scary story contest

[ChangeMehDiaper]

Hi my name is zonedude89 and i am having a scary story contest! I want a breif freaky story and i want it to scare the socks off me!

RULES

1: Please no cussing

2:Make your story 2 paragraphs or more!

3: Do not spam or be off topic please i will just delete them or ignore them

4: Feel free to bump!

5: I want your story to be super scarey! i want it to be unrated or R

6: make your story in color please!




Guidelines



User name:

Story:

Story theme:


PRIZES

1st place: 10k

2nd place: 5k

3rd place: 2k

[JestersRose]

hey hun lol
i cant compete cause im not into writing scary stories but you may wanna put this in the contest part of the writing forums wink

[ChangeMehDiaper]

jestersrose

hey hun lol
i cant compete cause im not into writing scary stories but you may wanna put this in the contest part of the writing forums wink

Um... okay! sure i guess but you know the winner gets gold you should give it a shot!

[JestersRose]

I am so not good at writing horror lol but ill see if i can give it a go It'll only be a paragraph or so of writing soz wont be an actual story

She ran for her life, this was it she knew she was going to die. The motorbikes engine grew louder and louder, the twisted man's haunting laugh could be heard.
"little girl, Oh dear sweet little girl, you can't run and you can't hide," He sang "I'm gonna get you"
She didn't dare turn around. Bingo she found a small squeeze of an ally way, she barley fit through it, so there was no chance of him getting her.
The engine had stop and, the deranged man could be heard talking to him self, then he yelled.
"Come here you little wench, i saw you looking at me, you think im sexy"
oh god please, please don;t let him kill me her make up was running down her cheeks as her tears flowed freely.
BANG a gun fired behind her, she could see a slight shadow, she turned in front of her and noticed the man wasn't there. She walked towards the shadow screaming out
"PLEASE HELP ME, please" her voice began feeble as a light of a lighter was flicked on, It was him. His whole face looked as it had been torn to shreds, maggots had replaced his eyes in the sockets, his nose was nothing but burnt pieces of skin, his hands like claws reached out for her

Well there we go hope it was ok for my first ever scary peice lol

[XInferna_ IncognitoX]

jestersrose

I am so not good at writing horror lol but ill see if i can give it a go It'll only be a paragraph or so of writing soz wont be an actual story

She ran for her life, this was it she knew she was going to die. The motorbikes engine grew louder and louder, the twisted man's haunting laugh could be heard.
"little girl, Oh dear sweet little girl, you can't run and you can't hide," He sang "I'm gonna get you"
She didn't dare turn around. Bingo she found a small squeeze of an ally way, she barley fit through it, so there was no chance of him getting her.
The engine had stop and, the deranged man could be heard talking to him self, then he yelled.
"Come here you little wench, i saw you looking at me, you think im sexy"
oh god please, please don;t let him kill me her make up was running down her cheeks as her tears flowed freely.
BANG a gun fired behind her, she could see a slight shadow, she turned in front of her and noticed the man wasn't there. She walked towards the shadow screaming out
"PLEASE HELP ME, please" her voice began feeble as a light of a lighter was flicked on, It was him. His whole face looked as it had been torn to shreds, maggots had replaced his eyes in the sockets, his nose was nothing but burnt pieces of skin, his hands like claws reached out for her

Well there we go hope it was ok for my first ever scary peice lol

I wonder, with all the other times you posted a story in the other sub forum, if you actually pay attention to all the corrections made? I mean, you have typos, bad grammar (yet again), and sentences that could be written better. You should be showing, every time you post something, that you have improved since the last time.

It is not scary at all. If you want to one day write a scary story, go to your local book store and search through thriller, horror, and even true crime. That is just a suggestion.

[XInferna_ IncognitoX]

OP, we have this already.

[ChangeMehDiaper]

I think i'm going to enter for fun and to give you guys the idea of what a SCARY story is

User name: zonedude89

Story: Hell raiser

Story theme: horror


Part #1




It was the day before tom's birthday he could already see it until he was just walking down the street he found this mysterious box. It had Egyptian writings on it. "What is this" he wondered " is it one of those puzzles" he questioned "I should take it home and see what it is!" Tom said with excitement!
When Tom got home he ran to his room as quickly as possibly Tom was about 20 he was a little imitator for his age. started messing around with it for a little while, It was too complicated! But then suddenly the little box opened! But then suddenly needles sprung out from the box! Tom was screaming!Then more needles came in then a bunch of string flew out and it took edges of him and cut into Tim! then he was Pin head!

[Kyoko901]

User-name: Kyoko901
Story Title: D-A-N-G-E-R A-H-E-A-D
Story Theme: The Murder on Death Road


It was October 30th, the day before Halloween and a strange girl was walking home from school. She sees a sign that says Death Road, "What's up with the street name? Oh well," She starts walking down it. "Danger," she heard small voices saying Danger ahead of her "Is anyone there?" she heard small screams behind and a little splash of mist sp;ashed on her back. She looked behind her. She saw nothing and turned back. She saw a ghost like shadow in front of her and it grabbed her and the ghost went straight. "What are you doing! Put me down!"

They were in a cave. "We have found the Over Lord!" all the ghosts came out and made music like screams. The girl covered her ears, "Now we will dine on her flesh!" "No, no, no! Please don't! I'm only eight years old!" They all started walking towards her, their mouths open. She screamed. Then she woke up in the morning, in the cave. "I'm alive?" she whispered. She got up and started walking out of the cave. She looked at her hands, She was a ghost! She screamed and said "I'm a ghost!?!?!?!?!" "Yes you are, when we ate your flesh, we decided to give you a ghost body," "Now I'm a ghost?" she asked. "Yes," the ghost said. "I would have rather died and i would have been with my great grandmas and grandpas," she said. "Oh well, I guess you'll have to be a ghost your whole life unless we could turn you back in to a human, unless-" he was interrupted. "Unless what?" "unless you kill some one," she thought. Maybe I could kill my arch enemy she thought. "I'll do it, I will kill my arch enemy, take me to Death Road,"

Lucky for her, her arch enemy wanted to take a short cut down Death Road. "My friends dared me to go down here, oh wow maybe if I come down here, I'll find the body of that ugly girl," Now the ghost was really upset now. "Danger," she kept repeating in different directions. "Is some one there?" she said. "I want your flesh...." all she could say was umm.... and then her bloody body lays there and doing all of that murder, right when the girl was killed the girl ghost turned back and died laying beside her. Their bodies still lay there on Death Road waiting to be found.

[Haruhitastic Power]

Username: Haruhitastic Power
Story Title: Short, Brief, and to the Point
Story Theme: Death.

Once upon a time, there was a girl name Mary Sue.
Some slasher came in and just like...stabbed the ******** out of her.
Then she died.
The end.

Now, I don't know about you, but I just pissed myself that was so scary. :s

[ChangeMehDiaper]

Haruhitastic Power

Username: Haruhitastic Power
Story Title: Short, Brief, and to the Point
Story Theme: Death.

Once upon a time, there was a girl name Mary Sue.
Some slasher came in and just like...stabbed the ******** out of her.
Then she died.
The end.

Now, I don't know about you, but I just pissed myself that was so scary. :s

. . . you do know your story has two be 2 paragraphs

[Haruhitastic Power]

You do know you wanted to use "to" in that statement, right?

[ChangeMehDiaper]

Scribbling Scribe

First of all how does posting the story in a color make it scary, second, wow people know nothing about 'scary stories', third this is in the wrong forum.

lol i know it is in the wrong forum! hopefully some one will move it cause idk how to

[ChangeMehDiaper]

Haruhitastic Power

You do know you wanted to use "to" in that statement, right?

. . . fine you have to have your story 2 paragraphs long!

[iDiru]

I want to write a story but I can't think of anything >(