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I wanted to enter this one... are you familiar with sestinas?
Yes indeed, sestinas are pretty cool, I think. If that's what you're entering, I look forward to it - they take a modicum of skill to pull off effectively.

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Modicom?!?! MODICOM?!?!?!

Do not make me thwap you one!

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Perfect Plan (Sestina)

1 Beneath each rotting bloom one anxious seed
2 reposed in patient silence - winter's spring
3 as fighting composts retch with secret plans.
4 Chill heat may validate harsh nature's wisdom...
5 predictable, the cycles canvassed surface
6 where shovels only pierce with sweat and grit.

6 Lush forest floor or drifting desert grit
1 blanket each its own one precious seed
5 deep or shallow, buried - meant to surface;
2 unfurling tiny shoots to dance and spring.
4 Proof to show the gently harsher wisdom
3 despite all best laid men and mice's plans.

3 Symbiotic greed gives way to plans
6 of higher promised focus - centered grit
4 to cheer or scoff at tested prior wisdom.
1 You know before the sleep, before the seed,
2 before the rooted sprig one rusty spring
5 so near the shiny tarnished outer surface.

5 Underlying wakened pull to surface
3 arroused from dreams still spinning private plans
2 tugged forth by fingers fresh as clearest spring
6 allowing pulsing pearl to find true grit.
1 Persistant pollen's work produced its seed
4 whose dormant instinct rose to ancient wisdom.

4 Refocused now this drama - poignant wisdom
5 drags it forth to magic waiting surface
1 sudden now, dividing waste from seed
3 reminding mother nature of old plans.
6 Damp and humus swirl around the grit
2 as dark retreats before the rays of spring.

2 Persistant are these cycle, fresh each spring.
4 One foolish thought may toil its way to wisdom.
6 Frown, concentrate feel pointed tight teeth's grit.
5 Sprouting time draws near! Come watch the surface!
3 Fulfilled - new life breaks free - well-reached, her plans.
1 Kiss earth, toast rain, rejoice successful seed!

2, 5 Gloried spring prepared the surface, moist .
4, 3 Proven wisdom, perfect plan results.
6, 1 Gingered grit and winning seed - sweet life.
lol. I hope you were referring to the amount of skill, not the spelling

modicum


I'll update the first page.... THANKS FOR YOUR ENTRY!


Mahayr
Modicom?!?! MODICOM?!?!?!

Do not make me thwap you one!

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lol. I hope you were referring to the amount of skill, not the spelling

modicum


I'll update the first page.... THANKS FOR YOUR ENTRY!


Mahayr
Modicom?!?! MODICOM?!?!?!

Do not make me thwap you one!

I WAS REFERRING TO THE MEANING YOU LOUT!!!

mod·i·c** ( P ) Pronunciation Key (md-km)
n. pl. mod·i·cums or mod·i·ca (-k)
A small, moderate, or token amount: “England still expects a modicum of eccentricity in its artists” (Ian Jack).

You are so toast!
Mahayr
Doleon
lol. I hope you were referring to the amount of skill, not the spelling

modicum


I'll update the first page.... THANKS FOR YOUR ENTRY!


Mahayr
Modicom?!?! MODICOM?!?!?!

Do not make me thwap you one!

I WAS REFERRING TO THE MEANING YOU LOUT!!!

mod·i·c** ( P ) Pronunciation Key (md-km)
n. pl. mod·i·cums or mod·i·ca (-k)
A small, moderate, or token amount: “England still expects a modicum of eccentricity in its artists” (Ian Jack).

You are so toast!


lol. I was, of course, implementing it facetiously, and am fully recognizant of the "m4d sk!!1z" required to write a sestina.

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I think I shall enter.... Now, you're talking any kind of nature- plants, animals, seasons, weather... right?
Any kind is just fine.


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I think I shall enter.... Now, you're talking any kind of nature- plants, animals, seasons, weather... right?

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*Waits to be thanked for her kindness and patience.*
*knelt before Mahayr, genuflecting, Doleon humbly and profusely expresses his gratitude for Mahayr's kindness and patience with him*

sweatdrop


Mahayr
*Waits to be thanked for her kindness and patience.*
I'm entering two cause I'm cool like that. cool

POEM NUMBER ONE:

A trees Ballad:



Oh sweet, sweet love
You disquiet my nature,
And leave me trembling.

Precarious love that holds
Misfortune on a leash.
Who condones my own
Incineration by way of
Electric holocaust.

With your thunderous serenades,
And waltzing lights.
With your fragrant cloudy hues ,
Of gentle blues and rigid grays;

Opalescent eggs are nestled safe in my breast,
But how can such song birds compare?

My many arms embrace
Your countless Stars and oldest Sun.
My pining heart
Delights in their warmth.

If only were I taller
That I might brush
My rough skin
Aganst your soft clouds.




POEM NUMBER TWO:

2 Years Ago:


I like it.
The wind on my face,
salt particles haphazardly strewn;
extended across the sand, or
settling in the air and
on chapped lips,
ready to be licked off.

Just floating here,
with the foam.
Born and spreading,
like a new black plague,
its hungry maws open wide-searching-
So i just Put my poem here??
Thanks for entering!

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