Trick-or-Treat CLOSED - WINNERS POSTED

Will you enter?

Yes	34.8%	[ 31 ]
No	6.7%	[ 6 ]
Maybe	41.6%	[ 37 ]
Gold	16.9%	[ 15 ]
Total Votes:			[ 89 ]

[XxDarkxxAngelxX]

xd I was!?

Lol. I tend to forget what I put on my avatar. Usually though it relates to what I'm doing in the arena. Whatever.

Titan: Stop messing with the RP and get to work xp

[Titan of Doom]

Hey, I thought I was supposed to be a mystery judge!

[awalking paradox]

Titan of Doom

Hey, I thought I was supposed to be a mystery judge!

Well you just gave yourself away! xd

[XxDarkxxAngelxX]

*shrug* I'm not too concerned with bribing. Also, it isn't hard to figure out you would help me judge :p

[Titan of Doom]

Shhhhhh, Angel, you're going to stop the bribes!

[XxDarkxxAngelxX]

ktqueen

Username: Ktqueen
Prompt Used:2
Word Count: 1483
Do you want critique: Sure?
Notes: <3

It was an alright story but I found it a little hard to follow at some points. I can't really think of how you can improve this beyond finding a way to make it flow a little more smoothly. It was still enjoyable though. Thanks for entering. smile

[XxDarkxxAngelxX]

Bloody_Assassinxox26

Username: bloody_assassinxox26
Prompt Used:1
Word Count:>> lost count (sorry)
Do you want critique: sure
Notes: This is my first story on gaia
Entry: Wishing On Hallow's Eve

The only helpful piece of critique I have to offer is that you should work on your grammar and spelling. I don't mean this in a mean way. But it was a pretty good story, though the grammar mistakes did make reading it a bit difficult.

[awalking paradox]

Yay I won!

[Titan of Doom]

awalking paradox

Yay I won!

Or did you?