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Oh xD
I thought you said that the character was a lot like you wrote him. Whoop xD
&& well, I mean, maybe he is a victim in a way ... but, really, he takes a great deal of pleasure in doing what he does - even went out of his way to do more of it (which I thought was clear when the officer asked him if he had to kill the girl). So, really, in the end, he really isn't a victim since he isn't taken advantage of (he enjoys it and is paid very well to do it)
Thanks again for the prize =)
u r welcome dear... and I didn't give it to you just like that you deserve it ^_^ it's your work that gave u the gold...
and ur story really entertained me ^_^
u know.. actually this character wasn't in mystery/action/gore story... but most of like slice of life/comedy/a bit supernatural and a very little mystery.... but since I couldn't find suitable characters from my mystery stories so I just added him... not only him but also SUL was from a comedy romance story supernatural @.@ just imagine it XD
but yet u all were able to make a mystery thrill stories though he wasn't that cool.... u made him cool <3