other girl got more attention and more love then his Aeon. He ate at her house almost everyday, joining her family on family vacations and sometime staying over.. He was her first and he would always give her the satisfaction she needed every time. He would give her presents for no reason and sang her love songs he written.

"Forever I will always love you. Death would not even tear us.” he will say

"I will love you forever. For eons our love will range" she will reply every time.

To think back on those words ached her heart. It was a mistake to leave him. WHY did she leave him? He needed her. He allowed no one near his heart but her. Aeon sigh, lets face it she needed him. He knew her best; he loved her with all her flaws. To think the next guy to come around in her life she would have to start over. Hiding her self in the beginning and slowly warming up to him but here was Jason who already knew and accepts.

If he just wasn't so needy! She couldn't go anywhere without him. His eyes follow her every movement. Always staring and waiting, waiting and staring -Always watching!

Some days, when he wouldn’t sleep over, he would be outside her window all night waiting for her to come out the next morning. When he did slept over he would often times watch her sleep. So intensely was his gaze watching the rise and fall of chest, leaning over listening to her heart beat. She would wake in the morning his callous steel gray eyes would penetrate through her leaving her breathless often times.

Jason loved to drag her away from her friends and accuse her of not thinking about him. She pleaded with him many days assuring him she loved him. She isolates herself from friends and family, spending her time only with him, it was exhausting.

But it was a small price to pay when you're in love and she was. She loves him even with his flaws. She rather spend the rest of her life assuring her love than to be without him.

"Aeon? Aeon are you thinking about Jason again?" ask one of her friends. Aeon was about to open her mouth to speak.

'I am going back to Jason. I love him and he loves me. I can’t stand the thought of knowing he's no longer in my life. Thank you guys for everything. But I know where I belong.’ Aeon would have said.

"Aeon? Aeon are you thinking about Jason again?" Aeon was about to open her mouth to speak when a loud bang rang out. Screams were everywhere and Aeon fell to the floor.

"AEON!!" Her friends shriek, as they ran for cover. Aeon put her hand to her chest blood beginning to gush out of her mouth. She would soon die. She focuses her eyesight one last time to see her shooter.

Jason mouthed the words 'Death would not even tear us'.

'For eons our love will range" was her final thought before she died.

Jason made his way to his Aeon.

"Forever Aeon. Wait for me in hell." he puts the mouthpiece of the gun to his mouth and pulls the trigger.
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[Lilly blaze-Hime]

Barghest_Fenrir_Cerberus

Poem
User Name: Barghest_Fenrir_Cerberus
Kind of Poem: Rhyming
Poem Type: Self-therapy, self-evaluation
Poem Name: The Three-Headed Dog
Poem:

I walk into the office, we're ready for the scheduled meeting
It seems our demons are pestering him, so they've begun feeding
His case is severe, we're starting to lose our mind
We ready our pen and paper, he begins to unwind

"It sickens us everytime I look in the mirror
The furious coward staring back at us begins to shiver
He's worthless, we're disgusted, his life is a bad dream
Hiding behind lyricism, voiceless text on a screen"

"He aspires to be great, but we know its damn near impossible
We're smart enough to get a real job, but his plan is illogical
Threw away his social life to scribble, we think its good writing
But he's the most biased critic, we're arguing, internally fighting"

The therapists are finished evaluating him, we've made our analysis
The imaginaries in his head, are still in ours, trapped via paralysis
We are one, the body of the beasts, the peak, nothing could get further than us
He is three, the dogs of legend, the Barghest, Fenrir and Cerberus

[Lilly blaze-Hime]

Vicky Nicky B

Username: Vicky Nicky B
Title: Life or so I thought
Genre: Horror
Type: Short Story

“OMG Brittany!!!” Jennifer yelled from across the table at me. “I know right. Jake totally asked me out and I totally said yes and then he said he would pick me up tomorrow night at 8.” I shrieked back at her. She was my best friend. I was the queen of the entire school so I don’t see why she or anyone for that matter would be surprised that the hottest boy in school asked me out. Jennifer was just like that. Everything surprises her. We are both on the cheerleading squad and I am the leader in that too. I am pretty much the center of everyone’s attention. Suddenly Jake walked by and did his signature hair flip and said in his amazingly hot voice “Hey Babe.” I smiled. I couldn’t believe it toke him this long to ask me out. I mean it is pretty obvious that we were meant for each other. I mean I am the hottest girl in school and the most popular and he is the hottest boy in the school and he is the most popular boy. I have been waiting for him to ask me out for like 3 years. I stopped him while he was trying to pas by. I asked him to sit down for a minute. He sat down and all the girls at my table practically fainted. Except for Jennifer. She literally fainted. But I paid no attention to her. I was to busy focusing on Jake. I leaned in towards him to kiss him but he didn’t kiss me. “You ok???” I asked him but when I opened my eyes he was over by Jennifer helping her. “Toke you long enough Brittany. Don’t you pay attention to your best friend when she faints???” Jackie said to me snottily. “Actually I didn’t see her faint. Jerk.” I said getting up to go throw away my low fat yogurt cup. Being popular has it’s advantages and only one disadvantage, You have to always look the best. You have to be skinny and so I have been fasting. But the only problem is that my mom found out and she’s making me eat again. Ugg… Parents. It’s like they don’t get you at all. So I have been eating twice a week. I always have a low fat yogurt and in front of my mom I eat carbs like bread and stuff so she thinks I’m eating. I threw my yogurt away and sat down and Jake kissed me and said “See you later babe.” I nearly passed out. After lunch I had math and science. Then I was picked up by Jennifer’s mom. She brought me home. I stepped out of Jennifer’s Van and said bye. I walked inside and went into my room and laid on my bed. I picked up my Ipod touch and started listening to my favorite songs. I started to drift away into a peaceful sleep.
I woke up the next morning and got ready for school. I got my clothes on and noticed my parents weren’t around. Yay!!! I thought in my head because then I wouldn’t have to eat and I could stay skinny. I walked outside and walked to school. But there was no one around. Which was really weird cause usually there are joggers and stuff but there weren’t even cars or busses around. Just total silence. It was really weird. I arrived at school and walked in. There was no one around. Not Jennifer, Not bratty Jackie, Not the principal, no one. I walked around and saw a window that looked really weird. It looked as if it was looking into my room. I opened it and climbed in and strangely enough it lead me to my room. But there was a girl who looked exactly like me sleeping on my bed. She had the same blonde hair as me, the same hairstyle, the same clothes as me, the same perfect nose, the same bright blue eyes, and the same strawberry peach pink paradise nail polish, the same everything. “Hey who the hell are you??? What are you doing here???” I shouted at her. It startled her enough to wake up. She screamed and I asked her the same thing again. “What am I doing here??? This is my house what are you doing here???” She yelled at me jumping to her feet. Then I had a flashback to philosophy class. Mr.Jonahan was talking about life and he asked us if we were sure we were real. Then he told us that for all we know we could be a figment of someone else’s imagination. Like that we were a part of someone’s dreams or something. Then I realized that I must have been part of her dream. Then I immediately apologized and then realized that I could really live if I killed her. So I challenged her to try to beat me at a fight. But then I realized that since she dreamed me she could dream of something to kill me. I quickly grabbed a pencil off of the floor and stabbed her in the eye with it. She screamed with pain and suddenly a murderer appeared out of no where with a knife. He stabbed me and I fell over. With my last dieing breaths I saw him disappear and the real me laugh at me. But I swore to myself that one day I would be real just like her.

[Lilly blaze-Hime]

Just a reminder, the contest ends the 9th and I will stop accepting entrys the 10th.
so today and tomorrow is your LAST chance to submit me your entry.

WARNING: I have pmed all of those who posted their entry in the forum and didnt pm, and those who pmed me and didnt fill out your entry fourm. This is your last chance as well. RESUBMIT your entry following the rules or your entry will NOT be judged.

Side Note: I recently have gotten a lot of home work from my teachers, so until I get it all done I can not judge properly, so the winners may have to wait a bit before recieveing their prizes, I do apologise for that, but do not worry. You WILL get them smile

[AngelHanten1]

user name angelhanten1
poem name: This peace
poem type: ryme

There is peace in my soul
For such a long awaited time
There is love in my life
A love of melody and rhyme.

Once you took hold of my heart
I knew no other could have reached
As whispered fate took my hand
To levels only you could reach.

You in my life
Will live eternally
I knew the first night we met
You were meant for me.

[Lilly blaze-Hime]

The contest is officaly closed pending one entry,
someone contacted me asking if it was to late to submit his entry for the contest, it was sent before midnight on the 9th and I wasn't online to accept it, so I am giving him the chance to get it to me today before midnight, since it was my fault he didnt get it in on time. (once again wasnt online)

Thankyou to those of you who have entered.

To those of you who didnt follow the submission rules:
1) P.M. me the entry
2) Fill out the entry fourm
3) Only ONE entry per person.

I messaged all of you asking to resubmit to make it an offical entry, and since you failed to do so your entries will NOT be judeged, I am sorry for this, but all of you had time to re-submitt. It is too late to do so now, the only reason I am accepting 1 more entry is listed above. I hope to get to judgeing in the next day or so, I will post the winners in the fourm as well as message them and send them a trade request so they can get their prizes.

There will be an honarble mentions post, giving the runners up.

Thank you all once again, and once I get this last entry (hopfully. if it isnt in by midnight my time I wont be accepting it). I hope to start judging. smile

[Lilly blaze-Hime]

HiddenFrostDragon

User Name:HiddenFrostDragon
Kind of Poem: Sonnet
Poem Type: Futuristic
Poem Name: The Never-ending War
Poem: A dreadful noise breaks from the silent room.
Its sad and mournful notes beseech thine ears.
This song I speak of tells of future doom
and punishment issued by metal gears.

Through blood and fire, these soldiers of the night
will battle on. Their wounded stay behind.
Without purpose, these insane monsters smite
their enemies with swords they need not grind.

A never-ending war has purged the earth
of all that once was good, while sanity
has taken a back seat. Like tides and surf,
the black water has claimed humanity

While humankind might suffer such a fate,
it all can come to pass without the hate.

[pious_justice]

best of luck, hiddenfrost. you will need it. all of these entries are good, and i also wish all those who entered the best of luck.

[Lilly blaze-Hime]

Update:

I am so sorry that I have not juded your entries yet, I got overwhelmed by my home work load. ( college...v.v teahcers tend to load home work on you like you are only taking their class) but I got a good portion of it done, and I hopefully can get the rest of it done by the end of tonight if not by friday and I will hopefully start looking over your entries by Saturday. Once again I am so sorry that it is taking me so long.

[HiddenFrostDragon]

Lilly blaze-Hime

Update:

I am so sorry that I have not juded your entries yet, I got overwhelmed by my home work load. ( college...v.v teahcers tend to load home work on you like you are only taking their class) but I got a good portion of it done, and I hopefully can get the rest of it done by the end of tonight if not by friday and I will hopefully start looking over your entries by Saturday. Once again I am so sorry that it is taking me so long.

understandable. even high school teachers are like that... other than the workload.

[Lilly blaze-Hime]

Update:
Okay, I have finished my home work for the week, I will take the rest of the night off of work ( reading/ writing on my own stories) then I will start looking over all of your writings tomorrow and hopefully have the results at the latest by sunday, if anything else comes up to delay me announcing the winners I will let you know.

[Lilly blaze-Hime]

Update:
I have started to look over your entires, and I am scoring them based on spelling, grammar, sentence structure, and personal appeal. I have a friend helping me score. Each of us will give you a score out of 40 meaning a total score out of 80. the ones with the highest scores will win. I hope to get the results tonight, but I may not be able to, if I can I will, if I cant look for for updates. Thank you for waiting.

[Lilly blaze-Hime]

Update:
I have finished scoreing your entries. However I cant announce the winner like I had planned to do. I have a 2nd person looking over your entires so you will get more than just my view on it. I will hopefully get them to you tomorrow ( once agian so sorry for the delay. )

[Lilly blaze-Hime]

Update:
Okay something came up and my second judge cant finish scoreing your entires ( dont worry about it things happen) so I will do some editing to my score sheet and I WILL get you your results TONIGHT. smile