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Username: Piggg
Title: Caged
Word Count: 2067
Additional Information: Some references to sexual things, but nothing graphic.

I lounge back in the cage as I watch them set up. The tent is already up and I’ve been rolled in. It’s red canvas, hung from two thirty-foot poles and staked into the ground every few feet so there’s not an inch of slack to lift up and peak under. The tentboys are erecting the booths. There are the typical ones: milk bottles and balls, palm readers and crystal balls. And then there are the booths full of peep holes and the ones that just have a curtain in the front and a girl in the back.

Jeb walks the perimeter of the tent with Clive, his tiger. I stick my arm through the bars and snap my fingers as they pass me. Clive snarls and Jeb glares. I bet that he wants to flip me off, but Clive already bit that finger off.

“Is it my turn for a walk?” I yell after him, but he ignores me.

I lay on my back and curl my knees into my chest, then extend and push my feet up against the metal sheet on top of the cage. It doesn’t budge an inch. I twirl a curl around my finger and then bring it to my lips, feeling the softness of my hair against my face. I roll back up to sitting and grab the bars with both hands.

“Come on!” I yell. “It’s about time we have some fun around here!”

Suddenly the cage is a hundred times too small and I’m kicking against all six sides and my hands are prickling and my skull is tight on my brain and I’m clawing and trying to bite but finding nothing protruding enough to latch my teeth around. Confused, I try to stand only to hit my back against the roof.

I crumple onto the cold steel and rest my head on my arms. “Damn,” I whisper. I think about what Brian’s been teaching me. Count the bars. Breathe in on the odd ones and out on the evens. I count faster and faster until my breathing can’t keep up. Then I sit up with my back to the bars.

The ringmaster is escorting the girls into their booths. Sheryl and Dee are primping. Tina puts on a last coat of lipstick. Leah and Katie don’t give half a ********. It looks like they woke up half an hour go, considered showering, and they went back to sleep.

I stop and take a long breath in. He’s nearby. Then I feel his hand on my back. “You’re not doing so bad, Baby,” he says. I relax. His finger trails down my spine. I melt a little. “You ready for me to let you out?” I nod limply. I hear the rattle of keys and he opens the door. I slide out onto the ground. He kisses my cheek and I look up at him as I lean back against the cage.

I tilt my head to the side and lick my lips. “No, not yet,” Brian says and he takes my wrist. Calm pervades me again. There is no person as good as Brian.

“Am I having fun tonight?” I ask.

He smiles. “I think you will.”

He walks me out of the main tent into the prep tent. The poles here are only twenty feet high and the canvas is light brown instead of red. He takes me to the costume rack and rifles through. While he’s distracted, I survey the room.

Jane is dressing the fortune-teller. I admire the way the light plays off her cleavage as she covers the old woman in necklace after necklace, shoving rings onto her fingers. Johnny is watching her, too. He’s finished staking the place down and is just watching her breasts shift as her arms move. Brian’s not looking, so I walk towards him, keeping close to the canvas, knowing that nobody will see me until it’s too late. I come behind Johnny and slip my hands around his throat and sink my teeth into his ear, working my tongue into a crevice. I feel his body tighten and all I want is the taste of Johnny’s biceps in my mouth. His hands start clawing at mine but I just wrap my legs around his waist and hold on until –

“Shh.” Brian has me. Johnny is - “Jesus ******** Christ, Brian! Keep your eye on the ******** b***h, she’s trying to kill me!”

Brian’s holding both my arms and it feels wonderful, but God do I want Johnny. “She can’t help it,” Brian tells him. I smile. Brian loves me. I would never eat Brian. He’s too good. Brian, Brian, Brian. The needle pricks and I fall sleepy into his grasp and the last I remember is fading away with my head burrowed into his shoulder and him stroking my hair whispering “baby.”

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I dream of when we met. I found the circus by smell. So many people and I wanted them all. I was outside, tugging at the stakes when the tent boys grabbed me, three of them, but tent boys are not nearly as big as stagehands. Two of them were dead by the time Brian head the noises. He smelled like tiger. That’s what Burke used to make him do before he found me.

It took weeks for Brian to train me. Domestication, he called me. He kept me tied at first, but the better I behave, the more I did what he asked, he let loose at night. He didn’t tell Burke. At the end, he would let me curl up next to sleep, and he would stroke my hair. He told me how he’d never felt this with anything. He thought he had known his tiger, but he hadn’t. I was wild, but I had a soul, he told me. I was the only creature in the world like that and that was why men would love me.

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I wake up in my outfit. I’m strapped together with bits of leather and chain and my breasts are pushed up and you can see my muscles and how they ripple when I move. Brian is standing behind me and he has his arms loosely around my waist. He’s whispering in my ear.

“See him, Baby? See him?” He points through the slit in the curtain out into the ring and straight across to the VIP box. Sitting there is a man in a suit. His face is sweaty. He’s starting to regret this. I know him. I’ve seen him. He used to go to Tina and Sheryl and then when they seemed too nice he went to Katie and now he’s bored of them and he’s come to me. Jane says they’re sad, the men who follow us around from city to city. That’s what she says when she puts my lipstick on. I don’t think they’re sad. I think they’re fun. I’m going to have fun.

I turn and face Brian. “You bet I see him,” I say and trail my tongue lightly from his chin to his ear. “What are they giving me tonight?” I whisper.

Brian smiles. “Snake,” he says.

I grin widely. “You know I like snake,” I say.

He nods. “I know. And you’ve been a good girl, so you deserve it.”

“Have I?” I ask, letting my hands roam down his chest.

“Yes,” he tells me.

I reach my hand around his neck and pull his lips to mine but before I make contact he gently pushes me away. “That’s not me for me, Baby. Save that for him.”

“Later?” I ask.

“Not like that,” he says.

I sigh. “I know.”

He smiles and strokes my hair. “It’s your turn,” he whispers, pointing back out to the VIP. “Have fun.”

I smile at him and run my tongue over my teeth. “Always.”

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By the time I leave the ring, I’m stained with blood. The man in the suit is white-faced with fear and yet completely satisfied. One of the tent boys looks nauseas. They usually aren’t allowed to watch.

I look back and see the stagehands picking up the remains of the snake.

I walk up to Brian. He looks as divine as ever in the shadows. I touch him lightly. “I’m still hungry, you know,” I say to him, looking him in the eyes, wanting to burn him with my gaze.

He smiles ruefully. “Not tonight, Baby,” he says and I see that he’s tricked me again. The stagehands are behind me and they’re grabbing my arms and legs and wrestling me to the ground and tying my wrists and then they push me back into the cage.

“******** you! ******** you b*****d!” I yell as I kick and break and collapse exhausted.

I only apologize as I fall asleep, when he’s too far away to hear me. But I mean it.

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Brian grabs Johnny and points to the VIP booth. “Go clean that s**t up.”

“What?” Johnny says. “You can’t clean up the happy ending of your own act?”

Brian glares at him.

“Ha! Too jealous,” Johnny says.

“Just do it a*****e,” he replies and turns away.

Brian pushes back the curtains of the ringmaster’s room and sits down in front of the makeshift desk.

Mr. Burke leans back in his chair. “We made two thousand tonight,” he says. “Five hundred from the VIP.”

Brian smiles. “I told you she’d be worth it. I mean, a girl who rips things to shreds while she ********. Who wouldn’t want that?”

“Of course. And yet in addition to the five hundred we took in, we spent more than six hundred on , tranquilizers, bribes to keep the tent boys from telling the cops she ate two of their friends, and a ******** snake for her to eat.” Burke pauses. “We have a problem here Brian.”

Brian sits up.

“I took her in on a trial basis, and I’ll admit, it was lucrative at first, but when it comes down to it, she’s still a hot chick who ate some people.” Burke kicks his legs up onto the desk.

“Please, Burke,” Brian says. “She’s been with us a year? Doesn’t that make her one of us?”

“I don’t negotiate,” Burke says. “And I don’t give warnings or advance notice. Have her gone by the morning.”

“Her?” Brian says. “Not both of us?”

“Of course not. I have no problem with you. You’ll make a great stagehand. I just need her off my hands.”

Brian pauses then nods.

“There won’t be a problem then?”

“No problem sir.”

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Brian wakes me, but I knew he was there already. I always know when Brian is there. He smells bloody.

“Baby,” he says, “Baby, I brought you something.”

It’s fresh beef. I sit up sleepily and yawn. “I don’t need that when I have you,” I tell him and reach for him through the bars.

“Fine,” he says, “That’s okay. You want to come out, Baby?”

My body tightens. “Do I get to play?” I ask.

“Always,” he tells me, and he unlocks the door.

I jump out and onto him, locking my legs and arms around and nuzzling my head against his shoulder, sleep still pervading half my brain.

“I love you, Brian,” I tell him.

“I love you, too, Baby,” he says.

He feels my heart racing against his chest, easily twice as fast as any other human’s. He feels the trust in my grasp. And suddenly his hands are entwined in my hair and his lips are against mine and long seconds pass before Brian pulls away.

“You kept your promise,” I whisper.

“Of course, I did, Baby,” Brian says. “Now close your eyes.”

“Why?” I ask.

“Just trust me Baby.”

Reliving the feel of his lips on mine, I do and I feel him put me down and hold me from behind like he always does before I go into the ring and I like always, I feel calm, like I never can with anyone else.

I know it’s coming and I don’t fight it. Brian doesn’t hesitate, he just reaches around and pulls the switchblade from his back pocket, triggers the knife, and draws it across my throat. I wonder if he’ll cry after he does it, or if he’ll lick up my blood the way I would if I were killing him.
Username: Zombie Custard
Title: The Good Life
Word Count: 1,207
Additional Information: Light Sexual Themes
Cool contest! I wasn't sure about it, but I decided to think on it since you've issues such a fine challenge and came up with something. It doesn't have much of a plot, but it's what came to mind with the prompt.
I appreciate the fact that you're giving feedback, which I am eager to hear seeing as I generally dislike first person and don't use it (Please give specific feedback on that!). Again, it was what came to mind with this, so I went with it. Thanks ahead of time for that!

I leaned forward and tipped my hat, conscious to keep myself steady. The end of the act was the only time I ever had to think. The rest was taken care of. It wasn’t as though I could perform sober, after all. With one look at those pointed teeth, I would piss my pants, even knowing fully well that all I needed to be In full control was to stay relaxed. I was alright with doing it the easy way, though. I didn’t want to be stupid and think I was invincible. I liked to think myself smart and losing my head was the last thing I was going to do in my line of work.

This wasn’t to say I was displeased with my work, however hard I had to think about it—and I did have to think especially hard while under the influence. It was tough to say what I would honestly have thought had I not gotten an in at a young age, because I didn’t think most people would have believed the things I’d seen. Most people had an image of grunge and horror. There was plenty of that, if that was all you paid attention to, but after a while, it wasn’t so bad and you got to see the incredible in the whole thing.

I’d gotten the idea that the people in law enforcement and the major criminals were one in the same, mentally, in that a good cop could be a good criminal and a good criminal could be a good cop. The cops I’d talked to didn’t see it that way, although I hadn’t asked any since I was a dumb kid. They would spout their generic lines about bad and good, but I always wondered if they thought about it more than they let on. I’d asked a few of the performers with mixed results. Some just laughed, but most of them saw where I was coming from, regardless of the way it sounded. Maybe that was the problem: officers of the law weren’t taught to think too much into things because then they might question, but that kept them from reaching full efficiency.

When I mentioned there being a problem, I meant that. When I was a kid, it was just a funny thought, and I guess I was laughing too, but after a while, you’d start to see that tracking down the big guys wasn’t as hard as it should have been. That was what our entire business was built upon, and business was booming. I would still have said we were on the smarter end of it: we didn’t deal with the commoners; that was the dirty work. We dropped “the stuff” off with the people that wanted it, in bulk, and we were done with it, hands washed of the ordeal without care of what happened next.

A few people had wondered about us, but it was amazing what you could get away with when you pranced around in old-fashioned clothing, a leather cowboy hat, or striped overalls and nobody took you seriously. I’d started to wonder in idle time what else I could do, how far I could push it, but I wasn’t going to ruin something good.

We did get bored though, so we didn’t close up the show for good once it was over. Travelling was fun ‘cause you got to meet people, shake hands, sometimes wake up next to a warm body, and then you got to leave it all behind and make your next set of acquaintances. Besides, being closed-off made everything look that much more suspicious. After the show was over, we’d set up and have a party, anyone who wished to welcome to stick around if they had nothing better to do.

That was another one of those beautiful things that I got to experience in the business, although others to varying degrees I was sure, seeing as the little kiddies stuffing their heads into the popcorn bag cheered for me the loudest. I always came out a little late, it was more dramatic that way. With my costume still on, I’d make a casual entrance and start talking to people. They would treat me like a celebrity. Fancy that! You play with a few lions in a cheesy little circus show and people think you’re something special. I didn’t mind the attention. If someone annoyed me, I could politely move on to the next person. People were so easy to handle.

As the lot began to clear, I asked the girl beside me if she wanted a tour of the personnel area. I knew she wouldn’t understand what I meant until after she accepted; she’d had a bit too many of our complimentary drinks. I could see the light go off in her head, but feigned ignorance and she didn’t say anything. I decided to give her a real tour, explaining a bit about how circuses worked without going into detail she’d never comprehend. She visibly relaxed, making comments about how beautiful and intricate the costumes were. I smiled in return. My dressing room was at the very end, and I took her in without announcing it. I locked the door before throwing off my jacket and hat. “So what did you think?”

“It was fun,” she said in a hurry, the joy sucked right out of her eyes. I could tell what coming next as she turned towards me, hands stiff at her sides. “It’s getting late, I should probably head home.”

I made a calm movement to shield the door from her. “Are you sure? You’re a little tipsy. I hope you didn’t drive.” I could see the gears churning in her mind as she tried to think of a response. Before she could, I said, “If you need to, you can take a break here. Nobody will mind.”

With a slight nod, she seated herself on my bed and stared at the floor, after which I busied myself getting rid of my stage makeup. “You’re a nice girl, Jessica. I think you should move to the country with your dad. It’s not as busy as the city, but fun is where you look for it. Besides, it’ll be hard to support yourself alone. Rent isn’t getting any cheaper.” With all of my sillier things on the table, I went to sit next to her.

She gave a hesitant smile. “I think you’re right. I just need to stop seeing it as a sacrifice and we’ll all be happier that way… Thank you.”

“I’m glad I could help,” I said in a hushed voice. She didn’t object when I pulled her into a kiss.

I lay beside her, caressing the soft curves of her body. She wouldn’t look at me. I didn’t care. Removing my lips from her neck, I sat up and began to dress, throwing a wad of her clothing at her so she would follow. “It’s later than I thought. You should get home while it’s still dark. I’ll call you a cab if you want.” Once we were both dressed, I took a few bills from my drawer and stuffed it into her top. “Sorry about the torn shirt.”

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Time to just shut up and write!! i wounder what my evil mind will come up with this theme. Love it by the way!!!!

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It's just a start, but I figure that if I get at least this up then I'm committed to it wink

Username: Lahrette
Title: Cirque des voleurs
Word Count: No idea yet, you shouldn't have to clear your schedule for the week for it though razz
Additional Information: I'd like to put this up on my blog if that's okay smile

I stood at the wings, watching the performers onstage. It was ridiculous, but necessarily all the same; it kept us above suspicion, and in our business above suspicion was where we needed to be. I turned at the sound of footsteps behind me.

"Ma chérie, you're ready?" Raymond asked from the archway which led into the back. I nodded and followed him out, taking his arm once we got outside. I glanced back at the old building, where the festivities continued. We were one of the last of a dying breed - people just weren't interested in the circus anymore - and we were really only a front for our... less legal operations. That's not to say that we weren't genuine; most of our staff had no idea about what really went on behind the scenes.

We reached the Kia we kept in the car park, which was logistically a brilliant choice of car - small, cheap and inconspicuous - and got in. I grimaced at the smell of cheap plastic which wafted from the dashboard and the iron-tinted, salty odour from the boot. It was a necessary evil however. I buckled up as Raymond started the car and backed out.

The drive didn't take long - we chose our locations with distance in mind - and was quiet. We didn't like to talk while on a job. Raymond pulled up outside a well-kept cottage and I glanced quizically at him. He shrugged in reply. I didn't like this. It was too clean, the job illegal but easy and the pay high. I popped the door open and walked up to building, knocking on the door.

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A little inspiration for your entries- The Song and Dance Man.
...Okay, so it's not necessarily a circus, but the prompt for the contest reminded me of this!

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I'm loving all the entries for this contest. Now if only I got around to my entry... lol
Ohai der.

Username: Noprincessofpain
Title: Circus Hidden
Word Count: >8,000 (not finished yet. :<
Additional Information: Love this prompt, but would it be okay if I pm'd the story to you when I'm finished/ gave you a link to my journal? Like many others here, I'm very cautious about putting my work up on the interwebz unsupervised. There be plagiarists in them thar hills, y'know.

From the preface:


-What plagues the world? Sins of lust, greed, anger... is this what has thrown us into a damnation worse than Hell itself? Imagine; a circus, hidden within the boundaries of human flaw. Can you imagine?

You must imagine.

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Username: I Be Athena
Title: Familiar
Word Count: 1741
Additional Information: I loosely based the ringmaster and the actions of the circus off of the creepypasta character, Slender Man. That's basically where I got my inspiration for this story from.

October 12, 2000

The boy was so small that he could barely see the top of the brightly colored tent from out of his car window. But he could hear the sounds of a brass band playing, the occasional trumpet of an elephant’s trunk, and the constant chatter of the crowd. The circus. He was finally there. After months of begging his mother, she finally decided to take him. He had only heard of it through Tony, the mean, rich boy in his first-grade class, whose father had bought tickets for the show prior to when they would be coming to town. The motion of the car stopped, a car door slammed, and his mother opened the door on his side to undo the confusing straps and buckles on his car seat. She lifted him up, and carried him towards the traveling cirucs.

The amazing sight lay before him. A huge tent, striped yellow and red stuck up from the ground, with two smaller ones and a variety of booths and stands surrounding the entrances. Other people tailgated around, laughing and smiling brightly. The carts advertised popcorn and t-shirts and an assortment of knick-knacks. His mother set him down, and instead asked him to hold her hand as they walked through the bustling crowd.

He wanted to see the sights, play with all the toys in the carts, but his mother wouldn’t let him. First, they would have to buy tickets. He sat, momentarily bored, as his mother gave the ticket-man some bills in exchange for two bright card-like slips of paper. The ticket-man looked sad, and even more depressed when he glanced at the boy’s young, round face. It was almost as if he knew something was going to happen to him…

But he didn’t notice. By this time, he was whisked away toward the carts. Up close, they weren’t as fantastical as they were from afar. The cart-owners smelled of months without a bath, and had the same expression as the ticket seller. The stands themselves were dingy, and the toys dusty from years of neglect. Some of the other children found it to be a scary place. They no longer liked the circus, and cried until their parents would take them home.

But the boy still didn’t notice. His mother had just bought him a fluffy pink swirl of cotton candy from a shiny contraption that whirled round and round like a gentle hurricane. The sugar dissolving on his tongue was enough to keep him pre-occupied for the entire walk to the big-top tent.

They managed to get to their seats, somewhere in the middle of the rows and rows of wooden benches. The lights dimmed. Excited murmurs spread through the crowd. The show had begun. Spotlights shone around, spinning and spinning until they landed on a slender man in a pin-striped suit. His face was completely shrouded by an also pin-striped hat, except his mouth. The boy didn’t hear the words that the ringmaster threw at the crowd, he was so aroused by the aura of the carnival. The lights dimmed and a silly clown was seen climbing up a pole to a platform with a unicycle and some bowling pins sitting on top. He clambered on the unicycle, juggled the pins, and then proceeded to ride across a nearly-invisible wire to an identical platform. The clown left, and some beautiful girls fell from the ceiling, suspended only by colorful ribbons. One of them looked directly into his eyes and winked. He blushed. A pretty lady… liked him.

The show continued on for another forty-five minutes or so, the little boy full of glee the entire time. To him, people had done the impossible. They had breathed fire, eaten swords, done things that he could never imagine. By the time the boy and his mother had exited the tent, they were hungry for lunch. The boy was hopping around, excitedly pretending to breathe fire and twirl around. His mother pulled him over to a little niche nearby the big tent, and told him to not move from that spot, no matter what. And he would have, had something not caught his eye.

The lady, from before, was peeking out from a side-flap. She grinned and winked at him, then disappeared from sight. Was she asking for him to follow? He was confused. Should he go? Mother told him not to... but Mother also didn't let him climb the tree in the backyard or play with the boy down the street. The woman popped out again, and motioned for him to come closer. He turned around. Mother was nowhere in sight. He would come back soon, wouldn't he? She would never know, just... just this once. He took a step forward, and another one, and another one.

Soon he was inside. The lady wasn't there. It was dark, and he could see nothing. Something moved to his right. "H-hullo? Ribbon lady?" That something moved again, this time behind him. Without turning around, he called out again, "Is that you?" No response.

He began to turn around, but his head met something hard before he could see. The blow sent him reeling back. Another smash on the back of the head had him on the ground. He looked up, and before he passed out, saw the sillhouette of a very tall, very skinny man against the light of the outside world.

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The boy heard sounds coming from wherever he was. He could not see, for his eyes were closed, and felt too heavy to open. He felt that he was laying down on something soft. He heard a door open and close, two pairs of footsteps entering the room.

"Twice? You hit him twice?! Charlie, he's a kid, that could'a killed 'im!" a woman's voice said. A chair scooted out, and someone sat on some other flat surface.

"Don't worry about, I made sure that he's alive." A smooth, familiar voice cooed back.

"Still, he could be brain damaged o' somethin'." The boy wondered if they were talking about him.

"Doesn't matter. We need a cripple for one of our acts. A blind trapeze artist? Or maybe the deaf violinist that moves objects with his music?"

Someone sighed, probably the woman. "Still, I don' wanna hurt the kid. Plus, he's young enough that we don' have to wipe the memory."

"Hunh. Well, I think we're gonna go with the violinist."

The boy vaguely thought that he might be in trouble. He managed to open his eyes a tad. But what he saw made them fly open. He was laying on a loveseat in a messy trailer. The ringmaster and the pretty lady were there. But he could see the ringmaster's face, reflected in the mirror that he was using. His eyes were thin slits, almost nonexistant. As he removed the stage makeup, the boy could see that his face was horrendously scarred, his mouth full of pointed stubs of teeth. And his body, although slender before, seemed oddly stretched out, to the point that it was unnatural. The woman, too. She was perched on top of a seperate vanity than the one the ringmaster used. She was just as tall as him, but even smaller around the waist. Her face kept the same beauty it had before, but her eyes were completely black, and her fingernails long, and sharpened to a point.

The woman caught the boy's eye, and whispered something in the ringmaster's ear. The ringmaster stood up, grabbed an oddly shaped stick, and walked over to the boy. the boy made a whimpering noise. The ringmaster gently tapped the stick on the boy's forehead, and murmured something that he couldn't comprehend. The last glimpse the boy caught was of the ringmaster's disfigured face grimly standing over him.


October 12, 2011

The boy, or "Alvise Esposito" as the people around him would say, stood outside the big tent, waiting for the show to start. Pinstripe would tap him on the shoulder when it was time to go on. He saw others around the tent. Their parked cars sported coolers and televisions, a sight he rarely saw. Their mouths lifted up in joy, laughing at whatever someone else had said. He sat down, and looked up at the TV closest to him.

A nicely-dressed woman appeared on the screen, and began to mouth words he couldn't hear. He read the words on the bottom, hoping to get an idea of what she was talking about. 11 years since trajedy... Carson Wyatter missing... Mother still in tears... The text stopped, and a picture of a young boy flashed up on the television. There was something familiar about him, something that Alvise couldn't quite put his finger on. But then again, this entire place was familiar, which was odd, given the fact that the circus almost never visited the same place twice.

Still, eleven years, like the TV said. That was when everyone said his mother died doing trapeze work. He sighed, sad that she was gone, but glad that Ribbons was kind enough to take care of him, and teach him how to play the violin, which he held in his hand. Even though he couldn't hear it, the violin still brought him joy. It was special and could make objects fly, change a roaring lion into a fluffy kitten and back again. Again, another reason he was in the circus. He was special, like the others. He had all the qualities. Taller than normal people, more slender than the regular. Able to do wonderful things, far outside the mundane.

Alvise felt a tap on his shoulder. Pinstripe was behind him, motioning for him to come. Alvise nodded his head uncomfortably. He would never be able to get over how unnerving Pinstripe was, with his scarred face. Nevertheless, he followed. Nobody noticed his entrance. They were all bustling around, trying to get their acts in order. He figured he should go wait by Ribbons, so as not to miss his cue.

He waited, and waited, until he saw the lights dim onstage. This usually meant he would come on soon. Ribbons tapped him, then motioned for him to go. He grabbed the violin and stepped out, the spotlight following his every move.

As he played, he looked into the crowd. Things lifted and all were wowed. All but one woman, who looked on with loneliless and sadness. She was familiar... just like the boy on the screen. Oh, so familiar.

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Hello. I would love to enter, but I have too many other things that need to be written, and my mind keeps getting pulled back to Cirque Du Freak every time I try to think about something to write for this prompt.

However, though I won't be editing, I would love to help you judge. I love that you plan to critique everyone's work, but as a beta for a few of my friends, I know how much work it is reading, commenting, editing and such, so I thought that I would offer to give you a hand.
I would absolutely love to join, though I haven't started yet... I hope it's not too late to enter!

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I'mma try my best! Sounds interesting!

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Oh, this looks lovely.
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Username: Beautiful-Yet-Dangerous
Title: Masked and Murderous
Word Count: hehe. not sure, but a pretty decent amount.
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Masked and Murderous

Prologue

Shes Smart.

Shes Fun.

Shes a killer.

Nobody suspected poor, sweet, Elizabeth Henley, The Ringmaster's assistant. She will go and start the world on fire. No one ever thought she could do that...but the animals...the animals. The animals would get their vengeance.The animals would try to communicate. But would it work? Yes, Elizabeth Henley would rue the day she commited the horrific crime.

Chapter 1

Murderous


She sighed, but her breath fogged up the glass. She drew a stick figure then drew X's over its eyes, and laughed. A new life awaited her In Greenville. A life where she wasn't nagging of guilt, running away from previous crimes. Yes, she would be the Assistant. She would be a Sweet girl, and surely nobody would suspect her of anything. She would continue her goody-goody act for a while, but eventually she would completely turn the tables for them. Her life was a never-ending nightmare. And you couldn't wake up....No matter how hard you tried. She could still hear the eerie sirens. When she faintly saw a detective's badge thrust by a beefy, manicured hand into her face. But had those events really occured? She had no way of knowing for sure. "Two Stops to Greenville. I repeat, Two stops to Greenville." Said the train conductor, heavily. She had to remember this, or her whole devious plan would be ruined. She thrust her hand in her pocket, desperately searching for the key to her luggage. Her fingers struggled to find the rusty key. This was bad. This was real bad. That suitcase had evidence of crime in there. She couldn't leave the luggage. She just couldn't. Had she been stupid enough to leave the keys in her jacket at the gravesite back in Saugak? She rolled her eyes, and grunted. Then she remembered how Ted had taught her to pick a lock with a hair clip. She rustled the Bobby Pin out of her hair and fidgeted quickly, and quietly, hoping there were no witnesses. She breathed a sigh of relief as it popped open. She got her luggage ready, and sat tight. "Arriving in Greenville. I repeat, Arriving in Greenville." Grunted he train conductor. She was actually really nervous about this. What if the police finally caught up to her? What if someone from her past life recognized her? What if her twin found her....This was a hard thing to go through with.

Chapter 2

A new beginning

She prepared herself briskly, and stood up. All eyes were on her as she stepped off the train, and waited for the trailer to pick her up."I'm Here." she breathed, as if it were surreal. "I made it."she sighed a breath of relief. A loud screech made head's turn from blocks away.It was the circus trailer. there was a big mural on it, and it was brightly painted with Elephants, lions, tigers, and more doing countless breath-taking activities you couldn't imagine. There were names printed on the door. Pete, Sandy, Harry, and Cassa- the door opened, and a man with mud-crusted boots stepped out. He was wearing a circus hat that read Goofs Circus ~A safe environment for your entertainment. Ha! A safe environment? Hell no! Lions, tigers, and bears, oh my! Were in arms length of mauling you to pieces. And there you are, laughing and cheering. When, BOOM! your dead. But you just keep on laughing... Just keep on laughing. "Are you coming?"the man asked solemnly. "Yeah..."she said, not paying much attention, but stalking the mural. She stepped in slowly, careful to watch her step. "Welcome." the man grumbled. "And you are..?"she asked, smoothly. "None of your business!"he snapped. She stared wide-eyed."Umm..Umm....Nice to meet you..umm...None of your business."She said barely smirking, trying to brush it off.He just stood there, and didn't say anything. They came to a screeching halt. "Thar She is."said the man gruffly. It looked pretty bad actually. Dirt and fingerprints smeared the windows all over. I saw a face peer through a window and shuttered. He had a blue uniform on. Maybe a janitor? I guess I'll find out, she thought, shrugging.

Chapter 3


The Boy in chains

It looked like a run-down building, but was brushed up with some neon florescence's. The building read Goofs Circus And it's cheesy catch-phrase. It looked like no one had visited in years. "Right this way.."said the man. He led her into a hallway, and practically pushed her into a small, closed in room where another man sat, dressed in the Ringmaster's outfit. "You must be the ringmaster."She said cheerfully, trying to make a good impression. "Well, well, well. Aren't you the cheerful one? We could use some cheer around here."he said motioning around, glancing everywhere. "You must be my new assistant."he said staring at me. "Yeah!"I said. "I'm SO excited."I practically shouted. "Glad to hear it."The ringmaster said, smiling. "Your job will to be making sure everything goes smoothly, and nobody gets hurt."he said, quite seriously. I smirked, Yeah, that's kinda a major conflict..I thought sarcastically to myself. "Whats so funny, Miss Eliza?"The ringmaster said. "Well, actually.."I said, and tsked. "Well actually, I will call you what i want, Miss BETH."he said, cruelly. "OK." I squeaked. I started to walk out of the room, when i was interrupted."You'll be needing this."He said, handing me an hat with the words ELIZABETH~a proud employee of Goofs Circus, Were printed across it. It had a tassel hanging form the top, in red and yellow. I continued to walk out, exploring for myself. I peered into a room, there was a young man man wrapped in chains, practicing escaping for an act. "Could you hand me the key over there? I haven't quite mastered this yet."He said, nodding at me. "Oh. Yeah, sure."I said,pretending to blush. "i haven't seen you around before."he said, smiling. I handed him the key, smiling. "Yeah, Im kinda new here."I said, pretending to be shy. "Well, i have a tip for you.DO NOT touch the ringmasters hat.Your job will be in jeopardy."He said, actually seriously. "OK, Thanks."I said, rolling my eyes silently. He slipped off the chains, nodding to me in thanks. I nodded back. "Well, I'll Be leaving now."I said, walking out, my nose in the air. "Wait. We have a big performance tonight. If you haven't been told already, You are to give me the key in the 5th slot, second drawer, or I'll be history."He said. His job was to lock himself in chains, and try to free himself with a key in his mouth, all the while, he would be in water. If he failed to unlock himself, he would drown. "OK."I said. Perfect. All i have to do is take the wrong key, and he will die a horrible death. Too bad. He was the kind of guy my twin would of dated. Hear me? WOULD. "What is your name?"he asked solemnly. "Elizabeth. Or you can call me Beth."I said slowly. "Well, Beth , My name is Brian."He said, smiling. Ooo, he thinks hes so cool. Well, not for long...."Remember....Key is in the 5th slot, second drawer."He said, once again."Gotcha..."I said, looking confused. He looked so...so...so in paranoia. He probably thought I wouldn't remember it. Oh, But i would.Yes, I would...Stupid Boy. Stupid, Stupid, boy. So unsuspecting. Nobody would suspect sweet Elizabeth Henley for all these crimes...So well planned. It was perfect. "Perfect."I said aloud. The Janitor looked at me strangely. I walked away smirking at him. You know what? ******** Him! And i guess he was the janitor after all. Hmm. Interesting. Hardly.

Chapter 4

Good Girls Go Bad

"Attention, Please. Everyone Get you act setup, and get dressed.10 MINUTES."The Ringmaster shouted out of the speakers from overhead. I nodded to Brian, who looked very nervous wrapped in those chains, locked. Trapped. If anyone attempted murder, they would surely succeed in these conditions. "I'm Really Nervous."He said, shaking. That's What she said....."Yeah, I kinda noticed.."I said, rolling my eyes. As i glanced around the room i found tight walker's getting their wire ready, tightening the wire's. They walked away in a group and walked over to the platform. I loosened the wire, and cocked my head back in a grin,careful not to laugh to hard.That was Just for kicks. Sorry girls....But sometimes Good girls gotta go bad.I smiled at that phrase. It sounds dirty......I smiled to myself. I went back by the Animals cages to plan this whole scheme. That way nobody would catch me no matter what. I could see the whole room from all corners of my eyes. "FIVE MORE MINUTES EVERYONE."Said the Ringmaster from the overhead. It made me wonder where he was. I mean, his voice was up there. But where was he??? The animals looked at me in hatred. "WTF. Stop Stalking me."I shouted. But there looks just got meaner and meaner. Could animals even give mean looks....? Oh, God.. Im going crazy. Come to think of it, why did the first assistant quit anyway? Or had she quit at all? I shuddered. The animals were really creeping me out now. They absolutely loathed me. It was like they could read my mind......"Attention. Meet in room B75."The ringmaster said from overhead. I met up with brian. "Why are we meeting?"I whispered softly, actually meaning it. "Oh, we always welcome new members with our SPECIAL smoothie."He said, smiling. "Why are you going then? Your not new!"I said, acting strange. "Well, your the only NEW member. We will just come with you so your not lonely. And to make sure you drink every last drop, of course." He said staring blankly. "What...? So you force me to drink it?"I asked, stopped cold. "Haha,I was joking..."He said, smiling but then looked serious. I wasn't so sure....."Oh.." I said, my eyes widening by the second. Way to make you feel welcome... Shoving a smoothie down there throat. Nice. Brian quickly sped off. "Sorry."he breathed. What did he have to be sorry for? What? Oh no...This whole smoothie thing couldn't be good. Had someone seen me loosen those ropes? Should i run.......No, I decided.

Chapter 5

The tables are turned

I arrived slowly. Everyone was already sitting down in a chair. Me and Brian were last. "Sorry." I whispered. And i was. "Take a seat."The ringmaster said blankly. I pulled out a chair and sat down. "Guards." They chained me down to the chair, quickly. "What the..?"I said, panicking. "The animals have notified us that you have been up to no good."he said harshly. "AND YOU WILL PAY!" he shouted angrily. Everyone was quiet. I knew the animals were creepy...But they actually think? And talk? I had completely underestimated them. The ringmaster walked slowly over to me. Stomping cruelly at every step. There was no escape. This was it. The end. He shoved the smoothie into my hand, And tried to force me to drink it. But i pushed away. I kept my lips locked. That could be poisoned, and/or drugged. I wasn't going to budge for anything. "DRINK."he screamed at me. "I will get Pete and the others."He warned me. Pete... And the others? Who were they? I looked in confusion. He motioned to the animals. Oh. Then it hit me. Wait a second....Pete,Sandy,Harry, and Cassandra were names printed on the door of the circus trailer. Under the employee list. What the...What kind of sick minded people were they? "I see you have put the pieces together. Yes, its true. These animals WERE employees. I usually just turn our new employees into animals for no reason at all. But you have given me a reason. And, oh. Oh, you will pay."He said deviously. Someone, i don't know who, Grabbed my head from behind. And gave me a shot in my neck. I would go into further details.. But.. I'm..Getting. Sleepy. I dozed off. The last thing I saw was the beefy hand of the man giving me the shot. I woke up sharply. Where was I? I looked around, slowly. I saw Lions, Tigers, Bears, And more. Why was I in the cages? I'm no animal.I stopped cold...Or was I? I looked down slowly. There they were. I saw them. And it was true. I looked down at my two hooves. I was... A circus horse. I tried to scream help, but it came out "NNNEEEIGGGHHH."

This Was the circus's deep, dark secret. But I had discovered it too late. And now I was forever Masked And Murderous.

The End.

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Wow, I love how you put things together! I love the prompt and criteria. smile I'll attempt to enter this contest. I think it's worth while. I'm not sure if I'll get it done by the end date. I'll at least try and get a chapter done before the deadline though. Even after that I'm going to continue it too if it turns out as I think it will lol. My grammer isn't that great, but my spelling is decent. I have trouble with dialog, but your tip in dialog I'll give it a try. smile

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