Right, okay, I'm back.
Several things:
Results
Both pieces were kind of heavy-handed. Frosted, there were a number of mechanical issues. Since that's a constant, do take advantage of editing, and - you're in school, right? - see if you can take a grammar and usage class. Yutora, you had some instances of passive voice, which worked with the structure but are in general a thing to be conscious of. Yutora wins - 3 points. 2 points to Frosted, and trades pending.
Restructuring!
I'm tired of having very few entries. So we're doing it this way: my contests will run until I have 5 entries. Once I have 5, it will run another week so that people can edit and new people can enter.
Prizes
The Gaia market has been changing, and gold is worth a lot less. So prizes are now going to be gold or items, and are subject to change based on suggestions, quality of work, and argumentation for what they should be. If no one argues, suggests, or blows me away, there will be a single first prize of 50k, just as a token.
Prompt
With GGW now over, we're open again for the new AGWL season! Your prompt is fake relationships. I want tropes! Fake dating, fake marriages, the necessity of being as coupley as possible to save the world or whatever. Go forth and write me delightful things.
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