vote on my entery please

do you like tales with a twist?

yesh ( read on)	80.0%	[ 4 ]
no ( get a life)	0.0%	[ 0 ]
I don't know (make your mind up now or die!)	20.0%	[ 1 ]
Total Votes:			[ 5 ]

[ItsMax]

Herro everyone who is reading this letter, I was wondering if you could read, vote and maybe comment on my story. This is my description of it:
once there was a man who lived happily ever never after. The moral to this story, when you hear or see the truth, you have to face it, theres no turning back so, you might aswell get on with it!

this is the link:
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101029021#title

[ItsMax]

So people, what do you think of it? good? bad? inbetween?