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Hello fellow gaians, this is the first writing contest I am hosting. I will start with what you will win, 1st place will win 16,800 gold, 2nd place will get a “Korora plush penguin”, and 3rd place will get 7 things of ink ( 1, yellow and gold, 2 brown, and 3 green). Now I will ask for you to check your spelling and your grammar before you submit, and I will also ask you to pm me your entry from and the story, and I will post them myself in the forum. ( Everyone will be going for the same prize, despite what writing you chose. )

Here are the types of writing you can present:
Short Story ( keep it around pg-13 please)
Fan Fiction ( you can chose either the Hunger Games ( only the first book) or Harry Potter, )
Short-Short ( Like a sort story, but shorter in length, once again keep it around pg-13 about a half page to a page long)
Poem ( Free Verse, Rhyming, Haiku: Three lined poem with the 1st and 3rd line having five syllables and the 2nd having seven, or a Tanka: a five lined poem with the 1st and 3rd lines having five syllables and the rest having seven)

Only one entry per person

Entry Forms:

Short Story:
User Name:
Story Name:
Type of Story: ( romance, horror, adventure, etc)
Story:

Short-Short:
User Name:
Story Name:
Type of Story: ( romance, horror, adventure, etc)
Story:

Fan fiction:
User name:
Fan fiction type: ( Hunger games ( ONLY the first book, I havent managed to get the others or), Harry Potter)
Name of Fan fiction:
Story:

Poem:
User Name:
Kind of Poem: ( Tanka, Haiku, Free verse, or rhyming)
Poem Type: ( nature based, love, sadness, etc. )
Poem Name:
Poem:

Good Luck everyone, the contest will close for judging in one month : Feb. 9th

Once again, I will be looking at the poems and stories for the same prize, Don’t think you have to write a story to be able to win, poetry can outshine stories depending on how well they are written. Good Luck to all.
Also please title the P.M.s with your writing
LillyBlaze Writing Contest
or name it based on what type of writing you are doing.
Once again Good Luck and Have fun!

Any Genre is welcome, Suicide, Romance, Mystery, I want to give as much creative freedom as I can, the one exception is the fan fiction, and the only reason that is, is that It's been a while since I have read some books, and I want to be a fair judge. It wouldn't be fair if someone did a work I was familer with, and some one did a story that I wasn't. The fanfiction about the story I know would most likly get more favor.

I WILL try and announce the winners as close to Feb 10-14th as I can, I have started back to school, and I will be doing home work before judeing everyones work, but I will try to announce as soon as I can after the closeing date.
Sin of the Night


Poem

User Name: Sin Of The Night
Kind of Poem:Rhyming
Poem Type: Dark, sad, Based Off original fairy tale
Poem Name: Red Riding Hood
Poem:

Grandmother is sick,
Mother bakes sweets,
Put them in the basket quick,
Off to listen to melodious tweets,
Don't cut through the woods,
Stay on the path,
And deliver the goods,
The darkness a bloodbath,
The wolf's eyes blood red,
You wonder through the trees,
The hunter is already dead,
The wolf's other desire sprees,
Red riding coat torn apart,
As he goes for his goal,
And takes what's close to your heart,
His fur and heart as black as coal,
The beast learned of no hate,
As he licks the wounds clean,
Little Red Riding Hood his mate,
In the woods dark gleam.
The Solarised Night
Short Story:
User Name: The Solarised Night
Story Name: Marionettes of Despair
Type of Story: horror
Story:


He licked the blood off of his blade and savoured the rusty salinity that coated his tongue. His gloved hands reverently slid along the hilt of his switchblade. Beside him, a woman clicked her tongue impatiently as she watched him toy with a corpse. The man shrieked with delight as he saw his victim’s limb twitch.
“Oh look; this nerve is still functioning!” he gasped, prodding flesh with the knife. Each stroke was made with precision; every droplet that coloured the tip was an object of marvel --only blood made dying real.
“Didn’t your mother ever tell you not to play with your food?” the woman huffed. Large reptilian wings extended from the middle of her shoulder blades. Her wings’ scaly tendrils were separated by a webbed membrane; each tip tapered to a claw. Kizor grinned beneath his shock of red hair.
“What would be the purpose of this vicious slaughter if denied myself the pleasure?” he whispered. A swirl of playful malice seeped through his slitted pupils. She flicked her hair behind her ears without response and left him to his maniacal scrutiny.
“I can’t quite grasp how you find enjoyment in killing; they are just petty humans,” she added indifferently. Kizor closed his eyes with a smile, re-enacting the experience within his mind.
“Their pleas excite me, as I fondle with their fears and memories. I taste of their very life-force the moment their eyes glaze over and they choke on their last silent scream,” he explained.
Serena oiled her way into his arms in a slick, fluid movement.
“I love it seeing you so passionate, even if she was only a weakling,” she nodded towards the dead woman in front of them.
“You should know by now that I do not discriminate simply because they are weak,” Kizor laughed “I don’t care whether they are human or hybrid, black or white, young or old; I am quite happy to kill them all.”
Serena folded her wings back in a swift swoop.
“Your current preference for the mortals has caused quite the controversy between human and hybrid relations,” Serena simpered. Despite her attempt to appear neutral, a trace of concern laced her words.
“I would hunt more of our kin, had the senate not decided to ostracise those of ‘non-human status.’ It is a rather dismal attempt to stop my hunt; human laws don’t apply for us,” Kizor scoffed. He stood up, kicking the body aside.
“You found one to play with about a week ago, didn’t you? A nymph if I recall correctly,” she asked curiously.
“Your memory serves you well however, I had a little too much fun. The vessel was destroyed a few hours ago; his mind couldn’t handle the intrusion.”
“Hmm, that sounds a little troublesome,” Serena sighed
“No matter; there are other ways to satisfy my thirst. Shall we find another?” Kizor held out his arm. He enticed the succubus to partake with a smouldering stare. Serena smiled and entwined his fingers around her own.
“Sure, but only if you’ll spend a bit of private time with me later,” she growled seductively. Kizor shrugged off the charm that would have clouded the minds of lesser men.
“We’ll see,” he said, apathetically. Serena’s wings batted once, as if to stretch weary muscles, before she followed the puppet-master.

They strolled confidently through the streets, completely aware that people watched them, too horrified to emerge from the shadows. Skulking down alleys and secluded lanes, they scanned the night for their next victims. Serena’s ears perked up at the echoes of jingling keys and heavy boots. As Kizor stepped forward, chuckles amongst the bantering men ceased; all three wore cobalt uniforms.
“What business do you two have this late at night?” One of them asked as another raised a torch. The silhouette of webbed wings was illuminated in a glossy gleam.
“What the hell is that?” the third guard gasped. Serena flexed her deltoids and bared fangs as the torch bearer shouted,
“They’re wings! Shoot the b***h!”

An ear-piercing screech escaped her lips as the succubus beat her wings threateningly. Two of the guards flinched, while the third advanced cautiously. With a forceful strike, the approaching guard was knocked off his feet. From the ground, the breeze agitated his face; it tingled where he was struck. The first guard rushed to aid.
“Dave! Are you okay?” Dave gagged slightly in response. Two deep gashes, one across the forehead and the other over his cheek, swelled rapidly.
“I wouldn’t touch him if I were you,” Serena chimed.

David howled; his skin sizzled and blistered. His hands flew the wounds as he hoped for some comfort but within seconds he withdrew them. Waxy flesh melted away from his fingers as he watched in horror. The first guard stumbled backwards in panic.
“Help me!” David gurgled. Sickening screams and tortured sobs were choked into silence. His cheek decomposed and the tongue fell to the concrete beside his exposed jawbone. Both of his comrades were helpless against the venom that dissolved through David’s torso. His legs remained intact; they were attached to a mass of skeletal remains and the muscle tissue that clung, in gooey clumps around his rib cage.
“Well that was fun,” Kizor chuckled “It’s my turn now.”

The guard, who had backed away, drew his pistol with an unsteady hand. With a shark-like grin, Kizor’s gaze pierced through the mind of the second guard. So your name is Michael. Kizor echoed in a sinister whisper. The hybrid’s lips remained drawn back like sanguine curtains and exposed the sadistic ivories; they had remained motionless. Boo! Kizor roared mentally.

Before Michael could draw his gun, a swarm of wasps droned and buzzed around him. He swatted at the air around him, which only proved to provoke a bombardment of sings. Sharp, throbbing jabs struck at his skull; tiny needles were felt prickling his grey matter. Kizor cackled out loud while his victim dropped his gun and pressed his fists over his ears, much to the bewilderment of the captain.
“What the hell is wrong with you?” he growled.

Michael’s muscles petrified; fear gnawed away all sense of logic. The wicked smile branded his mind with permanent torment. He knew if he survived the night, that grin would taunt him forever. The master of manipulation delved deeper into Michael’s darkest memories. He scratched at the surface and scraped out the greasy debris of long-forgotten sentiments. The chill of Kizor’s presence was amplified as he flicked through the scrapbook of memory.

Michael fell to his knees, groaning in mental anguish --for even the most sheltered minds host putrid fragments. Whether they have been swept under the carpet, frayed with guilt, or lurk in neglected cavities, Kizor will drag out the worst experiences he can find.
“David is dead. I know he was your mate, but if you don’t get your a** off the ground, you will be too,” the captain barked.
“Get up!” Michael did not respond; he was absorbed into the depths of regret.

Completely ignorant to the other man, Kizor locked his gaze with the tortured lamb that writhed and groaned before him. Don’t look away.
“Stay away from him! Get back, you mongrel!” The captain tried to maintain his composure as he shuffled closer to the hybrid. Serena took an intimidating step forward; Kizor signalled for her to stop. Both Serena and the captain paused as the puppet-master remained locked into mental conquest. Michael’s arm abruptly swung around and gripped the captain’s shin.
“What the ******** is wrong with you! Let go of me!”

Michael squeezed tighter as his captain squirmed to get free. The captain noticed Michael’s hazel eyes changed to a ghastly blue – akin to those of his captor.
“Mmm, I wonder what your knee tastes like,” Michael wheezed. The blue, cotton trouser leg was ripped open like a plastic bag in Michael’s fist. He giggled and dragged his tongue over the captain’s knee cap. The captain struggled in disgust and gave a swift boot to the side of Michael’s head; it produced no reaction. Michael sneered idly without the devotion that was required. His features were hollowed and barren.
“Bleh your knee is hairy. Do I have hair stuck in my teeth?” he asked and displayed his teeth for inspection.

An icy chill ran down the captain’s spine. The sudden realisation crept over him that, to these monsters, possession was a sport and he was the game. Once they disposed of Michael, he would be next. What would it be like having those…things in my head? The captain looked down at the pitiful shell of his subordinate; he was no longer recognisable. The shadow of Michael’s former self flickered through the bars of his cage, though he lacked the strength to break through Kizor’s iron grasp.

What must he be going through? The thought made the captain shudder. I can’t fight them; I need to get away! It felt as though his heart was being constricted within his chest as the foul creatures inspected his reactions.
“He has caught on to us,” Kizor droned. “His analysis taints his blood with an alkaline taste; I can smell it from here. It is hardly worth the effort to season him with fear. I gave him too long to think and now he has gone stale,” he said and clicked his fingers. Michael let go of the captain and gripped the dagger that was dropped into his hands.
“What a pity. Kill him,” Kizor shrugged.

Michael ran forth and lifted the weapon above his head. As he was about to drive the knife down, his muscles cried in protest. Every fibre of his being fought against Kizor’s control. He squeezed his eyes shut to focus on his internal struggle. With a tug of will, the incontrollable urge to plunge the dagger into his superior’s throat vanished. All was silent and still. He cringed in anticipation.

A warm gush at his wrist confirmed the worst; he couldn’t bear to open his eyes. Open them; take a look at your hand. A squelching gag rattled through the air as Michael’s eyelids were peeled back. The hilt remained firmly in his hand as his eyes skated over the train wreck he had wrought. Michael’s fist had penetrated through the captain’s throat; the knife had severed the captain’s brain stem.

He tried to let go but his hand stubbornly gripped tighter. A rebellious plunge was followed by the crunch of metal against bone. Whenever he tried to look away from the brutal disfigurement, his glance was unwillingly snapped back. Now look what you have done. That man was your friend. He was helpless. the spectral tone murmured. You’re a murderer.
“No! I-“
“You killed him,” Kizor interrupted. Electric-blue irises radiated toxic quantities of self-loathing into Michael’s mind. Every shred of confidence he once possessed was plucked from him; it left him hollow. The void was quickly filled with remorse and disgust until the baneful emotions leaked from his pores. The whole world seemed to contract around him. Unseen eyes and silent tongues scorned him.
“Just ******** kill me already!” he spat.
“You have the means,” Serena replied. She nodded towards the dagger twirling around Michael’s fingertips. He paused. Is this a trick? He knew it would end the pending torment and night-terrors. Would they be merciful? Maybe they want to see me crumble. He closed his eyes and braced himself.
One…Two…Three.

An explosive projection of images burst into his mind. Illusion blended with reality as memory reeled and flickered. The warmth of his kitten as she kneaded his stomach, the sound of his mother’s heartbeat from the womb and the texture Vick’s VapoRub being smothered on his six-year-old chest, all coaxed him into a false sense of security – the thoughts blotched away his guilt. He lowered the dagger to his side.

“Isn’t that nice?” Kizor chirped patronizingly. With a stamp of his feet, spur-like razors emerged from the toes of the boots.
“Don’t come any closer!” Michael waved his weapon threateningly. His palm opened involuntarily and allowed the metal to tinker on the road. Kizor clicked his tongue.
“Tsk, you should know better than that.” He walked over and brushed spidery fingers across Michael’s cheek. Unable to move, the man tried to ignore the glacial prickle against his stubble.
“It seems you need a shave. Here, let me give you a hand,” Kizor breathed. With inhuman speed, he leapt off the ground. The hybrid spun in a whirlwind of motion and delivered a tornado kick that peeled away the surface of Michael’s chin. Michael cried in agony, his raw sinews burned in the breeze. He turned to run.

“Are leaving so soon? Why don’t you stay a little longer?” Kizor sneered. Michael managed to reach the road before Kizor launched at him and slashed at his hamstrings. The guard plummeted to the bitumen. His body, grazed and bruised, thrashed against the invisible weights that pinned him face down. Kizor walked up slowly. His kick-blades smiled dangerously in the glimmer of street lamps. In an instant, he sliced open the the cobalt guard’s uniform. The night air flew up the legs of exposed satin boxers. Michael yelped – that was a little too close for comfort.
“What are you going to do to him?” Serena asked eagerly. Kizor ignored her and blew a billow of air over the nape of his slave’s neck. Michael shivered. The sting of a razor trailed right down to his thighs. Fists were clenched and teeth were ground as Kizor’s foot traced cross-hatch patterns over his prey’s rump. The movements were smooth and slow like those of a scalpel, until it was ripped away.

The blade was thrust into Michael’s colon. Screams could be heard from miles away yet no one dared interfere. The puppet-master twisted his ankle back and forth; his kick-blade scraped against the torn rectal tissue with each turn. He yanked downwards and carved through to Michael’s testicles. With a cruel leer, the manipulator hacked through the man’s scrotum, and swung his foot to Michael’s throat.
“It was fun while it lasted,” Kizor admitted before he stomped down and stifled the guard’s last groan.

Blood splattered against his ashen face is delectable contrast. He kicked repeatedly into the motionless heap at his feet and watched the life ooze away from the source. Puncture wounds draped the body in a curtain of red. He giggled in a fit of ecstasy as flesh squished and squirted with every punt.

The puppet-master gleefully continued to disfigure the remains until a hiss caught his attention.
“Killing humans is rather dull,” Serena huffed as she observed the aftermath. “The thrill extinguishes too quickly. Mine didn’t even put up a fight.”
“I don’t believe the taste of fear will ever get old,” he replied
“We best return before dawn,” the succubus sighed wearily.
Having consumed their fill of blood and slaughter, they slipped into the shadows leaving only carnage in their wake.
Thecrazymusicgirl
User Name:Thecrazymusicgirl
Story Name:Sallina's Story
Type of Story:horror
Story:Sallina’s story
“I can’t find your sister Sally. Where did she go?”
“Oh don’t’ worry about it mother. You just sit back and relax. She’s never coming home.”
“What?”
“You heard me mother. You’ll never see her again. But I will, one last time.” And with that, Andrea left the house, leaving her mother worried and confused.
Coral couldn’t see clearly. She thought she would have a heart attack. Her fingers trembled as she picked up the newspaper, adjusted her glasses so she can read properly, and stared. Her daughter Andrea left the house two days ago, and was now printed that she was dead. Murdered.
Gone.
What was going on? Where did her daughter go that night? Where did both daughters go? They both left the house, one claiming her sister would not come back, but the other is now dead. What was Andrea hiding from her? Something that caused death…..Coral could feel her heart beating fast. She was all alone now, without a husband or children. They’ve all disappeared or were found dead. Coral suddenly had a frightening thought…was she next? Would she be dead soon? Is her life in danger? She couldn’t imagine….
Tears start to roll down Coral’s face. Her daughters were hiding something, and they never told her. One way to find out. Coral got up and ran upstairs to Andrea’s room, and begun her search. She didn’t know however, how dangerous these secrets were. She opened up Andrea’s top desk drawer, and gasped. A notebook, wrapped with ribbons tightly…Those secrets inside could kill her. They could steal her soul…..
SALLY’S STORIES.
“Sally.” A voice whispers to her ears, and Sally grew more scared. “I’m alone, I’m alone.” She said softly back to the voice, hoping it’ll go away. But the voice continued to breathe, louder and louder into her ears. “But I can’t leave Sally, no matter what you try to do. I can read you mind, I can steal your soul.” Sally shook her head. “I know you won’t take my soul. Or else you wouldn’t be here. My story is told and sealed with a ribbon. Anyone who visits me by this hollow tree either wants to die with me or take my burdens. I am protected by the ribbon seal.” Inside, her mind raced. She remembers also that someone would come for her, and it’ll be her sister. “I can’t return home again. I hope you’ll forgive me.” Sally told the voice, and the voice slithered away. Sally knew that the voice was just temptation of leaving the forest, something she can’t even do. “I can feel the night attacking.” Sally was speaking out of her mind. She concentrates her sight of the pond in front of her. It looked deep enough to cover her body, and so desperately does she want to jump in and drown. Sally started tearing up, remembering once again her sister was dead. Her twin sister...Andrea…is dead.
Andrea wasn’t killed though, as people had said. Andrea drowned, in the pool right in front of Sally now. She had tried to reach her sister from the other side, but failed. Sally was hoping Andrea would be the one who dies next to her here, but instead she drowned in the pond.
The pond was also deadly. And dark. Its sprit is moving silently. It has its own life, its own powers. At least, Sally should know this. Her story told her, her story could speak to her….Sally suddenly started to breathe hard. Now she realized why her sister had to die. The pond should know why at least…her sister must’ve said something that affects the flow of this story. “Be careful what you say, especially to mom.” Was Sally’s warning…and now Andrea must’ve broke it.
Halloween is here…just the time Sally had been waiting for. Each ribbon in her notebook…would increase her death painfully. She needed this, to repay for her father. She had murdered her father, and this is her consequence. Killing her father was an accident, but keeping it from her mother was not. She had managed to hide evidence and trouble from her mother and everyone because of the ribbon seals…her stories are protected.
Sally knew that her mother would try to find out everything, by looking into Andrea’s and her room. But knowing her mother too well, the seals must stay tight. Or her mother would be in grave danger. Anything goes wrong or denies the story, would kill her. That was what happened to Andrea…a sudden death by a simple story….a story Sally had written herself. Now with that, Sally had one last thing to do:
Die.
She had to die. It was simple. She knew this would cause many grief to her mother, but she did kill her father and carried that burden ever since. Sally looked at the forest ahead of her, and then turned around to look at the hollow tree she had been hiding in for hours. The tree suddenly moved. Its hole had gotten bigger, and Sally’s heart thud. They were coming, her witnesses to see her death. Just as they would come at this time in her story. “Your stories are screaming our name.” whispered a voice, and Sally nodded. “Imagination. Yes, a strong will of death, yet I brought it to life.” She replied hastily. “It’s October, the day humans celebrate Halloween. I see you’ve locked yourself inside a forest for this. Doesn’t all this scare you one bit?”
Failure. False information. Sleeping alone.
Sally realized her stories were real, they come alive. They also cause death, locking your heart inside. She looked at the two creatures now. They had human bodies, but their faces were messed up. Their eyes were lopsided, and their smiles just made it creepier. Sally could see not eyeballs, and also she couldn’t break free from the horror they were piercing in her soul. “Darling, you’re forgiven. Sweetie, you can go home.” Sally shook her head. “In the end one day, I shall die anyway. But why with no purpose? Kill me, my love ones.” Sally reached into her dress pocket and pulled out a pocketknife, took the knife part out, and held it towards them. “Before I kill you.” She said sweetly. “You don’t’ know forgiveness?” One of them said. “You try to persuade us to kill you faster. It doesn’t work that way. Your death is yours alone. We witness.”
Isn’t something missing?
Sally knew what it was. Her love was fading away. She couldn’t concentrate anything but on her fate of dying. That was what she had worked on for weeks. “Even though I will die, I still can’t repay things.” Sally laughed bitterly. “I was always alone. Andrea was just my sister, nothing more. Why, twin sisters can’t resist but care what the other one is doing, can’t they?” The creatures looked at each other, then back at Sally. “We’re twins.” They replied smoothly. “Well, mark my words. I will stay missing. Whether I was at home or not.” The forest shook hearing those words, the winds blowing fiercely. Sally could see dark faces on the trees, hating her with all their might. Sally laughed once more, and the witnesses sat down by the hollow tree to watch.
Sally walked slowly to the pond, looking at it lovingly. It showed in her eyes, because it was where she’ll die. “I believe you’ll increase my pain, will you?” she bent down and smooth her fingers in the pond, and the pond shimmers its water towards her. “Don’t’ worry.” Sally felt like she was talking to her sister. “I’ll lie down by the grave with you. My grave-“ Sally pointed straight ahead at the empty spot, where trees weren’t planted at. “Will be right there. I shall die, and you creatures shall bury my body.” The creatures heard this, and nodded. “Go on.” They encouraged her. “Leave this broken world and slowly sink in. The pond will do the rest.
Doesn’t anyone know that your sister is suffering?
Doesn’t anyone care about feelings? It’s affecting your sister’s health,
I can’t handle your daughter. She’s scaring me!
Sally suddenly realized that ever since she had stepped in the pond, she was already halfway down. Her waist was covered with dark shimmering water, which seems to have its own evil soul. The forest lives, and she should know. “I lived such a misunderstanding life. But that’s okay. Smile and live on.” she whispered, and her neck soon was also covered with water. She looked up, and saw nothing but trees. She closed her eyes, thinking back towards her empty life.
“Sister.” Cried Andrea. “Don’t show me your writing ever again! You gave me nightmares!
“They’re only stories….”
“They’re REAL!”
Sally gave a low moan, and she went under. She could feel her body turn colder and colder, and soon her heart and soul was ice frozen. She couldn’t breathe, but she could think. As she closed her eyes to die, she could feel pain inside her body.
I’m coming Andrea. I’ll lie down beside you and search for you. We’re both dead now. When you died, I never felt sadness. My sadness is gone, my love is gone. My understanding is gone, my hope is gone. All which I stored in…
MY STORIES.
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User Name:
Kind of Poem: free verse
Poem Type: fantasy
Poem Name:The Light
Poem:
Since you been gone,
Only darkness filled me,
The light faded and hope was lost,
but you came and saved me,
guided me out of the darkness,
and into the light.
When we both rest in peace,
we will go up the ladder,
through the light, to eaven forever.

i hope you like my poem once i won 1st prize in a poem contest
so i hope i win again biggrin POOF! ninja ninja eek (disapears)
I will say this once again, since it can be over read
Only entrys submitted to me in the form of a Private Message can be officaly entered into the contest, ones posted directly into the forum will not be accepted, however you can re send it in a Private message, I am sorry if this is inconvient for anyone, but the other contestants have followed that rule, and it is only fair if others do so as well. The offical entrys will be reposted in the form by me.

One more time
ONLY enterys submitted to me in a PM will be accpeted, those who post them in the forum will recieve a PM from me asking you to resubmitt it to me in a PM, if not im afraid I can not accept your entry.
thejade9
Short Story:
User Name: thejade9
Story Name: The Visitor
Type of Story: Drama
Story:

Initial interception has been dispatched. Memory integration commencing in thirty minutes. Clean up crew is en-route. Will arrive in approximately twenty-eight minutes.

The visitor stood over the body, staring down at the crumpled woman with disdain. It was unsightly to see a young woman, with her beautiful curly hair, handsomely formed lips and nose, and sharp jawline, lying so still on the floor. Her almond-colored eyes were open, left open, and the brown that once was alive only revealed a pool of silent blackness.

The woman was dead. No more breaths. No more agony. Just dead.

There was blood underneath her body, thick and maroon, like a gutted antelope. Even her skin color was the same complexion as an antelope, except there seemed to be a slight purple-gray tint underneath the skin’s surface. It was the color of death. Although her legs and arms lay flat on the floor, lifeless, her shape was voluptuous. Her breasts were big, hardly hidden beneath the light blue shirt she wore. Her wide hips, clad in black shorts, revealed that this woman could give any man a good time.

The visitor bent down to find the origin of the blood. There was a gash beneath her ribs, but it wasn’t very large. On closer inspection, the visitor realized what had killed the woman. The weapon that made the wound in her body had been angled upwards underneath her ribs, most likely piercing part of her diaphragm and lung, and causing her to suffocate while bleeding out.

All in all, it didn’t seem like a fantastic way to die. Besides instant deaths, the visitor saw all other deaths as cruel punishments. No time to relive the entire childhood. No time to see what one should’ve done with their lives. Just the truth of death—it swiftly takes what took a long time to create without discrimination.

The visitor stood up, turning her gaze to the kitchen in the tiny Japanese apartment. It was possible the knife was still in the home somewhere, most likely, the kitchen. The visitor stepped into the kitchen. Beer cans and beer bottles greeted them, leaving the smell of alcohol in the air. Some scraps of chips, cheese, and crackers were strewn around the white table top. Although it wasn’t the visitor’s garbage, the visitor picked through the cans, bottles, and food remains. It seemed like the apartment residents had some sort of party before everything went awry.

Droplets of blood on the white table led the visitor to the metal kitchen sink. Despite the messy table top, the sink was clean except for the blood. The visitor didn’t seem perplexed by such a discovery. A gloved hand came forward and picked out a large knife from the cluster of kitchen utensils standing in a wire utensil holder.

“Idiots,” the visitor murmured, examining the wooden handle of the knife before putting it in the sink. Fingerprints of blood were buried in the wood. This was the murder weapon, and here was this unknown person holding it without reserve. Seeing so many deaths also made the visitor immune to the tools of death, such instruments lying around any household waiting to become someone’s Grim Reaper.

The visitor glanced at the clock. Already ten minutes had gone by. Another eighteen minutes, and life would be back to normal.

Usually, the visitor liked to smoke after they discovered the body, the cause of death, and the murder weapon. Sometimes, it took more time than usual, and the Arrival would mean a group of them looking for all those things. Nothing could go forward until every bit was pieced together. Thankfully, this particular case was being kind to everyone. Well, everyone except the murdered woman. It just seemed a waste that she died and her murderer wasn’t smart or sober enough to hide the details.

The visitor surveyed the small living room. It had nothing but unmatched junk, like someone trying to do some decorating and failed miserably. A small bookshelf filled to its capacity with books stood opposite of a puny brown desk with some pictures. A large flat-screen TV lay underneath the window with a beige couch facing it. The window treatments were a teal green, almost the green of puke. A blue floor chair stretched out in front of the couch and a lime-green bean bag sat next to it.

“Unsightly,” remarked the visitor, suddenly feeling the urge to open the windows and allow some light into the apartment. She walked up to the window and swung the tan curtains aside, a few rays of sunlight brightening the room immediately. It almost seemed like the murdered woman wasn’t dead, but sleeping in red paint. The light hit her skin so beautifully.

The window sill was bare except for one small white book that was perched on a frame holder. The visitor picked up the white book and opened it, finding that it wasn’t a book, but a photo album. It held photos of the murdered woman and her husband, smiling in every picture as they celebrated their wedding. They both looked really happy, like life had sprung into their eyes and livened up everything around them. There was no denying these two were in love.

But that same woman was now gone. The husband was, too. The visitor hadn’t seen him anywhere near the building when they were called in. The visitor wondered if he was the culprit.

A doorbell resounded inside the house like a gong being rung in the middle of an empty room. The sound bounced off the wall until it faded into nothingness. Again, the apartment was silent.

Time was up. The pieces were fit together. Now the visitor had real work to do. Quickly, she covered the steps to the front door and opened it to a group of black-suited strangers. Each stranger had a grim look on his face as though their muscles were frozen in a permanent frown.

“The body,” asked the leader of the group, stepping into the house and looking about the apartment. The group followed the visitor to the dead woman.

“She’s been dead for over an hour, including the time between dispatchment and murder,” the visitor explained in a disinterested voice, looking down at the body. “A puncture wound to her ribs, causing her lung to collapse and diaphragm to cease muscular function is the most likely cause of death. Entry wound was made by a knife in the kitchen sink.”

The leader nodded as the group set to work. “No loose ends,” he stated, watching them take pictures and catalogue everything that revolved around the murder. The visitor watched as well, restricted from doing anything else because of protocol. “Now, do you know who could have done this?”

“Since when did that matter?” the visitor found themselves asking. The question was a neat step out of the process. Nothing was questioned unless it was a question. Everything was answered unless it was a question. The whole protocol circled around this type of thought to keep everything in line, to keep everything perfect.

“It mattered since twenty-three minutes ago when the Agency decided to employ a new protocol,” came the answer. Once again, the answers and the questions lit up the air. “The new protocol says to find the killer and the killer’s motives for murder. Once they are discovered, the killer must be re-programmed to resume both the murdered and the murderer’s lives.”

“Most likely, the killer is the husband,” the visitor claimed, but their voice was more invested in this case. The visitor had seen too many deaths, but the ones where it started out happy always got to them. As objective as one had to be to do the Agency’s work, there was a hint of life still within the visitor’s own entity.

“You will be assigned to re-program the husband once he’s found. Do you understand?”

“Yes, sir.”

“Good.” The leader pushed a black briefcase into the visitor’s arms. His team already picked up the body, cleaned the pool of blood, and plucked the knife from the kitchen sink. All traces of blood and the murder became a figment of the imagination. “You know what to do.”

At this, the visitor gave a nod. Quickly and stealthily, the group left the apartment, body and knife in tow inside of the dead woman’s area rug. The visitor sat on the couch and opened the briefcase, finding the syringe, electrodes, and mini laptop ready for them to use.

Tying a small band tightly around their arm, the visitor shot the syringe’s substance into their vein. It didn’t take long for the visitor to transform. It never did. Before the substance could completely affect the visitor’s mind, they put the electrodes on their temples and hit the “Enter” key on the laptop. Immediately, a voice came into their mind, clipping in between pauses like a bad recording.

Memory integration is seventy-five percent complete.

As the visitor’s thoughts and memories faded into a soft glare in the back of their mind, something else replaced them. New memories. New thoughts. Childhood. Abuse. School. Family. Friends. Boyfriends. Marriage. Arguments. Death.

All of these belonged to the dead woman.
Spider London
User Name: Spider London
Kind of Poem: Free Verse
Poem Type: Realism
Poem Name: A Wise Shell
Poem:

Listen to wise words.
Words I shall give to the one who listens.
Listen not hear.
If you hear but not listen you shall not hear me.

Sounds of oceans can be heard if you listen closely.
Seagulls squaking though the mouth of my shell.
People behind the back of their friends.
A whistle of a worried official who sees a dangous creature in the horizon.

Rough surface on the outside while soft on the inside.
People judge,people criticise me just because they don't understand.

Sell and sell me again.
Evil hands grab me and use.me over and over again.
I am waiting for a kind soul to take me and care for me.
But for now I wait.
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Hello, I'd like to enter - though first a few questions just to make sure I've got all the details.

1. I can write.... anything? There's no prompt, no theme no nothing? Then what is it you are judging the entries by? I realise that you are trying to give us room for artistic freedom but I'd like to know some guidlines in a contest. For exemple, what constitutes as a good story to you? What is it you are going to judge by? What are your own "fiction kinks" and what will turn you off?

2. With a short short story I suppose you mean a drabble? Do you have some more precise specifics as to what makes a short story and what makes a "short short" story? For example, a drabble is typically 100 words long, flash fiction goes 300-1000 words and short story could be anything between 1000 and 20000 words depending on who you ask.

3. Does the entry have to be unpublished elsewhere or can I submit something I wrote before entering the contest? (normally the entry in a contest has to be unpublished, but I couldn't see anything about it in the rules so I though I'd better ask)
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User Name: Heartfelt33
Story Name: Posioned
Type of Story: ( romance, horror, adventure, etc): Fantasy
Story:
Roxana and I rushed into the chamber after half the night of fighting trees and plants that prevented us from making it to the human world for safety away from him. But instead we were in a chamber with a cliff and right below it a shallow pool. I couldn't help covering my nose because of the decaying smell of a rotting body. Almost like death himself was lurking in the shadows, maybe death was. “He’s still going to find me here. I'm going to die-" Roxana murmured interrupting my thoughts.

"No, you won't. Just switch corsets with me, I have a plan. He won't be after us anymore.” I assured her but instead of cheering her up she started to cry in fear for her life.

I held her in my arms and softly spoke to her, "Trust me everything will be okay and over soon. Then we can have our lives back." Roxana nodded and gave me a watery smile that even I thought would be impossible since I never saw her smile before, all of this happened. I returned the smile and handed her a spare dress that she would wear to look like me. Even though my sister and I are pretty easy to tell apart since I look like her in vise versa, Ethan would never notice. Roxana unzipped her icy blue corset and allowed it to fall and quickly wore my sunrise corset, fixed her hair so it would fall to her shoulders. I put on her icy blue corset and using my necklace, I fixed my hair into a messy bun, Roxana always wore. Roxana and I had identical charms but I had mines as a necklace, while she had hers' around her ankle.

"Whatever your plan is, I hope it works, Alyssa." Roxana said with more confidence.

"I hope it works, too." I whispered, uneasy now of what might be the outcome of my plan.

“I’ll meet you in the throne room." she told me as she jumped into the pool of water and disappeared. A bubble floated to the surface and when it popped, “Good luck!" rang throughout the chamber.

Soon after, sounds of heavy boots signaled that I wasn't alone in this chamber anymore. I was going to get ready to use my only exit out of this place, which was the pool. Nevertheless, I wanted this stupid game of cat and dog between him and us to finally end. ‘I could use the water to defend myself that sounds good.' I thought, still unsure with myself. I started a water snake, this snake would protect me like a shield in the front but, I was vulnerable in the back. I stood in a battle stance so I could be ready for what ever would happen next.

Suddenly, black vines grabbed my arms and made me lose my concentration on the water snake. What made the situation worse was that all the water, from the pool, my only exit was long gone. My fate was sealed, that I knew. But it didn't mean I was going to give up.

The vines loosen around my arms and someone grabbed my arm again but this time, they were behind my back and placed a pocket knife against my neck.” It looks like your alone, happy birthday to me. I can dispose of you right here and right now.” he informed himself, while more vines slithered from the entrance and grabbed my legs, arms, and neck cutting off anyway to breathe. The vines started to ascend towards the ceiling and all my efforts, weren't helping me at all. Ethan lazy as usually instead of flying stepped on a vine and it carried him to my level.

"Would you like to be strangled like you are now, lifted higher and higher until we reach the moon and drop you like a rag doll or make your death faster with this pocket knife. It will be your choice; I'll give you 10 seconds." He said as he tapped on his watch impatiently on every second that ticked by.

"Answer this one question for me and I’ll pick a choice. Why do you want me gone so badly?"

"It's simple, anyway there can only be 6 elementals not 7, I need to get closer to Alyssa, you're standing in my way, and selling you to the black market dead or alive, will do wonders for me."

"I chose the pocket knife."

"I wanted to see you fall, oh well. This will take only a few seconds.” he replied handing the pocket knife to a nearby vine and it slithered across the other end of the chamber. The vine threw the knife from almost 50 yards but it still hit my chest directly with great amount of force. I coughed out a large amount of blood onto Ethan's face.

He wiped it off and saw something that confused him. A smile. A smile filled with happiness, that maybe, just maybe I did become something worthwhile for someone, like my sister. I was going to miss her.

My smile turned into uncontrollable laughter at the boy that stood in front of me all the while slipping in and out of consciousness. With the little strength I had with my arms, I toke off my necklace, that secured my black colored hair now stained with the blood on my hands and plucked off the dragon charm off the string.

I threw it at his head and it bounced off, falling somewhere in the chamber." Is that you Alyssa? So that wasn't you that left before." he whispered the last part when he realized whom, he told all his plans to and it was surely not Roxana as, he suspected. I allowed my head to drop on to my chest; I knew I had only mere seconds of life left and was enjoying every second of it.

"Tell Roxana that I will be back, and I will be coming for you Ethan. I promise you." I told him and with that, I laughed and in minutes I choked on my blood and died.
piggg
User Name: Piggg
Kind of Poem: Free verse
Poem Type: internal emotions
Poem Name: To Mr. Webster:
Poem:

At my disposal I have joy and contentment
excitement and enthusiasm
sadness and depression
temporary and chronic –

but the English language has failed me
because it has no word
for long lasting anger
that does no go away.
Ze Kommissar
User Name:Ze Kommissar
Kind of Poem: Free Verse
Poem Type: Not entirely sure myself, really.
Poem Name: Names.
Poem:

Lines on a chalkboard,
A-B through Z.
Scribbles on people
Stick those letters in an order
Stick that label on an 'it'.
Made up on the spot
Or plan it for days to months to weeks to years.
Quite stupid really.

You have one
I have one too
And no matter how old you are
If you can think, you've given one
To something or somebody else.

People swear by them
And people call them
While other people drop them.
Somebody compared them to flowers once
But they don't exactly smell of anything.

When you think about it
It does make sense
Nobody says
"Pass that thingy."
Or "Hey, I saw him with the other him last night."
When they could be saying
"Hey, Steve slept with my wife
So I punched that liar in his smug little face."

When you're born you get a few
And usually they won't tell you,
But everybody gives you one,
Even if it's just in their head
(Those things are commonly empty these days, so don't sweat it.)

Wait...
What are those called again?
First off I want to say thank you to those who entered the contest with an offical entry and I look foward to reading what you have written,

However to those of you who have posted in the fourm or pmed me a written work without filling out the entry fourm, I have sent P.M.s to all of you to resubmit your work so that it is offical, since none of you have, I will be posting this warning in case you didnt see my P.M. If you do not follow the rules of submission your written work WILL NOT be judged or considered for any of the prizes.


In case the rules were over looked here they are again
1) Fill out the entry form for the written work that you are submitting,
2) P.M. your work and I will post it in the fourm myself.

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