What else [is Missing]/ [do you want to know] from my story?

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http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=102591409&mygntcid=2075111#title

Please have a look, see if anything is missing from the story so far. Soon the next chapter will be put up, but i would like any opinion, no matter how late it is. 3nodding Obviously the ending is missing, this is going to be a long Novel. xd

This is really just a improved draft of my original story. Please make sure you tell me if ANYTHING is good or bad. rolleyes

Thank you in advance! xx rofl