This is for all of you. (Poem in WA--CW)

[ShalomTheStargazer]

The poem is called "DEDICATION" and it is, as stated, for everyone on Earth who lives their lives the best they can. See if you can spot yourself in any of the lines. ^_^ and if you need help with any of your poetry, I might not be the best writer, but I'm a pretty good reader and I'd be happy to help. Here it is: http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=102674211#title

[Kairi Nightingale]

Despite my lack of experience in poetry, I took a look at it anyway. sweatdrop

I really liked it, and I think it was written well. I liked your word choice and how you changed it up so that it wasn't repetitive. I didn't lose interest at all while reading it. However, I think in some instances, especially in the beginning where a bunch of ideas beginning with 'for' were stringed together, the commas should have been periods or semicolons.

I also think that it could flow better if you did change it to normal poetry formatting but that's just me. wink

Anyway, great job. I always admire someone who could write decent poetry.