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So. The topic for this little nifty story contest it LOVE. I bet you couldn't guess that one.
Everything that you are going to write or type about has to involve the universal topic of love, in some way, shape, or form.
That narrows it down a bit for you, doesn't it?
BUT! There are still a lot of things to cover!
The requirements are below:
You must include atleast four out of these eleven things. (But you are not limited to four. Adding more will add more points.)-
o1) Atleast four corny, cheesy pickup lines. (If you have more than 6, I'll add bonus points to your score.)
o2) One of the main characters pee themselves, or throws up on someone. (If you can add both of these successfully at different times in the story, I'll add bonus points to your score at the end.)
o3) The song 'Two is Better Than One' by Boys Like Girls, featuring Taylor Swift becomes a big part of the storyline. (If you can also find a way to add the song 'Thunder' by Boys Like Girls, More bonus points.)
o4) A main character in the story has to play a string instrument. (If you can make two of the main characters play a string instrument, bonus points. If it's a Viola for the string instrument, bonus points. BUT! You have to put some things in the story about the viola, such as it's difference from a violin, or maybe a viola joke or something. )
o5) The main character dresses like Lady Gaga. (If the song "Bad Romance" AND "Boys Boys Boys" fit nicely into the plot, bonus points. By the way, both of those songs are by Lady gaga.)
o6) A bad break up occurs.(Bad can mean anything...) (If you can make me laugh during the break up, bonus points.)
o7) If it is during the Great depression, WWII (The Holocaust), or the time of the cold war. For this, they have to be effected by this severly. If you can successfully actually write a story in one of these times, I will give you bonus points directly.
-For the great depression, they have to be effected in the United States. Do research...
-If it's WWII, they have to be jewish, or greatly affected by the Holocaust.
-If it's the cold war, they have to live in Germany on the non-communist side of the wall. (I'll look that up...)
o cool The girl is pregnant. (This can mean anything.) (If you have a lesbian girl couple, and one of the girls are pregnant, bonus points.)
o9) A death causes tension in the relationship. (If there is a funeral involved, and the funeral is made funny, bonus points.)
o1o) The theme of the story is 'butterflies'. (If a butterfly is the cause of death in one of the characters, I'll add bonus points.)
o11) A bad habit, or a good deed seperates or brings together two people. (If the good deed seperates them, or if a bad habit brings two people together, bonus points.)
o12) A main character slips on something outside. (If it is ice, and it's snowing outside, bonus points.)
o13) A gift is given to one of the main characters by a random unknown character. (If this random unknown character dies at the end, bonus points.)
o14) A disney movie is referenced in the story. You have to mention one of the scenes, and can't just say 'I love the movie The Lion King.' Or something along those lines. (If you mention something from the movie Wall-E, Monsters Inc., or Mulan, Bonus Points!)
15) A christmas theme is present in the story with out it having to be mentioned that it's christmas. (If A christmas tree falling down is main to the plot, bonus points!)
16) One of the main characters has a serious illness. (If it's cancer, any form of cancer and it seems to fit nicely. Bonus points. If the character with out the illness dies first, or dies... Bonus points!)
17)The two main characters start an argument, but the topic of the argument isn't really about that topic, and it's really about the two characters. [This one is a little confusing. What it means is, if the two characters are arguing... say about ponies and how they act. But what they are arguing about really is an argument about them, then that's what it means. Here's an example:
Now, this is a hannah montana episode. (I know, Hannah Montana...)
But in this episode, the two girls arguing about their parents. The parents went on a date, and Miley's (The girl in the pink...) dad wanted to pay, but Lilly's (The girl in the orange...) mom wanted to pay because she wanted to show she was an independent person. The two girls are arguing about this through the school project, and it's made obvious that their traditions of the country and giving out fish isn't what the argument is really about. It's really about their parents.
If it still isn't made clear, please ask. If you can fit this into your story, I'll just give you bonus points because it's just confusing...]
1 cool Balloon animals are an obsession with a character, and it gets out of hand. (If the balloon obsession is ended in a unique way, Bonus Points.)
19) An anniversary is ruined because of a character's plans with someone else. (If the plans with someone else was planned that way on purpose, Bonus Points.)
That's a mighty fine list up there. I will add more, but I will not change the amount required.
Another thing I forgot to mention:
I don't care what genre it is! It can be a futuristic story, a teen-angst story, a story about gay guys, lesbian girls, a story about creatures that don't exist, I don't care!
(UC)
Everything that you are going to write or type about has to involve the universal topic of love, in some way, shape, or form.
That narrows it down a bit for you, doesn't it?
BUT! There are still a lot of things to cover!
The requirements are below:
You must include atleast four out of these eleven things. (But you are not limited to four. Adding more will add more points.)-
o1) Atleast four corny, cheesy pickup lines. (If you have more than 6, I'll add bonus points to your score.)
o2) One of the main characters pee themselves, or throws up on someone. (If you can add both of these successfully at different times in the story, I'll add bonus points to your score at the end.)
o3) The song 'Two is Better Than One' by Boys Like Girls, featuring Taylor Swift becomes a big part of the storyline. (If you can also find a way to add the song 'Thunder' by Boys Like Girls, More bonus points.)
o4) A main character in the story has to play a string instrument. (If you can make two of the main characters play a string instrument, bonus points. If it's a Viola for the string instrument, bonus points. BUT! You have to put some things in the story about the viola, such as it's difference from a violin, or maybe a viola joke or something. )
o5) The main character dresses like Lady Gaga. (If the song "Bad Romance" AND "Boys Boys Boys" fit nicely into the plot, bonus points. By the way, both of those songs are by Lady gaga.)
o6) A bad break up occurs.(Bad can mean anything...) (If you can make me laugh during the break up, bonus points.)
o7) If it is during the Great depression, WWII (The Holocaust), or the time of the cold war. For this, they have to be effected by this severly. If you can successfully actually write a story in one of these times, I will give you bonus points directly.
-For the great depression, they have to be effected in the United States. Do research...
-If it's WWII, they have to be jewish, or greatly affected by the Holocaust.
-If it's the cold war, they have to live in Germany on the non-communist side of the wall. (I'll look that up...)
o cool The girl is pregnant. (This can mean anything.) (If you have a lesbian girl couple, and one of the girls are pregnant, bonus points.)
o9) A death causes tension in the relationship. (If there is a funeral involved, and the funeral is made funny, bonus points.)
o1o) The theme of the story is 'butterflies'. (If a butterfly is the cause of death in one of the characters, I'll add bonus points.)
o11) A bad habit, or a good deed seperates or brings together two people. (If the good deed seperates them, or if a bad habit brings two people together, bonus points.)
o12) A main character slips on something outside. (If it is ice, and it's snowing outside, bonus points.)
o13) A gift is given to one of the main characters by a random unknown character. (If this random unknown character dies at the end, bonus points.)
o14) A disney movie is referenced in the story. You have to mention one of the scenes, and can't just say 'I love the movie The Lion King.' Or something along those lines. (If you mention something from the movie Wall-E, Monsters Inc., or Mulan, Bonus Points!)
15) A christmas theme is present in the story with out it having to be mentioned that it's christmas. (If A christmas tree falling down is main to the plot, bonus points!)
16) One of the main characters has a serious illness. (If it's cancer, any form of cancer and it seems to fit nicely. Bonus points. If the character with out the illness dies first, or dies... Bonus points!)
17)The two main characters start an argument, but the topic of the argument isn't really about that topic, and it's really about the two characters. [This one is a little confusing. What it means is, if the two characters are arguing... say about ponies and how they act. But what they are arguing about really is an argument about them, then that's what it means. Here's an example:
Now, this is a hannah montana episode. (I know, Hannah Montana...)
But in this episode, the two girls arguing about their parents. The parents went on a date, and Miley's (The girl in the pink...) dad wanted to pay, but Lilly's (The girl in the orange...) mom wanted to pay because she wanted to show she was an independent person. The two girls are arguing about this through the school project, and it's made obvious that their traditions of the country and giving out fish isn't what the argument is really about. It's really about their parents.
If it still isn't made clear, please ask. If you can fit this into your story, I'll just give you bonus points because it's just confusing...]
1 cool Balloon animals are an obsession with a character, and it gets out of hand. (If the balloon obsession is ended in a unique way, Bonus Points.)
19) An anniversary is ruined because of a character's plans with someone else. (If the plans with someone else was planned that way on purpose, Bonus Points.)
That's a mighty fine list up there. I will add more, but I will not change the amount required.
Another thing I forgot to mention:
I don't care what genre it is! It can be a futuristic story, a teen-angst story, a story about gay guys, lesbian girls, a story about creatures that don't exist, I don't care!
(UC)
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R u L e S
Alright. They may say it's a free country, but it really isn't. I mean you can do what you want, but... that's probably not the best choice.
That same idea applies here. Unless you follow these rules, you will either not be able to enter, or you will be disqualified for breaking the rules.
So here are the thread rules. The story posting rules will be underneath these:
o1) Follow ALL of gaian's ToS and thread Guidelines.
o2) Be respectful at all times. I do not want to see any sort of racial remarks, sexuality bashing comments, or just plain ol' insults in this thread. If you do, I will be sure to report you.
o3) Be respectful of other peoples' stories. If they ASK for comments, then you may say what ever you want about it. If an argument starts, I will ask you to take it to PMs.
o4) Make your posts readable. I don't care if you use a bit of chat speak, but whn u tlk lke dis, ppl gt mad.
See what I mean? It's annoying. I'm not even sure what I just said.
o5) DO NOT Copy anything from the first page main posts. Do NOT reply to any of them. These posts are way too big to be copying. Unless you only copy something small, do not copy anything.
o6) Please keep it PG-13 in here. A few bad words won't get you kicked off of gaia. But if you use them in an insult, that might. Just be nice.
o7) If you have an issue with anyone, IM me, and I'll see how to handle it.
o 8 ) (I'll add more when I see needed.)
Rules for the story:
This goes along with the requirements-
o1) The topic has to be about love.
o2) The story must include four out of the eleven things listed in the post above.
o3) The story must be atleast 2,000 words. There is no limit.
o4) When posting, be sure that there is space between every paragraph. It makes it easier to read, rather than reading a whole massive wall-of-text.
o5) Do not post the story in color. Also, make sure that it is between 10-12 size font.
o7) Be sure to post with the skeleton which can be found below.
o8 ) Have fun with the story! Type it how you want to type it, and not how someone else told you to.
o9) Previously submitted stories are allowed, definitely. I don't care, just as long as it's your story. It could be half a chapter from one of your stories that just happens to fit for all I care. Go for it.
o1o) You may submit more than one story, but you can only win one prize. So maybe your first story wasn't so great, but then you have an amazing idea, but you don't want to get rid of the other story. Go for it!
o11) You can edit all you want up until January 8th, 2010. I don't care! I don't read the stories until after the deadline, so it won't matter.
o12) Post the story HERE! I don't want any PM's sent to me with stories in them. If you are too shy to post your story here, that's fine. Then send me a PM beforehand, and I'll let you know what I think.
The Skeleton:
[b]Username:[/b] Delete whats here, and put your Username here.]
[b]Title of story:[b] Obvious... If it's untitled, label it 'Untitled'
[b]Word Count:[/b] This is obvious...
[b]Story:[b]
[b]Numbers of the requirements used:[/b] So if you used 1, 6, 8, 11, and 4, just put that there.
[b]Extra credit?:[/b] Check it out below! You'll know what I mean when you see it.
[b]Title of story:[b] Obvious... If it's untitled, label it 'Untitled'
[b]Word Count:[/b] This is obvious...
[b]Story:[b]
[b]Numbers of the requirements used:[/b] So if you used 1, 6, 8, 11, and 4, just put that there.
[b]Extra credit?:[/b] Check it out below! You'll know what I mean when you see it.
Make sure that everything that is NOT bolded is deleted when you paste this. Do NOT put your information inside the bolded areas. Thank you.
After you fill that out, be sure there is a few spaces between where you paste the story, and where it says 'Story'. I might change or add more to the skeleton, depending on what I feel needs to go there.
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The P r i z e $
!!!!!!!!!!!Just so you all know, there is NO fee for entering this contest. Zip!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now, That's not saying I wont take donations. All the donations will go STRAIGHT into my gold amount into the prizes. If you donate, the amount WILL go up.
For these prizes, I have to warn you: I do NOT have what I say I am giving yet. BUT, I will promise you that I will get this by the deadline. I am waiting to see how much gold I can get by just surfing around gaia before I sell things. Just know that when you donate, even though I don't have the amount I say I am giving, I will raise the prize amount according to the amount you give.
If that doesn't make sense, let me know.
Okay. So here are the prizes:
First Place winner:
60k
Second Place winner:
40k
Third Place winner:
25k
Honorable mentions:
5k each (Up to three)

Now, That's not saying I wont take donations. All the donations will go STRAIGHT into my gold amount into the prizes. If you donate, the amount WILL go up.
For these prizes, I have to warn you: I do NOT have what I say I am giving yet. BUT, I will promise you that I will get this by the deadline. I am waiting to see how much gold I can get by just surfing around gaia before I sell things. Just know that when you donate, even though I don't have the amount I say I am giving, I will raise the prize amount according to the amount you give.
If that doesn't make sense, let me know.
Okay. So here are the prizes:
First Place winner:
60k
Second Place winner:
40k
Third Place winner:
25k
Honorable mentions:
5k each (Up to three)

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- Posted: Sun, 22 Nov 2009 02:32:07 +0000


Deadline and Winners
The deadline at the moment will be:
Friday, January 8th, 2010 at 11:30PM EST (East standard time. [Meaning the east coast of the united states])
This deadline may change, depending on the amount of entries I recieve, and depending on my schedual. At this time, I am currently free.
The reason I am saying 11:30 PM is because I can't close the contest at midnight, due to the fact that I can't be on the computer at midnight. I will not take any late entries, unless you talk to me before the deadline.
After the deadline, it could take a week or more to announce the winners. I plan on announcing the winners at the latest on Thursday, January 21th 2010. That may change if I am not done grading, or if I am done and want to hand out the prizes.
The winners will be announced on the date above.
Friday, January 8th, 2010 at 11:30PM EST (East standard time. [Meaning the east coast of the united states])
This deadline may change, depending on the amount of entries I recieve, and depending on my schedual. At this time, I am currently free.
The reason I am saying 11:30 PM is because I can't close the contest at midnight, due to the fact that I can't be on the computer at midnight. I will not take any late entries, unless you talk to me before the deadline.
After the deadline, it could take a week or more to announce the winners. I plan on announcing the winners at the latest on Thursday, January 21th 2010. That may change if I am not done grading, or if I am done and want to hand out the prizes.
The winners will be announced on the date above.
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- Posted: Sun, 22 Nov 2009 02:51:30 +0000
Tips and grading sheet
If you don't know, I love to write, and I love to read. But when I read, I can only read things that really get my attention.
Here are some tips for getting me to like the story:
-I am all for stories about gay people. I hate homophobes, because I just think they are rude and disgusting. So if you write a story about gay people, I will probably like the story more.
-I know most of you are going to roll your eyes, and are going to say 'Loser', but I love highschool drama stories. Especially ones about those teens that are different and are trying to fit in. What I DON'T want is a story about the regular teen with issues. I want one of those irregular kids that have so many problems that adding another would make them explode.
-mystical creatures are AMAZING. I especially love vampires, werewolves, ghosts, and people with those cool powers (Like reading minds, and floating, and teleporting through space). But I am going to tell you right now; if your vampire eats animals, and SPARKLES, I will not even read your story. Twilight was okay, but the whole vampire thing was just too much.
-Future settings are really cool. On the contrary, I love the older times too. But I don't like the story being too old. I like the17th through the 21st century kinds of stories. The only other thing I can say about that though is I am definitely a sucker for disney princess kinds of stories, and the movie Mulan was amazing.
-Do not write the main character as an animal, unless they have human-like qualities. If it's something like... a transformation into an animal, and they are human-like when they transform back, then that's fine. I just don't want a story like 'Animal Farm' (Look it up)
-Dancing and singing stories are very close to my heart. I love stories about following your dreams, or losing your chance to follow your dream.
Okay. That list should be big enough.
The grading sheet will be as follows:
Filling out the Skeleton correctly - 5 points
The requirements met (Length/ atleast four prose) - 15 points
Spelling / grammar - 15 points
Punctuation - 15 points
Setting - 10 points
Character developement - 10 points
Plot - 30 points
Elements of literature - 10 points
The total points is 110. There is a possibility that with your bonuses, you will add up more than that.
Here are some tips for getting me to like the story:
-I am all for stories about gay people. I hate homophobes, because I just think they are rude and disgusting. So if you write a story about gay people, I will probably like the story more.
-I know most of you are going to roll your eyes, and are going to say 'Loser', but I love highschool drama stories. Especially ones about those teens that are different and are trying to fit in. What I DON'T want is a story about the regular teen with issues. I want one of those irregular kids that have so many problems that adding another would make them explode.
-mystical creatures are AMAZING. I especially love vampires, werewolves, ghosts, and people with those cool powers (Like reading minds, and floating, and teleporting through space). But I am going to tell you right now; if your vampire eats animals, and SPARKLES, I will not even read your story. Twilight was okay, but the whole vampire thing was just too much.
-Future settings are really cool. On the contrary, I love the older times too. But I don't like the story being too old. I like the17th through the 21st century kinds of stories. The only other thing I can say about that though is I am definitely a sucker for disney princess kinds of stories, and the movie Mulan was amazing.
-Do not write the main character as an animal, unless they have human-like qualities. If it's something like... a transformation into an animal, and they are human-like when they transform back, then that's fine. I just don't want a story like 'Animal Farm' (Look it up)
-Dancing and singing stories are very close to my heart. I love stories about following your dreams, or losing your chance to follow your dream.
Okay. That list should be big enough.
The grading sheet will be as follows:
Filling out the Skeleton correctly - 5 points
The requirements met (Length/ atleast four prose) - 15 points
Spelling / grammar - 15 points
Punctuation - 15 points
Setting - 10 points
Character developement - 10 points
Plot - 30 points
Elements of literature - 10 points
The total points is 110. There is a possibility that with your bonuses, you will add up more than that.
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Bonuses and Participants
The bonuses were listed up top.
But for everyone of those bonuses you SUCCESSFULLY add into the story, and it flows greatly, I will give you two bonus points.
The other bonus not mentioned is if you use the one of the songs in this playlist to base your story off of:
http://www.playlist.com/playlist/18471123979
This is the link to get to the playlist.
You have to click on the link, and then it will take you to my profile for Playlist.com
After that, you will have to click on 'Playlists', and then find the one that says "L o v e s t o r y B l u e s". Those are the songs.
Now, most of those songs are very typical songs. But that is a mix of my favorite love songs. Yes, I like the stuff on the radio, I like music that the majority of the teenage population like. Get over it.
If you don't like the list, and you can't find a way to use those songs, it's not my fault. It's only a bonus, anyways.
If this link does not work, let me know, and I will fix it.
Participants
1. sessqueen [ No entry in yet ]
2. TesselationRey [Entry In!]
3. supergirl10895 [No entry in yet]
4. Orange Chus [No entry in yet]
5. I Am princessearnless [No entry in yet]
6. Tristis spes [No entry in yet]
7. Exotic Dancing Politician [No Entry in Yet]
8. Charlie Dicky [No Entry in Yet]
9. Mistress Abbigelle [No Entry in Yet]
10. Cupidette [Entry in!]
11. b b y c a k e z z [No Entry in Yet]
12. The Secret Goldfish [No Entry in Yet]
13. Aquafirinab [No Entry in Yet]
14. tonoxtekko [No Entry in Yet]
15. T a n b a i [Entry in!]
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OPEN!
But for everyone of those bonuses you SUCCESSFULLY add into the story, and it flows greatly, I will give you two bonus points.
The other bonus not mentioned is if you use the one of the songs in this playlist to base your story off of:
http://www.playlist.com/playlist/18471123979
This is the link to get to the playlist.
You have to click on the link, and then it will take you to my profile for Playlist.com
After that, you will have to click on 'Playlists', and then find the one that says "L o v e s t o r y B l u e s". Those are the songs.
Now, most of those songs are very typical songs. But that is a mix of my favorite love songs. Yes, I like the stuff on the radio, I like music that the majority of the teenage population like. Get over it.
If you don't like the list, and you can't find a way to use those songs, it's not my fault. It's only a bonus, anyways.
If this link does not work, let me know, and I will fix it.
Participants
1. sessqueen [ No entry in yet ]
2. TesselationRey [Entry In!]
3. supergirl10895 [No entry in yet]
4. Orange Chus [No entry in yet]
5. I Am princessearnless [No entry in yet]
6. Tristis spes [No entry in yet]
7. Exotic Dancing Politician [No Entry in Yet]
8. Charlie Dicky [No Entry in Yet]
9. Mistress Abbigelle [No Entry in Yet]
10. Cupidette [Entry in!]
11. b b y c a k e z z [No Entry in Yet]
12. The Secret Goldfish [No Entry in Yet]
13. Aquafirinab [No Entry in Yet]
14. tonoxtekko [No Entry in Yet]
15. T a n b a i [Entry in!]
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- Posted: Sun, 22 Nov 2009 04:44:36 +0000
Oooohhh here's one biatch who will definitely be entering =D
I just gotta put the finishing touches on mah entry. . .
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- Posted: Mon, 23 Nov 2009 00:50:04 +0000
Cool! Thank you for telling me!
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- Posted: Mon, 23 Nov 2009 17:21:21 +0000
But I love Animal Farm. I cry every time I read it because I think it's so sad the horse is taken to the glue factory.
Anyhoo, rolling some ideas through my head and thinking about entering.
P.S. Your playlist link is broken. And seeing as how I like music inspiration, I'd love to see what's on the playlist! I have writing playlists that would make Stephanie Meyer cry.
Anyhoo, rolling some ideas through my head and thinking about entering.
P.S. Your playlist link is broken. And seeing as how I like music inspiration, I'd love to see what's on the playlist! I have writing playlists that would make Stephanie Meyer cry.
Y a m i - D h a m p i r
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- Posted: Tue, 24 Nov 2009 00:13:21 +0000
Thanks for telling me! I hope it works now...
And I do love animal farm too, it's just hard to make a love story out of animal love that's interesting... So that's why I'm excluding it.
And I shall add your name to the list!
And I do love animal farm too, it's just hard to make a love story out of animal love that's interesting... So that's why I'm excluding it.
And I shall add your name to the list!
supergirl10895
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- Posted: Tue, 24 Nov 2009 01:21:18 +0000
I'd like to enter! @.@ I'm not that particularly experianced with love stories, but I can do cheesy and corny pick up lines! eheh, and the butterfly theme...
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- Posted: Tue, 24 Nov 2009 01:24:20 +0000
*grammar
The most irritating spelling error I can think of.
I think I'll enter, but I'm feeling sleepy right now.
The most irritating spelling error I can think of.
I think I'll enter, but I'm feeling sleepy right now.
TesselationRey
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- Posted: Tue, 24 Nov 2009 14:15:59 +0000
That's a good point. I can't think of a single animal character story that's a love story. Unless it's familial love.
I too have thought of a way to use the butterfly theme, but in an...unique way.
I too have thought of a way to use the butterfly theme, but in an...unique way.

