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Hey other gaian peeps!!!
This is my first contest!!! I have entered contests like this before but I never made one. So lets get started with the rules!!!
1.Must be at least 1000 words.
2.It has to be creepy or disturbing. (I know that sounds really weird.)
3.No maximum of words it can have.(Although if it is like a 500 page story please alert me so I don't start hyperventilating at the amount of pages!!!)
4.No plagerism!!! (For people who don't know what that means no copying other peoples writing.)
5.Don't be rude!!! (I can't stand people who rank on other peoples writing!!!If you do it your writing will be eliminated from being an entry and even if it is really good I won't consider it for a prize!!!)

Ok now lets talk about prizes:
1st place:5000 gold
2nd place:1000 gold
3rd place:500 gold
4th place:4th amigo lucky pants
5th place:Honorable mention (Could be more than one.)
The end date is February 27th 2012.
Good Luck Peepsles!!!
can we submit a story that has already entered another contest?
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can we submit a story that has already entered another contest?

Yeah sure as long as it meets the rules and stuff above!!!
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I'd like to join this... biggrin

Do we send the story to you or do we post it here?
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GothicAnimePrincess96
I'd like to join this... biggrin

Do we send the story to you or do we post it here?

Either is fine. 3nodding
Sallina’s story
“I can’t find your sister Sally. Where did she go?”
“Oh don’t’ worry about it mother. You just sit back and relax. She’s never coming home.”
“What?”
“You heard me mother. You’ll never see her again. But I will, one last time.” And with that, Andrea left the house, leaving her mother worried and confused.
Coral couldn’t see clearly. She thought she would have a heart attack. Her fingers trembled as she picked up the newspaper, adjusted her glasses so she can read properly, and stared. Her daughter Andrea left the house two days ago, and was now printed that she was dead. Murdered.
Gone.
What was going on? Where did her daughter go that night? Where did both daughters go? They both left the house, one claiming her sister would not come back, but the other is now dead. What was Andrea hiding from her? Something that caused death…..Coral could feel her heart beating fast. She was all alone now, without a husband or children. They’ve all disappeared or were found dead. Coral suddenly had a frightening thought…was she next? Would she be dead soon? Is her life in danger? She couldn’t imagine….
Tears start to roll down Coral’s face. Her daughters were hiding something, and they never told her. One way to find out. Coral got up and ran upstairs to Andrea’s room, and begun her search. She didn’t know however, how dangerous these secrets were. She opened up Andrea’s top desk drawer, and gasped. A notebook, wrapped with ribbons tightly…Those secrets inside could kill her. They could steal her soul…..
SALLY’S STORIES.
“Sally.” A voice whispers to her ears, and Sally grew more scared. “I’m alone, I’m alone.” She said softly back to the voice, hoping it’ll go away. But the voice continued to breathe, louder and louder into her ears. “But I can’t leave Sally, no matter what you try to do. I can read you mind, I can steal your soul.” Sally shook her head. “I know you won’t take my soul. Or else you wouldn’t be here. My story is told and sealed with a ribbon. Anyone who visits me by this hollow tree either wants to die with me or take my burdens. I am protected by the ribbon seal.” Inside, her mind raced. She remembers also that someone would come for her, and it’ll be her sister. “I can’t return home again. I hope you’ll forgive me.” Sally told the voice, and the voice slithered away. Sally knew that the voice was just temptation of leaving the forest, something she can’t even do. “I can feel the night attacking.” Sally was speaking out of her mind. She concentrates her sight of the pond in front of her. It looked deep enough to cover her body, and so desperately does she want to jump in and drown. Sally started tearing up, remembering once again her sister was dead. Her twin sister...Andrea…is dead.
Andrea wasn’t killed though, as people had said. Andrea drowned, in the pool right in front of Sally now. She had tried to reach her sister from the other side, but failed. Sally was hoping Andrea would be the one who dies next to her here, but instead she drowned in the pond.
The pond was also deadly. And dark. Its sprit is moving silently. It has its own life, its own powers. At least, Sally should know this. Her story told her, her story could speak to her….Sally suddenly started to breathe hard. Now she realized why her sister had to die. The pond should know why at least…her sister must’ve said something that affects the flow of this story. “Be careful what you say, especially to mom.” Was Sally’s warning…and now Andrea must’ve broke it.
Halloween is here…just the time Sally had been waiting for. Each ribbon in her notebook…would increase her death painfully. She needed this, to repay for her father. She had murdered her father, and this is her consequence. Killing her father was an accident, but keeping it from her mother was not. She had managed to hide evidence and trouble from her mother and everyone because of the ribbon seals…her stories are protected.
Sally knew that her mother would try to find out everything, by looking into Andrea’s and her room. But knowing her mother too well, the seals must stay tight. Or her mother would be in grave danger. Anything goes wrong or denies the story, would kill her. That was what happened to Andrea…a sudden death by a simple story….a story Sally had written herself. Now with that, Sally had one last thing to do:
Die.
She had to die. It was simple. She knew this would cause many grief to her mother, but she did kill her father and carried that burden ever since. Sally looked at the forest ahead of her, and then turned around to look at the hollow tree she had been hiding in for hours. The tree suddenly moved. Its hole had gotten bigger, and Sally’s heart thud. They were coming, her witnesses to see her death. Just as they would come at this time in her story. “Your stories are screaming our name.” whispered a voice, and Sally nodded. “Imagination. Yes, a strong will of death, yet I brought it to life.” She replied hastily. “It’s October, the day humans celebrate Halloween. I see you’ve locked yourself inside a forest for this. Doesn’t all this scare you one bit?”
Failure. False information. Sleeping alone.
Sally realized her stories were real, they come alive. They also cause death, locking your heart inside. She looked at the two creatures now. They had human bodies, but their faces were messed up. Their eyes were lopsided, and their smiles just made it creepier. Sally could see not eyeballs, and also she couldn’t break free from the horror they were piercing in her soul. “Darling, you’re forgiven. Sweetie, you can go home.” Sally shook her head. “In the end one day, I shall die anyway. But why with no purpose? Kill me, my love ones.” Sally reached into her dress pocket and pulled out a pocketknife, took the knife part out, and held it towards them. “Before I kill you.” She said sweetly. “You don’t’ know forgiveness?” One of them said. “You try to persuade us to kill you faster. It doesn’t work that way. Your death is yours alone. We witness.”
Isn’t something missing?
Sally knew what it was. Her love was fading away. She couldn’t concentrate anything but on her fate of dying. That was what she had worked on for weeks. “Even though I will die, I still can’t repay things.” Sally laughed bitterly. “I was always alone. Andrea was just my sister, nothing more. Why, twin sisters can’t resist but care what the other one is doing, can’t they?” The creatures looked at each other, then back at Sally. “We’re twins.” They replied smoothly. “Well, mark my words. I will stay missing. Whether I was at home or not.” The forest shook hearing those words, the winds blowing fiercely. Sally could see dark faces on the trees, hating her with all their might. Sally laughed once more, and the witnesses sat down by the hollow tree to watch.
Sally walked slowly to the pond, looking at it lovingly. It showed in her eyes, because it was where she’ll die. “I believe you’ll increase my pain, will you?” she bent down and smooth her fingers in the pond, and the pond shimmers its water towards her. “Don’t’ worry.” Sally felt like she was talking to her sister. “I’ll lie down by the grave with you. My grave-“ Sally pointed straight ahead at the empty spot, where trees weren’t planted at. “Will be right there. I shall die, and you creatures shall bury my body.” The creatures heard this, and nodded. “Go on.” They encouraged her. “Leave this broken world and slowly sink in. The pond will do the rest.
Doesn’t anyone know that your sister is suffering?
Doesn’t anyone care about feelings? It’s affecting your sister’s health,
I can’t handle your daughter. She’s scaring me!
Sally suddenly realized that ever since she had stepped in the pond, she was already halfway down. Her waist was covered with dark shimmering water, which seems to have its own evil soul. The forest lives, and she should know. “I lived such a misunderstanding life. But that’s okay. Smile and live on.” she whispered, and her neck soon was also covered with water. She looked up, and saw nothing but trees. She closed her eyes, thinking back towards her empty life.
“Sister.” Cried Andrea. “Don’t show me your writing ever again! You gave me nightmares!
“They’re only stories….”
“They’re REAL!”
Sally gave a low moan, and she went under. She could feel her body turn colder and colder, and soon her heart and soul was ice frozen. She couldn’t breathe, but she could think. As she closed her eyes to die, she could feel pain inside her body.
I’m coming Andrea. I’ll lie down beside you and search for you. We’re both dead now. When you died, I never felt sadness. My sadness is gone, my love is gone. My understanding is gone, my hope is gone. All which I stored in…
MY STORIES.
I could try this, but by "creepy and disturbing" are we allowed to do things like gore? Or is it just something that's unnerving?
I too am curious about if gore would acceptable. Not really sure how I ended up here, but I was bored and checking around gaia. Making a story sounds fun. Also, are these stories to be posted here or PM'd to you?
“Stick to the path,” they said. “Your punishment will be lighter if only you stick to the path.”

She could feel the fallen stalks of grain beneath her bare feet, scratching against well-worn calluses like the sliding edges of thin knives begging entry to her bloodstream.

It was cold in the fields at night. The moon was masked and silent. She followed the path by starlight, her breathing shallow and every step tentative, pressing against her skin like sharp stones. She strained to hear over her own startled heartbeat, searching desperately for a sound other than the rustle of chilled winds through bending walls of tall grain.

Her dress was too big around her torso, thin sleeves sliding down with every rocking, shivering step. The village only had one ceremonial outfit, and she had not yet shed the softness of childhood from her cheeks. A slip of a girl, she tremblingly raised a hand to pull the white sleeves back up on her thin shoulders.

It wasn’t fair.

They had caught her in the Down Caves. Dark and damp, the air heavy and fetid, the Caves stretched down into the earth like a maw, a gash, a small sampling of every terrible story she had ever been told of the Southlands. They said blood dribbled from the walls of the inner sanctum, running over runes that granted cryptic knowledge and power to the easily corrupted. They said that she had seen this knowledge, and now the gods were angry with her and she had to face the ritual punishment. They said that if she lived through the night she would be pure once more.

It wasn’t fair. She had been through the caves, searching desperately for the ghost of someone who had once meant the world to her. She told them she had seen nothing, no carvings or runes; only hard black rock, rough and damp with slime. They hadn’t believed her.

The path ran narrow in places, and the tall grain scratched against her arms. She winced each time, more out of the fear of discovery than pain. Bugs danced tight against her body, tiny mites and locusts alighting on her goosebumped skin.

Somewhere in this golden maze, dimmed by new moon and the distant bloody chants of priest and blacksmith and father and washerwoman (they gathered at the field’s edge; they dare not cross the line) her salvation prowled close to the ground, summoned from the earth itself like a loyal guard dog. To find this creature meant her escape. To be found, to be discovered by the other shapeless horror that traced thin passageways through the swaying grain and flash-fire starlight, meant her death.

A simple game, passed down through the epochs like culture sitting reverent on sacrificial altar tops.

Something behind her rustled.

She startled, taking off pell-mell and all that mattered was that she escaped, that whatever behemoth prowled unseen through the dark never found and caught and decimated her, claws tickling like dry grain on her bare ankles, reaching and clenching shut tight –

She careened through the walls of grain, pushing through each yielding stalk to force her way forward when she could no longer see the path through the red flash of her panic.

The stars went out.

She let out an exhausted sob, just one, when she saw what she had done; by leaving the path she had allowed the spell to close around her and now she was surrounded by nothing but pitch black and silence, pressing down around her where the gentle waves of the wind had once been. She still felt the grain tickling up against her skin, pressing around and between the folds of her dress. Her eyes moved frantically in her head, harsh breathing uncontrollable, straining to see anything, anything at all, and oh god she was going to die –

Mother!

She focused on the memory of soothing shushes when bad dreams took her, the crackle of an old voice, the thick and solemn beauty of her mother’s arms. She fought, then, tooth and nail to regain control over her own breath, and clutched the nearest stalk of grain tightly.

They had made wax candles together, once, using the blubber brought back by the whalers in autumn.

She had not found her mother’s ghost in the Caves. There was no candlelight here. She could feel the itchy, insistent trail of bugs climbing her skin.

She sank to the ground slowly, freezing every time her ankles cracked beneath her. Nothing moved. The silence threatened to suffocate her until all she wanted was to scream and break the spell and die already, call the demon to her and let it be done.

If she wanted to survive, she had to shrink herself down, curl in on herself until she was as small of a target as possible, and wait. The field was not large. Both the Dog she was supposed to find and the Creature that was meant to find her couldn’t be far.

The question, of course, was how she would tell the difference. It would be her choice, in the end, whether to attack or retreat. A literal shot in the dark.

She didn’t know how long she crouched, legs throbbing in stiff pain, breathing as shallow as she dared make it. Her fingers pressed lightly against chilled dirt and pebbles. She could not move for risk of disturbing the grain, so she chose to let the fluttering insect masses alight on her face, her arms, her eyelids.

Something breathed against the back of her neck, drawn out and rasping like ancient ruins.

She turned and lunged in one fluid movement, hands out, ready to bite and claw at whatever waited for her in the dark.

Instead she fell to the ground, sending jolts of pain up her legs. Her hands only touched empty air.

Teeth, cold and hard as marble, traced her shoulder blade.

Wrong guess.

She screamed, broad and bright and shredding into the silence like sacrificial knives, and twisted beneath her attacker, kicking out at something solid and invisible in the dark dark dark –

A wave of hot air hit her face, the smell of crypts and rotting animal corpses in the murk of the riverbank.

A rumbling, earthen voice imitating human language pounded into her head from some intangible realm, and she screamed and screamed.



The villagers waiting at the edge of the field were silent, their chants long since faded into the hollow midnight air. The girl would live or die without their influence now, and they watched with stony faces the impenetrable dense darkness, rising up in an unnatural bubble to cover every inch of grain and hide the stars from the field below.

When they heard the scream, none of them so much as twitched. When the dark deep voice of the earth rose up and stirred the grass like claiming some dead thing, when abandoned insect exoskeletons rose up and buzzed between their clothes and towards the sky, when the darkness parted and faded and left only an ordinary field of grain in its wake, they were silent.

When a pale, slender foot broke the grain and the girl stepped back into the open air, dressed ripped and muddied and a queer smile on her face, they had forgotten how to move.

When she stepped forward and trailed shadows behind her like whips of leather and rancid meat, when dead bugs swarmed around her and alighted in ancient nests like tombs in her long hair, they had forgotten how to run.

“I went down to the caves,” she said, in a soft voice like singing. Her arms hung uselessly at her side, and the reanimated body of a dragonfly alighted on one short finger. “I went down to the caves and do you know what I found?”

She tilted her head and smiled wider, allowing them all to see the dark blood shining on her teeth. The shadows stretched behind her like the carcass of some great conquered beast, leaving stains on the grass.

“Oh Mother, I lied about not seeing the poor, pretty runes.”
Running through the abandoned town for his life, John only knew that he needed to hide. He ran past the abandoned clay like houses in silent panic. Blood dripped from his nose and down his face, his hair was soaked with blood and sweat, his tattered clothing was in the same condition. His pasty skin even paler in the moonlight and from his pure terror of what is to come. His brown blood shot eyes darted all around the main street, looking for a place to hide.
The houses where made of light tan colored clay, cracked and weathered away from age. Dark alley ways in between each house, ladders leading to the top, open and broken doors all so tempting as he ran by. John looked over his shoulder to see if he was still behind him, tripping over his own feet while doing such. He scrambled back up and ran into the house at the very edge of the town.
The door was half broken off its hinges but he managed to creep inside without making a sound. It was a small two story house, with a winding stare case in a door like frame, looking like a door had once hidden the stares from the unsuspecting eye, a few dusty boxes lay on the floor, an old wooden chair in the corner, two stacked wooden crates by the door and a small window with torn white lace curtains. Spiders had made the corners their home and rats had done the same to the walls. John had been in worse homes.
He sat behind the wood crates hiding, hoping he would not find him. John pulled his legs closer and wrapped his arms around his legs. He was still shaking from the fear and death he encountered when his boat crashed to the shores of this island. All those men on the ship…they died…all but him. It is ironic because the sea monster was after him in the first place. It was becoming clear he could not hide forever. You can only out run Death so many times before your luck runs out, he had a gut feeling his times of running where up. John had not seen Death sense he was a small boy; it was not a reunion he was looking forward to.
John sat there in his corner for over an hour, he had started to think Death would not come, but as that thought crossed his mind, the air was filled with a fowl odder. The scent of a thousand rotting corpses filled the air; it could be compared to the scent of twenty dead skunks and a hundred rotten eggs mixed into one. He covered his nose, and started to panic, Death had arrived. He had to think fast, stay here and be killed quick, or run and be killed slowly but have his life be a few seconds longer? He waited. John watched the window. It wasn’t long before a figure slowly passes by the window, he held his breath again. The figure stopped half way past the window. John froze with fear. The figure moved on.
John slowly moved to the window to look and see if the coast was clear to move on to the next hiding place. As slowly and as quietly as he could he moved to the window. With a shaking hand he lifted the lace curtain and peered out. He looked up the street and saw no one. He sighed with relief and let the curtain drop. He turned around to leave but stopped and screamed at the sight of what he saw before him. Death was standing in his presence. “Hello John.” He said with a hiss in his voice.
Cloaked in black fog, his skin was paler than paper or freshly fallen snow, almost transparent. His hair was wet and stuck to his forehead, his nails so long they seemed to be claws. His crimson red blood shot eyes seemed to glow in the darkness of the night. His smile was filled with many teeth, or one could call them razor blades. His forked tong acted as a snake’s and his lips, covered in blood. I watched the fresh blood drip from his mouth to the floor, when it hit the cold concrete floor it sizzled and acted as acid, leaving a small hole in the floor. “Isss thisss how you greet sssomeone? Ssstaring at them in fear? Didn’t dear mum teach you better manorsss?” he said, his voice like silk with a hint of venom.
“Don’t you dare speak of mum?” John hissed back at Death.
“Touchy aren’t we?” he said with a small smirk. John briefly wondered how he could even speak with all the “teeth” in his mouth. “Come now, is this how you greet your brother after all these years?”
“I have no brother!” John yelled at the monster.
“John, I am hurt.” Death said frowning and putting his hand over where his heart should be.
“You haven’t been my little brother sense you sold your soul to become…that!” he said referring to the morbid make-over. Death chuckled.
“Ah, ssso you reject me now just asss father did?” He said looking out the window letting his mind be filled with the memories of his once human life.

“Father! Father! Look!” Jimmy said running up to his father. His father chuckled and picked the small boy up.
“What is it boy?” he said with a jolly smile on his face.
“Look!” the boy said holding out his arm to reveal a pentagram cut deep into the small boys arm. The father gasped and dropped Jimmy, letting him fall to the dirt and backed away in fear. “Father?” Jimmy said looking up at his father with tears running down his small face. His mother came running out of the small wood cabin wiping her hands on her apron.
“What in the world is going on out here?” she said looking at her husband. “Jimmy!” she said about to run to her son’s side.
“No! The boy is damned!” the father said holding his wife protectively in his arms. John ran out from behind the house to see what was going on. “John! Stay back! That, that, THING is damned!” he said pointing to John’s little brother as his wife cried on his shoulder.
“Jimmy?” john whispered.
“John! I, I didn’t mean to!” he screamed with tears running down his face. “There, there was a man! He grabbed me and took me deeper in the woods! He, he cut my arm! There was nothing I could do! John! Help me!” a man in a black cloak emerged from the dark trees and approached the broken family.
“I am here for what is mine.” The man hissed in a raspy old voice.
“Take that thing! It’s not welcome here!” the father yelled
“Tom!” his wife pleaded.
“Jane! He isn’t our son anymore!” Tom yelled at her. She didn’t say another word. She ran into the house with her hands over her face crying. “Take him.” Tom said turning to go back inside.
“Jimmy…” John whispered with tears running down his face. “I love you, you will always be my little brother.” He said before he turned to join what was left of his family inside. Once the door to the small cabin was closed the last thing you heard was a little boy screaming and felt a burst of heat, Jimmy and the man where gone.

“You killed them both! You monster!” John screamed at the beast that once was called Jimmy. Death looked down at the floor.
“I wasss not hoping this would go thisss way.” He whispered. “No matter. Weather thisss goesss pleasssent or not, I am here becaussse it isss your time John.” He said looking back at his older brother.
“No, NO!” John screamed.
“Yesss.” Death said simply. With the speed of light Death was holding John in such a way there was no hope of his struggling his way out. “Say hello to mother and father for me please.” Jimmy said. He didn’t give John time to respond before he bit into his neck and sucked the life out of John. Death laid his beloved brother on the floor and stood over him, watching the blood run out of the open scar. After a few minutes of watching his brother’s lifeless body Death turned, exited the house and started in the direction of the next clueless mortal who thought they could out run Death.
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It was dark and quiet. The atmosphere was one of dread and fear and I could almost feel it radiating off the walls and into my skin. My throat constricted painfully due to the lack of fresh air and my eyes started to water from being opened for so long. The door opened and I made sure not to move according to master’s orders.

“Rise and shine dear! It’s a brand new day!” His joyful voice rang throughout the air and I started to feel nauseous. “Oh silly me, I forgot to release you!” A demented chuckle sounded before I felt my arms dropping from their suspended position and I resisted the urge to rub my wrists where the silver cuffs were moments ago. I felt cold fingers on my wrist and suddenly I was out of the morbid closet and into the dim hallway where other members of the group were standing and/or stretching.

“Let’s get to make-up!!” He announced and everyone stopped what they were doing to find their way to make-up so he wouldn’t get angrier. I felt a set of warm fingers on my other wrist trying to pull me back and my eyes widened realizing one person’s brave attempt at saving my life. He suddenly stopped before turning around quickly and his eyes narrowed at the person at my side. My left side suddenly became very hot and tried not to wince as I felt the person’s burning fingers on my wrist. He turned to me and I stood there waiting for his command. He grinned before caressing my face and I made sure not to move and having to suffer the same kind of fate as the poor burning person next to me whose fingers probably left a burn mark on my wrist.

“So fragile and perfect.” He murmured and his hands went to my hair before he blinked quickly in surprise. “What the hell is this?!” He asked angrily and I stared at the red strands in his hands worriedly. “They dyed it.” I whispered and he clenched his jaw tightly before pulling me along the hallway to where the costume, hair and make-up departments were. “She was perfect before. So very perfect.” He muttered to himself and I used this opportunity to blink; not knowing when I’ll get another chance to do so.

An hour later and almost all the members were on stage warming up and the stage hands were running around making sure that everything was perfect. I stared at the regular routine through the space in the designer’s room, making sure that he couldn’t see that I wasn’t looking at the designed spot on the wall. A familiar macabre tune filled the air and I stayed still as a silver tiara was placed on my head and the hairdresser was behind me, curling my newly dyed black locks. The make-up artist was putting on silver eyeshadow on my eyes and I hoped that she didn’t fall off the chair that she was using for a ladder. A small red haired girl suddenly ran into the room and the three tanned girls stopped their jobs before the costume designer helped me off the pedestal. I stared at myself in the mirror and a small girl with a pair of azure eyes stared back at me. The small white corseted tutu dress, black curls, porcelain skin and light makeup made me look more like a doll than I thought was possible. “Perfect!!” His voice snapped me out of my reverie before a pair of gloved hands picked me up bridal style and I made sure not to move acting like the puppet people thought I was.

The performance was in full swing and the theatre was even more packed than usual. I guess everyone came to see the demonic magician and his dancing group of puppets. I made sure not to mess up any of my pirouettes or grand-jetés like two of the other dancers who weren’t anywhere to be seen for the past ten minutes. A small gasp reached my ears and I looked up from my position on the floor to see a blonde girl staring at us with horror. Her green eyes scanned the stage worriedly before they connected with mine and she gave me a small pitying smile. Well, at least one person knows that we’re not wooden puppets controlled by magic, but humans used for his sick amusement. I got up from my position before getting ready to do another run to start my grand-jeté when the sounds of scared screams sounded through the air. I looked up to see a beam on fire making its way towards me and I gasped loudly as it dropped onto my body. The sound of frantic screams reached my ears and I stared at the exit doors as the crowd and troupe members alike fought their way through them. The smell of burning flesh entered my nose and I bit my lip as I felt the pain associated with the smell. The blonde girl stared at me; her green eyes filling with tears and I smiled softly trying to tell her not to worry about me. A familiar dark haired nineteen year old demon appeared behind her and his blood red eyes didn’t hold the excited joy as they always did but sadness and pain. Maybe he really did care for me as he always said.

The pain on the lower half of my body became unbearable but I smiled happily despite it all. I was no longer forced to perform against my will, no longer forced to watch troupe members die, no longer forced to travel from place to place having no idea where I was going to be. I stared back at the blonde girl who was having a conversation with the dark haired demon and I frowned before knowing that she was going to take my place when I die. A strained breath escaped my lips and I closed my eyes, hoping that she was going to be able to take care of herself.
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I could try this, but by "creepy and disturbing" are we allowed to do things like gore? Or is it just something that's unnerving?

gore is cool. so is the other stuff!!!
1500 words, one hour. 2/24/2012

The End

“Cole, I need those reports by the end of the day.” Marcus trudged around the office spewing last minute orders before his meeting. “Donovan, make sure you’re here tomorrow by eight, we’ve got important make-up work to cover.”

Fridays were always hectic. I rolled my chair to each end of my office, organizing papers. “Boss,” I called, “ I can’t come in tomorrow. Can we make it Sunday?”

“That dog won’t hunt,” replied Marcus as he stepped through the door. “I need everyone with make-up to do here tomorrow. I’m not coming in Sunday to supervise one employee.” He left.

I sighed, then shrugged. What could I do? I gathered my things to leave, then went on my way.

Waiting at the elevator, as always, was agonizing. I felt like a child who took one hour bus rides home. I suppose it was in my nature to let large groups of people go before me. It was hardly out of kindness; I couldn’t stand being cooped up in an elevator with eleven other people.

It was fifteen minutes past the end of my shift before I was able to take the elevator with only two companions. One of them, a pudgy guy with pale skin and thick glasses, worked in the cubicle just outside of my office.

“TGIF, huh Bill?” He grinned at me an I nodded. “If only that applied to us.”

“Oh, you’ve got to come in tomorrow too, huh?”

“That’s right. Sucks, too. I had plans with my wife. How ‘bout you?” He asked.

“No plans, just hate comin’ in on Saturdays. At least it’s a half day, though.”

“ I hear that.” Ended the conversation, thankfully. I was starting to get uncomfortable talking to Jim, who I barely knew, in front of Lisa, the token “rasta-mama,” as Earl would call her, behind her back, of course. She had very dark skin and thin dreads.

Suddenly, as we were waiting to reach the ground floor, the elevator stopped. We each looked around, as if expecting to find the source of the trouble. The lights flickered out.

“What’s going on?” Jim said. Lisa remained quite, but her expression was fearful. She gripped the rail at the right side of the elevator and began breathing deeply.

“What’s wrong?” I asked her.

She frantically answered, “I’m claustrophobic! I can’t stand… being trapped in tight spaces…” She spoke between fits of breath.

“Do you hear a megaphone?” Jim asked. We stayed silent, and sure enough, there was the faint sound of a strong voice through a microphone. “Sound like an emergency! What could be goin’ on?”

“Relax,” I said. “It’s probably just a power outage. We’ll be fine. It’s not like anything’s gonna bring this building down.”

Just as we glanced at the ground in agreement, there was a crash. We were knocked to the floor, each of us expressing terror in our unique ways. I remained quiet, leant against the corner of the small dark space. Lisa let out a deafening screech, and thusly continued screaming. Jim looked horrified, whimpering and clasping his head, unsure of what to do, but unwilling to lose control.

After a couple of seconds, Lisa’s screaming subsided into whimpering similar to Jim’s.
“We need to calm down!” I asserted, though in truth I was no less terrified than either of them.

“What was that?” shouted Lisa. “What could that be? A plane? Oh God, I don’t want to die…” She hushed up in a fetal position in the corner across from me.

I stood. It was quiet. We heard sirens. “Listen. I don’t know what’s going on, but I’ve got a feeling we need to get out of here. Jim, I need you to help me get through the emergency hatch.”

“We’re at the third floor.” Jim said as he complied.

“I’m going to see if we can’t get out of the elevator from up here,” I said as I pulled myself the rest of the way through the emergency hatch. I looked up to see that about two floors above, a dim light shone through the elevator door. It was open.

“Alright, there’s a door open a little ways above. We can climb the ladder and get out of here.”

Another crash.

“Oh God! Oh no, God!!” Lisa screamed.

“Jim, help Lisa up here.” Jim pulled Lisa up from the floor and helped her to the emergency hatch. I took her hand and pulled her up. Her hands were moist and her cheeks soaked.

We heard a voice through a megaphone again, though we still couldn’t make out what it was saying.

“Lisa, help me get Jim up here. “ We both grabbed Jim’s hands and pulled as hard as we could, grunting. Finally he made it up, and each of us frantically lined up to climb the ladder. Lisa went first. Then I. “Hurry, we need to get out of here!”

Another crash, and a horrible screeching, followed by a blood-curdling scream. I didn’t want to look to see the horrified, screaming face of Jim as he plummeted to the Basement along with the elevator, which crashed at the bottom. Finally I turned to look down. Jim’s body was lying face-up on the elevator; I couldn’t tell if he was unconscious or not. For a split second I thought of going down to help him, but there were other, more pressing matters to attend to. Lisa screamed and climbed through the opening on the fifth floor. I glanced up and was shocked to see the next elevator falling. I couldn’t think; I just climbed as fast as I could. Lisa, with one jerk, pulled me clear into the nearby cubicle just before the elevator came crashing down on me.

We remained huddled in that cubicle for a good minute. I was so grateful for Lisa saving me that I couldn’t speak. Out of a mixture of fear and sorrow for Jim, I cried, as she did.

We could hear thunderous roaring from outside. We looked to see the windows smashed. The adjacent building was reduced to rubble. Surprisingly, we took little time to stare in amazement.

“We need to get out of here as soon as possible.”

We clamored for the stairs to find that, thankfully, they were intact. We looked up to see that such was not the case for the floor above.

“Amazing.” I said, and we began rushing down the stairs. I don’t know exactly how long it took us, but it felt like an hour. We gasped and rested for mere seconds as we reached the bottom. “Don’t stop now! Hurry!”

We exited the building, unharmed. We ran across the street to find a safe place, and found as we gazed wide-eyes around, that many buildings had toppled. We stood in the middle of the road, circling around in astonishment and fear. The Macy’s was demolished. The building with the Dunkin Donuts that I stopped by every morning was no more. The streets were blanketed with ash; the sky was filled with thick, dark smoke.

I was petrified. Lisa began making her way down the street. “Wait!” I called out. “I’m coming with you. You saved my life. Besides, there’s no one else around. We need to stick together.”

She nodded. I began following her as we looked for a space clear of smoke.

“There was no one left in the office building.” I said. “They must have evacuated while we were in the elevator.”

“Too bad no one cared enough to help us.” said Lisa.

“Well,” I said, “Well, maybe someone did. The elevator door was open, after all.”

We finally cam to a space clear of smoke about one mile south of the office. We stood where we could see clearly in front of us. The city seemed to have been reduced to a parking lot. What was more, a strange, gigantic figure appeared in the background. It was some sort of machine, white, and with the structure of a frog. It was stationary, but, having never seen anything of the like, we assumed it was responsible for all of the destruction.

“What do we do?” Lisa asked.

“I… I don’t know.”

As we stood for an extended period of time, we heard a succession of crashed coming from behind us. We turned around to run, but before we could get anywhere, a humongous chunk of metal smashed into the ground to the right of us, the force of it knowing us to the ground. Lisa began screaming uncontrollably as yet another, equally gigantic structure came down onto the ground on the other side of us. As Lisa screamed, a long robotic arm lunged from above us in the smoke, straight at her. It effortlessly ripped her from the ground, knocking her unconscious. As all of this was happening, a voice, as if from a megaphone, boomed:

“You are vermin and will be destroyed.” The hand that took Lisa instantly crushed her into nothing.

“You are a cancer, and will be removed.” Another arm, this one smaller, lunged at me and removed me from the ground. I struggled in a futile attempt to save myself.

“None will be spared. There will be no mercy.” The voice continued booming.

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Now here I am, locked between the vices of some alien war-machine. I am doomed. We are all doomed.

The End
I like the last one the best; the other stories are rather corny. lol
Vicky Nicky B
Hey other gaian peeps!!!
This is my first contest!!! I have entered contests like this before but I never made one. So lets get started with the rules!!!
1.Must be at least 1000 words.
2.It has to be creepy or disturbing. (I know that sounds really weird.)
3.No maximum of words it can have.(Although if it is like a 500 page story please alert me so I don't start hyperventilating at the amount of pages!!!)
4.No plagerism!!! (For people who don't know what that means no copying other peoples writing.)
5.Don't be rude!!! (I can't stand people who rank on other peoples writing!!!If you do it your writing will be eliminated from being an entry and even if it is really good I won't consider it for a prize!!!)

Ok now lets talk about prizes:
1st place:5000 gold
2nd place:1000 gold
3rd place:500 gold
4th place:4th amigo lucky pants
5th place:Honorable mention (Could be more than one.)
The end date is February 27th 2012.
Good Luck Peepsles!!!


I was hoping to get some feedback at best.

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