Alright guys, I'm working on the critiques now!
Just as a heads up: these critiques are not in-depth. I did not go through the entries and write down every mistake made, what kind of mistake, etc. Because this is creative writing, I don't believe in "judging" them like that. Instead, I'm going to give you a basic overview of where you should possibly look when you're editing next time, and a few suggestions about what I think could have improved the story.
As always, take my suggestions with a grain of salt. In the end, it's your writing and your story, so do whatever you think makes sense, okay?
Here is what the rubric is going to look like:
Prompt: ______/5
Originality: _____/5
Grammar: _____/5
Pacing: ______/5
Detail: _____/5
Thanks so much again for participating! I hope to have another contest soon ^^